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reilly is readin shakespeare
"Reminiscence
Poetry [E]
Trying to find oneself in this world...
Created: 06-25-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 11-07-2009 at 4:07pm
Genres: Teen :: Inspirational :: Personal
Forum Post: scribblez63 - 1575005 - Reminiscence
On 08-03-2009 at 12:06pm : I would appreciate a review on this piece, which I've been trying to improve to the best of my abilities; open thoughts on what's good or bad are welcome. Thanks!






Clueless_Poet
"Shyann - The Little Duck
Short Story [E]
A lost little duck gets scared.
Created: 08-11-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 08-15-2009 at 11:47pm
Genres: Children's :: Contest Entry :: Animal
Forum Post: cluelesspoet - 1590389 - Shyann - The Little Duck
On 08-18-2009 at 7:54pm : Written for a short story contest with a word limit of 400 words.






JD Kell
"Lunch
Short Story [18+]
The disentegrating friendship between two women and their relationship with food
Created: 08-06-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 09-14-2009 at 3:12pm
Genres: Women's :: Friendship :: Other
Forum Post: jenkell - 1588878 - Lunch
On 08-21-2009 at 7:28pm : This piece is finished, and (hopefully) ready to be submitted for publication. I'm also trying to figure out where this fits in regards to the market. Literary, mainstream? chic lit? Any feedback would be much appreciated. Thanks. Jen






Kuku - Peaceful in Ramadan
"Jak-Jak
Novella [18+]
Jak-Jak story-hunter! What secrets will Jak-Jak uncover about the Republic of Muzrabadesh?
Created: 04-20-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 01-20-2010 at 2:54pm
Genres: Political :: Fantasy :: Drama
Forum Post: maram - 1551746 - Jak-Jak
On 08-23-2009 at 12:23pm : Almost a novella but not quite. I would love a thorough and constructive review.






JGonzalez: Taking March Off
"A Good Hot Meal
Short Story [18+]
"I bet you don’t have no spare change. Spent it all on them sweet shoes."
Created: 09-07-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 12-21-2009 at 10:29pm
Genres: Political :: Community :: Romance/Love
Forum Post: jgonzalez - 1598054 - A Good Hot Meal
On 09-08-2009 at 9:33pm : A story I worked on in my MFA program 8 years ago and just recently revised. Help me figure out what's missing.






SilvaShado - sick with flu :-(
"Can't Do it Without You (Revised)
Short Story [ASR]
I'm late for a very important date - hurry up, will ya?!
Created: 06-02-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 10-18-2009 at 3:00am
Genres: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: None
Forum Post: sarahreed - 1567097 - Can't Do it Without You (Revised)
On 09-11-2009 at 11:14am : I am looking for feedback on what works and what doesn't work for this piece. I want to polish it for submission somewhere. Thanks so much!






iwishiwaswalsh
"Invalid Item
Poetry [13+]
Does anyone pay attention to the sign?
Created: 10-12-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 10-31-2009 at 8:04pm
Genres: Other :: None :: None
Forum Post: iwishiwaswalsh - 1607778 - Do Not Feed The Imp
On 10-13-2009 at 9:47pm : Constructive reviews are appreciated. Thank you.






iwishiwaswalsh
"Invalid Item
Poetry [13+]
Be afraid, common good is hiding...
Created: 10-10-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 10-27-2009 at 8:56pm
Genres: Other :: None :: None
Forum Post: iwishiwaswalsh - 1607166 - Scratch
On 10-13-2009 at 9:55pm : What could make this better?






SilvaShado - sick with flu :-(
"Divine Inspiration
Short Story [13+]
Quotation Inspiration - October 2009.
Created: 10-12-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 11-27-2009 at 11:36am
Genres: Contest Entry :: Philosophy :: Inspirational
Forum Post: sarahreed - 1607843 - Divine Inspiration
On 10-14-2009 at 8:52pm : I'd like to know what works and what doesn't.






C. S. Manville
"The Adea Project - Prologue
Fiction [13+]
Adea was just a normal person living in a boring town, or so he thought... (Genre:Fantasy)
Created: 05-18-2009 *Bullet* Last Edited: 01-04-2010 at 1:31pm
Genres: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Teen
Forum Post: the_best_flash - 1561715 - The Adea Project - Prologue
On 01-04-2010 at 1:09pm : I have been rewriting this recently and need a second opinion. Most of my time was spent modifying the action sequence at the end and in particular I would like to know how it turned out. Suggestions on anything else would be appreciated as well. Thanks.




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