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"Magic Realized (5-9)"  Chapter [ASR]
1800165
Genres: Fantasy, Teen, Supernatural
*Bullet* story of two girls and their magic teachers, in an adventure. (some blood) ch 5-9 version
On 02-13-2012: this is just the updated version of my story, about two girls and their magic teacher trying to stay alive. Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"magic realized 10-13 in progress"  Chapter [ASR]
1841448
Genres: Fantasy, Teen, Supernatural
*Bullet* story of two girls and their magic teachers, in an adventure. (some blood) ch 10-13
On 02-13-2012: this is the currently working part of my story i would really love to receive reviews as I strive to make this story better and better everyday Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"A New Transformation For Frank"  Short Story [13+]
1838338
Genres: Fantasy, Romance/Love, Action/Adventure
*Bullet* Funny But You Have To Read It To The End, A Bum & Genie Meet & Develop A Strange Romance
On 02-25-2012: Would like feedback on new story of a man who learns words make you or break you and how words will transform his life. Reviewed by: Diane AWAY FOR A WHILE & Tiggy *CheckB*


"Here's Jefferrrrrrrrrrrrry! "  Short Story [18+]
1845559
Genres: Death, Dark, Horror/Scary
*Bullet* Police Mystery & A Bizarre Twist With A Supernatural Ending I Wish Was Real !
On 02-25-2012: Would like feed back on story about a police mystery that ends with a bizarre twist! I review for review. I just finished reviewing two people who reviewed my story I think that helps everyone. Reviewed by Tiggy *CheckB*


"The Burning City"  Short Story [13+]
1694202
Genres: Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Dark
*Bullet* Two young boys learn the truth about war. A dark fantasy short story. 2010.
On 02-25-2012: A dark fantasy short story (5,000 words). Two young boys learn the truth about war. Contains some violence and language. Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"That Little Old Man"  Short Story [13+]
1825371
Genres: History, Personal, Ghost
*Bullet* Memories...
On 02-26-2012: Just curious for some reviews and ratings. It's somewhat out of my norm... Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Tendrils From Heaven - Chapter 1"  Chapter [18+]
1800259
Genres: Sci-fi, Fantasy, None
*Bullet* An eerie hound follows Belan to work in this opening chapter.
On 03-13-2012: Chapter one of novel. Seeking feedback. Reviewed by: Nixie ~ broke hip in hosp & Tiggy *CheckB*


"Like Water on Fire"  Short Story [18+]
1816201
Genres: Supernatural, Mystery, Dark
*Bullet* When nightmares ended, she returned to the blessing of forgetfulness. (HM Classic Story)
On 03-14-2012: Please review my most recent short story. Much appreciated! Thank you! Reviewed by: Talera & Tiggy *CheckB*


"Beijing 6: Chapter 1- "  Chapter [E]
1820711
Genres: Sci-fi, Scientific, Technology
*Bullet* Captain Gilead takes command of the starship Traveler.
On 03-17-2012: Any feedback would be helpful. Thanks. Reviewed by: Nixie ~ broke hip in hosp & Tiggy *CheckB*


"The Path I've Walked chapter 2"  Other [13+]
1853668
Genres: Other, None, None
*Bullet* second chapter of the first book.
On 03-20-2012: I have posted my first chapter of this book here as well. I'd like to know what everyone thinks of it this time around. Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Original Djinn - Chapter 14"  Novel [E]
1835500
Genres: Fantasy, Mythology, History
*Bullet* A fictional story of the Djinn. Where the came from, what they are and what they want.
On 03-21-2012: The chapter should stand on its own, with only a little backstory to make sense of a couple lines (but you can figure it out pretty easily). Please let me know how it made you feel. Reviewed by: Nixie ~ broke hip in hosp & Tiggy *CheckB*


"Into the Dark - Chapter 1"  Chapter [13+]
1818306
Genres: Folklore, Mythology, Sci-fi
*Bullet* My attempt at a mythical, in depth story. Please let me know what you think!
On 03-24-2012: First draft of my first chapter of a book I'm working on. Reviewed by: Nixie ~ broke hip in hosp & Tiggy *Checkb*


"Invalid Item"  Novella [E]
1801202
Genres: Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Comedy
*Bullet* Serrony Jones is a 13 year old girl and she protects the universe from bad guys.
On 04-01-2012: Serrony Jones is a 13 year old girl and she protects the universe from bad guys. Please read the information about the book before you read chapter one it will help you understand the story better.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Travellers - Sarashen"  Serial [13+]
1839851
Genres: Sci-fi, Fantasy, Action/Adventure
*Bullet* The aftermath of events at Sarashen.
On 04-14-2012: Sol, Jade, and Laike. They're time travellers, and have saved the world on more than one occasion. They are now threatened with expulsion, because no one said life was fair.
Reviewed by: Tiggy & Nixie ~ broke hip in hosp *CheckB*


"Four Way Stop"  Short Story [13+]
1813656
Genres: Fantasy, None, None
*Bullet* How do you trap an evil?
On 04-18-2012: This is a fantasy story in a mundane setting. Would especially appreciate any suggestions in the area of punctuation. I'm grateful for any other suggestions as well.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"How About this Weather?"  Short Story [13+]
1861133
Genres: Contest Entry, Dark, Horror/Scary
*Bullet* Short story for a contest about the Darker Side of unseasonably warm weather.
On 04-20-2012: This is a short story I wrote for a contest about the "Darker Side" of the recent unseasonably warm weather. It involves a regular hardworking woman who encounters a desperate hoarder.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"The Tribute of Tyus Marlin"  Short Story [13+]
1757576
Genres: Contest Entry, Folklore, Fantasy
*Bullet* Tale of the unexpected or was it foretold, a mother's warning unheeded or was it un-needed
On 04-21-2012: A gal of seventeen summers, Josett, seeks the perfume of the wild rose, but finds bewilderment, adventure, evil, and love instead. Pays 2K GPs for real reviews. I return the favor.
Reviewed by: Tiggy & Nixie ~ broke hip in hosp *CheckB*


"Spirits of the Night"  Fiction [13+]
1841804
Genres: Emotional, Horror/Scary, Supernatural
*Bullet* On a dark night, the past meets the present in an unexpected way.
On 04-25-2012: Spirits of the Night is a short piece of speculative fiction just slightly over 2000 words. I've polished this and need some reviews before I submit it. The passkey is 2323.
Reviewed by: Tiggy & embryo *CheckB*


"AACA: Chapter 3 - Anger and Tea"  Chapter [13+]
1864218
Genres: Fanfiction, Fantasy, Sci-fi
*Bullet* Madison seeks to return his wife home, but in all the wrong ways. Will she stay with him?
On 04-28-2012: This is Chapter 3 of my novel "And Along Came Alice". I've switched it from novel form into individual chapters in a folder. Feedback on this chapter would be greatly appreciated.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Eggnog and Werewolves Part 2"  Chapter [18+]
1771182
Genres: Erotica, Horror/Scary, Gay/Lesbian
*Bullet* Some werewolves are crazy.
On 05-02-2012: This is the reason you should watch your drinks, as there might be a wolf who wants you for some purpose.
Reviewed by: Tiggy & BeckyL *CheckB*


"I WAS CALLED PRINCESS BY THE SCHOOL IDOL"  Short Story [13+]
1825636
Genres: Action/Adventure, Detective, Technology
*Bullet* "Well, I can't see anything wrong about it, princess." -Red
On 05-03-2012: "A long short story. I guess you would accompany me for more than a mere 20+KB. If you had solved my case even before you reach the end, it's fine not to continue."
Reviewed by: Talera & Tiggy *CheckB*


"First Rite and Final Rest (new Part1)"  Other [18+]
1560778
Genres: Fanfiction, Gothic, Supernatural
*Bullet* A new pack of werewolf pups gathers.
On 05-05-2012: Unfinished first chapter of a Werewolf story that may get to novel length sometime. I'm unsure if the often revised structure is working out, so any criticism is welcome.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Don't Bother Coming Home Chapter 1"  Chapter [E]
1864390
Genres: Emotional, Young Adult, Drama
*Bullet* Janelle Walters comes back to a town she hasn't been to in fifteen years.
On 05-05-2012: I started this novel a few days ago and I have already type up the first three chapters. I would love some feedback in any form! Thank you! Anything you think I can improve upon.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Don't Bother Coming Home Chp. 2"  Chapter [E]
1865502
Genres: Emotional, Romance/Love, Personal
*Bullet* Janelle's story continues.
On 05-05-2012: I am hoping to get some feedback on whether I'm going in to right direction of this piece. Thank you!
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Don't Bother Coming Home Chp. 3"  Chapter [13+]
1865723
Genres: Drama, Dark, Romance/Love
*Bullet* Eliza uncovers a secret that will change the view of her sister forever.
On 05-05-2012: Any type of feedback would be appreciated!
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Chapter 3 OUT IN LOVE"  Novel [13+]
1851418
Genres: Gay/Lesbian, Emotional, Relationship
*Bullet* Chapter 3 describes first days on campus before two girls who fall in love meet in 1958
On 05-06-2012: Thank you for the privilege of seeking a power review. I've become a better writer because of WDC reviews; and I still want to improve.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"The Existence"  Short Story [ASR]
1853541
Genres: Supernatural, Mystery, Dark
*Bullet* She held her breath for a while, waiting in the night’s stillness.
On 05-07-2012: Please review my most recent short story, thanks!
Reviewed by: Tiggy & Nixie ~ broke hip in hosp *CheckG*


"Part 1"  Chapter [13+]
1813349
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fanfiction, Romance/Love
*Bullet* Can Carth Onasi save the woman he loves before it's too late? Based on the SW:KOTOR game.
On 05-07-2012: Part 1 of a fanfic I'm writing. It's based on a game I played as a child, the meaning behind it is very close to my heart. I'm putting a lot of effort into this, I'd love if someone could read it.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"The Silver Claddagh-Chapter 2"  Chapter [18+]
1853797
Genres: Romance/Love, Fantasy, Supernatural
*Bullet* What would you do if you found yourself 700 years in the past?
On 05-07-2012: In this second chapter of a romance/time-travel/historical novel, Mercy finds herself in the past with the man she knows as Duncan which is going by a different name, Matthew.
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"magic realized (1-4)"  Chapter [ASR]
1840281
Genres: Fantasy, Teen, Supernatural
*Bullet* story of two girls and their magic teachers, in an adventure. (some blood) ch 1-4 version
On 05-08-2012: this is the beginning of my story i would really love to receive reviews as I strive to make this story better and better everyday
Reviewed by: Tiggy & BeckyL *CheckG*


"Desert Thorn, Desert Rose"  Short Story [ASR]
1851001
Genres: Relationship, Friendship, Romance/Love
*Bullet* On the last day of work, Aarush must face some shocking truths. And a pleasant surprise.
On 05-08-2012: Please say whether the story kept you interested. If you wanted to read it further. If not at what point you lost interest. Also please comment on characterization. Thanks.
Reviewed by: Bertiebrite was given Light & uncommonspirit *CheckG*


"Art of the Con"  Short Story [13+]
1865557
Genres: Contest Entry, Comedy, Relationship
*Bullet* A career thief and conman gets in over his head.
On 05-09-2012: This piece is my entry for the What a Character contest this month, but I would like to get some more eyes on it for some additional editing before I submit. Good, honest reviews requested. Thanks!
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"Omega Station"  Draft [ASR]
1843125
Genres: Sci-fi, Drama, None
*Bullet* a man in prison reflects on how he got there, the friend he made, and his plan to escape.
On 05-12-2012: This is a short story I've been kicking around and I want to know if its worth perusing. It's a Sci-Fi Drama, a little over 3,330 words at the moment, and is still rough.
Reviewed by: Tiggy & uncommonspirit *CheckG*


"The Musket and the Sword. "  Short Story [13+]
1844541
Genres: Action/Adventure, Military, History
*Bullet* based on Napoleon's invasion of Russia
On 05-15-2012: Need a review on this, thanks! This is a story based on the Napoleonic Era
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"The Shadow That Came"  Short Story [18+]
1867995
Genres: Horror/Scary, Mystery, Supernatural
*Bullet* "What is beyond darkness?" It asked me.
On 05-16-2012: Please review my most recent short story. Thank you.


"BUTCHERED AT THE DENTIST"  Chapter [18+]
1863798
Genres: Biographical, None, None
*Bullet* This is an account of a bad day at the dentist
On 05-17-2012: Please review this chapter, It's an extract from my autobiography.


"Cletus and the Masks"  Collection [18+]
1847615
Genres: Thriller/Suspense, Horror/Scary, Mystery
*Bullet* A woman trapped by a psychopath realizes he buried bodies in the yard.
On 05-18-2012: This is Chapter 2. The first chapter was about how the story teller (Leila) got stranded out in the middle of nowhere and had no choice, but to be a roommate of this "Good Man."
Reviewed by: Tiggy *CheckB*


"KoC ~ Knights of Concordia (Ch. 1-3)"  Chapter [E]
1868924
Genres: Action/Adventure, Fantasy, Friendship
*Bullet* A group of young warriors betrayed by their nations are joined together by a common bond.
On 05-21-2012: Please review these chapters, they are my first work.


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