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Jun 7, 2012 at 6:32pm
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my actual entry. dont count the last one
by fin34
Brad
By fin34

Brad was what you might call a bully. He harrased the nerds in his class, talked back to the teachers, and almost always skipped class. He had horrible grades, but he really didn't care. He always had pleasure from bullying. He was one of the most popular kids in school. He had a Girlfriend named Kelly.

At least, that's what they heard about him after the day he disappeared.
No one was with him. They said he was walking home, took a shortcut through the woods, and was never seen again after that.

the person who said nothing to the police was Harry. Harry was a scrawny. He had amazing grades. But he kept to himself most of the time. he never talked to anyone. This was why he was chosen as a target to Brad.

Brad bullied Harry almost every day. he thretend him, beat him up, and was horrible to him. Finally, Brad got bored of that. He was leaving Harry alone for a couple months, when he had an amazing idea: he would go to Harry's house, knock him out, and carry him to the sewers and leave him there. The Plan was genius.

as soon as brad got home, he looked up Harry's house. he saw that he lived on Shutner Rd. Brad groaned. Shutner Rd was on the other side of town! it would take an hour to get there! then Brad Remembered something. one of his friends once told him that there was a shortcut to the other side of town. it was through Valled Wood. Brad decided to go that night.

Brad knew that Harry's parents were away for the weekend. he waited until about eleven pm to go. he started to walk through the woods. he started to remember a story that someone once told him. the Valled Family... were witches. they kept to themselves. they never talked to anyone. they lived in a house with broken windows, shatterd glass, and many dead trees.Legend says they punished people who tresspassed by turing them into woodland creatures. Brad knew this was a myth and continued on

Soon he got to Harry's house it badly needed renovation, as it had broken windows, shatterd glass, and many dead trees. he realized that this was the same description of the Valled House. He then rembered harry's last name: Voolard. It was too much of a coincidence. he started to run away. he looked back, and saw harry at the window looking. he then crashed into Kelly, His Girlfriend.

"Kelly? what are you doing here?"

"i Live around here." she said." it looks like you got cut when you fell. lets go to my house"
Brad agreed, and they went to kellys house.

When they got to kelly's house, brad was so tired, that he fell asleep on the couch.

When he woke up, it was daylight. he was not that aware, and he fell out of the tree.

TREE!!!

Brad quikly sat up. He saw that he was covered in fur, and had a very bushy tail. he was a squirrel.

He heard foot steps, and looked up and saw kelly.

"Ahh, There you are Brad"
Brad was confused. why wasn't kelly freaking out
"i'm gonna tell you a secret. it is my family that are the witches. We hunt down horrible men, pretend to fall in love with them, and then turn them into little animals. we spread the rumuor about the Valled Family ears ago to throw people off. and now, i have completed my Duties oce Again!!!!

The end

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 *Star* my actual entry. dont count the last one · 06-07-12 6:32pm
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