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reilly ~ nano'ing! View scribblez63's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: scribblez63 [Offline / Private]
"Reminiscence
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Trying to find oneself in this world...
Created: 06-25-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 11-07-2009 at 4:07pm
Genres: Teen :: Inspirational :: Personal
Forum Post: scribblez63 - 1575005 - Reminiscence
On 08-03-2009 at 12:06pm : I would appreciate a review on this piece, which I've been trying to improve to the best of my abilities; open thoughts on what's good or bad are welcome. Thanks!






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"Shyann - The Little Duck
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A lost little duck gets scared.
Created: 08-11-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 08-15-2009 at 11:47pm
Genres: Children's :: Contest Entry :: Animal
Forum Post: cluelesspoet - 1590389 - Shyann - The Little Duck
On 08-18-2009 at 7:54pm : Written for a short story contest with a word limit of 400 words.






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"Lunch
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The disentegrating friendship between two women and their relationship with food
Created: 08-06-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 09-14-2009 at 3:12pm
Genres: Women's :: Friendship :: Other
Forum Post: jenkell - 1588878 - Lunch
On 08-21-2009 at 7:28pm : This piece is finished, and (hopefully) ready to be submitted for publication. I'm also trying to figure out where this fits in regards to the market. Literary, mainstream? chic lit? Any feedback would be much appreciated. Thanks. Jen






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Jak-Jak story-hunter! What secrets will Jak-Jak uncover about the Republic of Muzrabadesh?
Created: 04-20-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 10-04-2009 at 5:55am
Genres: Political :: Fantasy :: Drama
Forum Post: maram - 1551746 - Jak-Jak
On 08-23-2009 at 12:23pm : Almost a novella but not quite. I would love a thorough and constructive review.






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"A Good Hot Meal
Short Story [18+]
"I bet you don’t have no spare change. Spent it all on them sweet shoes."
Created: 09-07-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 09-09-2009 at 2:00pm
Genres: Political :: Community :: Romance/Love
Forum Post: jgonzalez - 1598054 - A Good Hot Meal
On 09-08-2009 at 9:33pm : A story I worked on in my MFA program 8 years ago and just recently revised. Help me figure out what's missing.






Silva Shado: Go Blue NaNos Go! View sarahreed's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: sarahreed [Offline / Private]
"Can't Do it Without You (Revised)
Short Story [ASR]
I'm late for a very important date - hurry up, will ya?!
Created: 06-02-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 10-18-2009 at 3:00am
Genres: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: None
Forum Post: sarahreed - 1567097 - Can't Do it Without You (Revised)
On 09-11-2009 at 11:14am : I am looking for feedback on what works and what doesn't work for this piece. I want to polish it for submission somewhere. Thanks so much!






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"Sunrise Lesson Two
Assignment [E]
Applications on the Freytag's Pyramid model.
Created: 09-28-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 10-08-2009 at 3:18am
Genres: Teen :: Writing :: None
Forum Post: edblume - 1603288 - Sunrise Lesson Two
On 10-03-2009 at 7:14pm : The item is requiring some editing and I have no idea how to start it from. Constructive reviews are much needed and highly appreciated. Thanks.






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"Do Not Feed The Imp
Poetry [13+]
Does anyone pay attention to the sign?
Created: 10-12-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 10-31-2009 at 8:04pm
Genres: Other :: None :: None
Forum Post: iwishiwaswalsh - 1607778 - Do Not Feed The Imp
On 10-13-2009 at 9:47pm : Constructive reviews are appreciated. Thank you.






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"Scratch
Poetry [13+]
Be afraid, common good is hiding...
Created: 10-10-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 10-27-2009 at 8:56pm
Genres: Other :: None :: None
Forum Post: iwishiwaswalsh - 1607166 - Scratch
On 10-13-2009 at 9:55pm : What could make this better?






Silva Shado: Go Blue NaNos Go! View sarahreed's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: sarahreed [Offline / Private]
"Divine Inspiration
Short Story [ASR]
Quotation Inspiration - October 2009.
Created: 10-12-2009 Bullet Last Edited: 10-16-2009 at 4:53pm
Genres: Contest Entry :: Philosophy :: Inspirational
Forum Post: sarahreed - 1607843 - Divine Inspiration
On 10-14-2009 at 8:52pm : I'd like to know what works and what doesn't.




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