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Hi there, First, I'd like to thanks Max Griffin and David S for their in-depth reviews on my Short Napoloenic battle story. Since then I have recieved some more reviews and have spent hours revising this story to make it perfect. I have used theasuares, dictoiranries, grammar online check, spell check( Which is mostly perfect by know) I would like a review on this once more by one of your members. This story is very perfect and more refined, I did follow those steps to remove the '' telling'' from the story, thanks David for those links. Here is the story:
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Re-review request · 05-08-12 11:04am
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