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Below are user submissions for reviews of "I.N.K.E.D."
 to review. Anyone is free to submit to this, but we please ask that you limit yourself to three pieces of work at any given time. Thank you! |
#1. "When Fate Laughs" [18+] The beginning of a story of a man who meets his soulmate - and she has no idea who he is Static Item, Fiction Drama, Emotional, Romance/Love karebear  Jun 1, 2012 11:55am This the beginning of a story idea I have, about a man who knows that throughout time he has had one soulmate, and he is waiting for her in this life. When he meets her, she has no idea who he is or that they are supposed to be together. #2. "Between Marco Polo And The Strawberries" [------] This is something I wrote for an English project. I hope you'll enjoy it. Static Item, Short Story Teen, Gay/Lesbian, Emotional Short story #3. "life is never fair" [------] nothing may seem to favour you..but u gotta sit tight and let evrytng go smooth. Static Item, Other Relationship, Adult, Personal money,life,love,you got to be strong,fair #4. "I WILL BE STRONG" [------] the torment and pain has become so normal in day to day life Static Item, Other Experience, Family, None troubles pain tortures life #5. "ADIEU MY LOVE" [------] its always difficult to say goodbye..but life has to move on Static Item, Other Romance/Love, Relationship, None life,love,hurt,charmer,feels #6. "Behind My Mask" [13+] A novel I am writing from the point of view of a mentally unstable person. It is not done. Static Item, Novel Drama, Emotional, Teen A Step Away From Falling unstable girl teen Luke Annie Wes Apoorva Krishnan fiction realistic interesting love romance crazy mentally apoorva.krishnan May 2, 2012 7:32pm Any reviews would be helpful! I need help on where I should take the story from here, how to make it easier to understand, flow, and other things too. Thanks! I will review your work in return. #7. "Soaring Flames" [13+] daughter to father poem,bereavement, loss of spouse, mental illness Static Item, Poetry Death, Emotional, Family Solitude of sorrow, loss of a loved one after prolonged suffering, mental and physical illness of spouse, daughter's poem to father. Elinya May 1, 2012 7:58am Would be grateful for any comments and reviews on the poem "Soaring Flames" - a poem about a daughter's perception of the anguish of a father upon loss of wife whose life was wrecked by illness. #8. "LOVE BITE" [E] Its a true incident based story about two guys involved in a fight. Static Item, Short Story Experience, Drama, Emotional anguish, blasphemous, exasperation, high SHU, love #9. "The Silver Claddagh" [18+] A story of Mercy and her travel back in time to find the true meaning love. Book, Novel Romance/Love, Fantasy, Supernatural silver claddagh time-travel mercy Lady Gypsy~Auction~1869335  Apr 25, 2012 5:20pm A romance, time-travel novel This story is about a broken hearted Mercy. She travels back in time and finds the meaning of true love #10. "Ratchets Love Life" [13+] this is a story about ratchet and his girlfriends Interactive Story, Fantasy, Entertainment, Comedy anonamous Apr 22, 2012 4:58pm A story l randomly thought of between Ratchet, Angela Cross and Sasha Phyronix #11. "Click" [E] A short-story I wrote in 8th grade and edited in 9th Static Item, Short Story Drama, Dark, Death Death Youth Suicide Drama Tragedy Dark Parent Mother Father Wasted Potential Loneliness Grade School Hell Guns Anti-Suicide Warning Cautionary Tale #12. "A cat's story" [13+] A tomcat wants to mate a white feline in heat but he must fight to assert his cat-hood. Static Item, Fiction Animal, Comedy, Fantasy tomcats, cats in heat, aggressive cat, mating cats emiljust Apr 6, 2012 7:11pm A tom cat comes of age and it's mating time. But he must overcome more powerful rivals in his neighborhood. His master's anti-asthma tonic saves the day. #13. "Arid land" [13+] His rice field has dried up, and there won't be any harvest. His family faces starvation. Static Item, Fiction Family, Drama, Environment emiljust Apr 6, 2012 7:08pm His rice field has dried up and the culprit is someone powerful. His family faces starvation if he does nothing about it. But he does not despair. All along, his 17-year old son gets things done using unconventional methods. #14. "JESSICA. Chapter one." [18+] Jessica, a complex tale of psychosis,lust and revenge. More twists than a corkscrew! Static Item, Other Adult, Dark, Thriller/Suspense Revenge,hate psychosis,love Rufus Apr 5, 2012 12:05am "Jessica." "The big white gum tree," book two. The story of Jessica the wicked and psychotically vengeful daughter of deceased Lydia who was the childhood sweetheart and long time lover of the hapless Dom. This is the prologue and first chapter. #15. "The crispy bacon incident" [18+] an extract from my autobiography.An account of the last time my father hit me. Static Item, Chapter Biographical, None, None NICK Apr 4, 2012 5:24pm A brief extract from my autobiography about the day my father hit me for the last time #16. "Earl of the Great Deep Blue" [E] A fish finds his mate, shakes his tail at the sea, and takes a trip into outer space. Static Item, Other Romance/Love, Inspirational, Action/Adventure fish, love, Australia, coral, home, trip, outer space #17. "Lionel Train" [ASR] I was free once, but I killed that freedom with fire. Static Item, Short Story Drama, Emotional, Psychology 1900s, trains, winter, ice, cold, apartment, #18. "To Capture the Turtle" [13+] The Turtle was too much to handle alone, we needed back up. Static Item, Short Story Comedy, Detective, Mystery luminous1 Mar 27, 2012 4:55pm A short story about the intriguing and peculiar intelligence of a turtle. #19. "MY BEAUTIFUL BARFLY." [18+] An Implausible romance between an alcoholic woman,and a besotted man. Static Item, Other Romance/Love, Adult, Action/Adventure Hanky Panky Rufus Mar 25, 2012 7:18am My beautiful Barfly. A short story. The improbable story of an alcoholic woman and a besotted man. #20. "Loving Between the Lines" [E] Learning to love... Static Item, Essay Family, Relationship, Experience Love, family, loss, courage, factual TLC Mar 18, 2012 12:41pm A lesson of love.  Pays 200 minimum gift points for any of my work.  I'll review anyone else's work who will review mine.  #21. "On Hunger Games: The Mockingjay War" [E] A reflection of The Hunger Games Trilogy by Suzanne Collins. Static Item, Poetry War, Drama, Fantasy War, hunger, tyranny, young adult, love, sacrifice, hope, death, life TLC Mar 18, 2012 12:37pm A poetic view of The Hunger Games.  I pay minimum 200 gift points for review of any of my work. I'll review anyone else's work who will review this. #22. "Illegal Immigr-Running Between Raindrops" [E] On illegal immigration and youth. Static Item, Poetry Emotional, Political, Educational illegal immigration, political, youth TLC Mar 18, 2012 11:59am A new poem about illegal immigration - a different view.  I'll review anyone else who will review this! #23. "Bye Cruel Love" [13+] note of a heart-broken lover Static Item, Poetry Death, Emotional, Tragedy suicide, love, heartbreak, death, note #24. "Dear Dad!" [13+] An angry pre-teen's message to his player dad Static Item, Poetry Family, Emotional, Parenting #25. "Dead: heartbreak and guilt" [E] Guilt and The frustration of a dead lover Static Item, Poetry Death, Emotional, Tragedy death, heartbreak, love, sad, sorrow, loneliness #26. "Dreams of a Poor Man" [E] Feelings of a helpless man who dreams of different things but can't afford to have them. Static Item, Poetry Other, Emotional, Other #27. "Sunrise Scene" [E] The scenery around me and the feelings I felt about them Static Item, Poetry Contest Entry, Environment, Nature Sunrise scenery #28. "Part 1" [13+] Can Carth Onasi save the woman he loves before it's too late? Based on the SW:KOTOR game. Static Item, Chapter Action/Adventure, Fanfiction, Romance/Love Revan Carth Star Wars KOTOR 1 SWKOTOR SW:KOTOR Knights Old Republic Juhani Bastila Mission Vao Zaalbaar Canderous Ordo Jolee Bindo T3-M4 HK-47 iiTaliawr™ - Angel Patrol Feb 23, 2012 4:34am Here's Part 1 of a fanfic I'm writing based on a game that holds a great personal meaning to me. I'm spending a lot of time and effort on getting this done, and it is my best piece of work yet. I'd love to share it with as many people as possible. #29. "Give Me A Single Reason" [E] Loving someone is never easy,is it? You have to step out of your comfort zone........ Static Item, Poetry Other, None, None #30. "Fears" [E] the deep, dark secrets that stealthily come to the surface........ Static Item, Poetry Opinion, None, None #31. "Chapter 1 and 2 of Beauty from Ashes" [18+] Leland knows that God is pleased with the murder. Det. Tanner Quinn arrives at the Park. Static Item, Chapter Detective, Mystery, Religious God, murder, Rover, Jesus, park, detective, police, blood, shot, Bon Jovi, Mystic, Maine, angels, demons, satan, evidence, guardian MysticValley Feb 17, 2012 10:46am Chapters 1 & 2 of my novel Beauty From Ashes. A fictional muder mystery with a back story of spiritual warfare. The main character, Tanner Quinn, finds herself battling her own past while searching Mystic Valley Maine for the killer of a young woman. #32. ""Who Will Love And Care For Them?"" [E] The spinster living alone in this mansion, until that sermon by the preacher - Static Item, Poetry Emotional, Relationship, Experience Sharing my home with orphans, teaching them true values of life, sharing their life long dreams. #33. ""Concordia Disaster - Torn Apart "" [13+] The reef on the charts unseen, a terrible disaster haunting me. Static Item, Poetry Emotional, Tragedy, Experience Why did the ship sail so near the rocky reef, standing firm tearing the hole in the side? #34. ""Coffee to go with a Cigarette"" [13+] Tobacco free from disease - Nicotine the curse. Static Item, Poetry Emotional, Family, Experience Why must the children suffer the habit of cigarettes? embe  Feb 12, 2012 1:59pm As a guest to this new coffee shop beware the sign smoking allowed, when you read my poem by embe. #35. "A Genuine Love Story" [E] 594 words, post-modernism Static Item, Short Story Satire, Drama, Emotional self, post-modernism, skipping, fragment, philosophical, interesting #36. " "Not" Judgment Day" [E] A chastisement from God about judging others. Static Item, Poetry Biographical, Religious, Inspirational judgement,sin,God, Deb Feb 7, 2012 7:41pm I think that I have to stop and look inside sometimes to see and own the hypocrite that resides in myself and ultimately in each of us. #37. ""Wind Song"" [E] Poem about the attributes of the wind to add to my nature poems. Static Item, Poetry Nature, Environment, Writing nature,environement,wind, Deb Feb 7, 2012 7:39pm I was sitting quietly waiting for my daughter and observed the whispers of the wind. #38. "Our "Special" Friends" [E] My reflections at my sons' "special Olympics" track practice. Static Item, Poetry Emotional, Family, Experience passion,honesty,innocence,friends,gift,love,sincere,beautiful,refreshing,inspiring,forgive,grace Deb Feb 7, 2012 7:35pm Our "Special" Friends is a poem I wrote while watching my son and friends at a track practice for special Olympics. It is about innocence and Joy! #39. "S or X" [E] God and satan Static Item, Poetry Nature, Spiritual, None Satan #40. "Idle brain" [E] a boy's imagination at his study time Static Item, Poetry Comedy, Experience, Activity Idle #41. "Ama Koeh" [E] This is an excerpt from my novel. It's a work in progress and I would LOVE feedback! Static Item, Fiction Fantasy, Action/Adventure, Other Fantasy fiction novel book dragon magic smoke fire human ancient rage music song power man treasure gold gems price huge run fly passion smoke legend #42. "My White Lily" [13+] A young woman makes a choice when she falls victim to a crime Static Item, Short Story Crime/Gangster, Death, Dark Death Lily escape crime victim dark knife blood freedom white run take choke fear glove flesh tear sterile foreboding vision savage growl voice choice #43. "The Reason for Sanity" [E] My thoughts on the importance of one's dreams and desires Static Item, Poetry Inspirational, Opinion, Personal Sanity reason dreams inspiration heart mind soul secrets beautiful broken understand intellectual desire whole nervous quake longing freedom man chaos #44. "The Blue and the Gray" [E] A lazy day turns traumatic when the last goober hits the ground. A tale of animal antics. Static Item, Short Story Action/Adventure, Animal, Entertainment action,animal,humor,moral,Christmas,entertainment T.J. De Wahl Dec 14, 2011 11:51pm This is my latest short story, out just in time for Christmas. I hope you enjoy and I'm eager for some feedback. Thank you. #45. "Childless Still Remains" [E] A poem about stillbirth and infertility. Static Item, Poetry Personal, Emotional, Writing infertility, childless, emotional, fertility, struggles, personal, poetry, poems #46. "Never-Will" [ASR] The phrase "Never-Will" still haunts me today... Static Item, Poetry Experience, Personal, Writing never-will, never will, experiences, personal, writing, poetry, poems, high school #47. "Sick Enough To Live" [ASR] An abstract poem about depression. Static Item, Poetry Personal, Dark, Psychology personal, depression, psychology, disorders, mental, mental disorders, psychological disorders Total Displayed: 47 |
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