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Genre(s): Sci-fi • Other • Other Type: Novel Request Details: Please review revised versions of "The Time Engineers" Chapters 1 and 2. These were originally posted separately, last December. Thank you! Charles Lampert
Not reviewed posted: Mar 19, 2024 Genre(s): Friendship • Holiday • Other Type: Short Story Request Details: 459 Words
Not reviewed posted: Mar 16, 2024 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Political • Drama Type: Short Story Request Details: Thantia wanted to be the Leader of Havinna again, and she would do anything to do it. That was what Vancent was about to find out. Vancent was the new Helper of Karrena. He was also a device. That wasn’t why Karrena didn’t want or need Vancent.
Not reviewed posted: Mar 10, 2024 Genre(s): History • Relationship • Tragedy Type: Novel Request Details: Ode To Oscar: Chapter 1
Not reviewed posted: Feb 27, 2024 Genre(s): Home/Garden • Nature • None Type: Poetry Request Details: A short poem that I wrote about the garden and how it's alive.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 21, 2024 Genre(s): Horror/Scary • Mystery • Paranormal Type: Novel Request Details: Would love some reviews of my first Horror book. It is now available on Kindle and Paperback from Amazon. If you have Kindle Unlimited you can get it for free! http://tinyurl.com/23xtm7dz Appreciate any time anybody spends reading my work. Thanks all!
Not reviewed posted: Feb 19, 2024 Genre(s): Dark • Action/Adventure • Other Type: Novella Request Details: First act and first half of second act on novella about a depressed author struggling to complete his novel in just one night. Story within a story: Hero's journey in Julius Caesar's Rome. I am interested in engagement and any structural insights,
Not reviewed posted: Feb 19, 2024 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Crime/Gangster • Action/Adventure Type: Fiction Request Details: Short (2500 words?) intro to a piece (full scene). The end of an adventure showing Scarlett's normal life. Want to know if this is a gripping intro and if it's easy reading, also if you understand what I hoped. Generous GP and opportunity for more.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 13, 2024 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Sports • Music Type: Short Story Request Details: At thirteen, Bionna has seven more years before she must decide what to do for the rest of her life. She is about to make it now. It may start at a sporting event, but it ends with a musical about sports. No, I’m not writing a musical.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 10, 2024 Genre(s): Sports • Romance/Love • Music Type: Short Story Request Details: Short story about 2 ice skaters - one is American and one is Russian.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 8, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • Family • Tragedy Type: Fiction Request Details: This is the finished manuscript of "The Monster Inside The Bottle," I plan on editing it some more before publishing it in the near future, so please read it thoroughly and critique it well.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 5, 2024 Genre(s): Holiday • Paranormal • Death Type: Short Story Request Details: A paranormal/surrealistic Christmas story that I hope to submit for publication in the 2024 holiday season.
Not reviewed posted: Feb 2, 2024 Genre(s): Crime/Gangster • Dark • Drama Type: Short Story Request Details: A banker gets in over his head with a gang. This feels like the summary of a cheap movie… written for Gaby’s Midnight Travelers contest. Any thoughts/criticisms are appreciated
Not reviewed posted: Feb 1, 2024 Genre(s): Drama • War • Family Type: Chapter Request Details: After a few minor alterations.
Not reviewed posted: Jan 14, 2024 Genre(s): Dark • Inspirational • Emotional Type: Short Story Request Details: Even in the darkest of times, there is always the potential for redemption.
Not reviewed posted: Jan 12, 2024 Genre(s): Action/Adventure • Emotional • Supernatural Type: Short Story Request Details: "From this day on, the Salty Siren sails under a new banner."
Not reviewed posted: Jan 12, 2024 Genre(s): Psychology • Philosophy • Spiritual Type: Article Request Details: Started getting a bit too philosophical while conversing with an acquaintance and decided to properly write down my thoughts would love your opinion on the whole thing.
Not reviewed posted: Jan 7, 2024 Genre(s): Children's • Entertainment • Other Type: Fiction Request Details: Please give your honest opinions of these 5 ideas for books for little boys.
Not reviewed posted: Jan 2, 2024 Genre(s): Action/Adventure • Fantasy • Sci-fi Type: Novel Request Details: Want to get some honest reviews and critique to make this piece fit for publishing. Will review your work if requested.
Not reviewed posted: Dec 30, 2023 Genre(s): History • Crime/Gangster • Sci-fi Type: Fiction Request Details: I'm not from the UK! I'm not from the US! I'm not even a historian! I had to research a lot for this story, which I've never done before and it's my longest to date. I aimed for an authentic experience and hope I got this right! What do you think?
Not reviewed posted: Dec 28, 2023 Genre(s): Adult • Erotica • Psychology Type: Fiction Request Details: Please review my short story and give me some feedback. Thank you so much.
Not reviewed posted: Dec 25, 2023 Genre(s): Death • Dark • Crime/Gangster Type: Poetry Request Details: This will be part of a chapbook I'm putting together. Thoughts are appreciated and I'll swap a review in your port (item of similar length or type). Thank you in advance for your help!
Not reviewed posted: Dec 22, 2023 Genre(s): Cultural • Other • Other Type: Poetry Request Details: This will be part of a chapbook I'm putting together. Thoughts are appreciated and I'll swap a review in your port (item of similar length or type). Thank you in advance for your help!
Not reviewed posted: Dec 22, 2023 Genre(s): Family • Tribute • Holiday Type: Non-fiction Request Details: After fifty-eight years, this is still the best gift I ever received.
Not reviewed posted: Dec 21, 2023 Genre(s): Adult • Emotional • Friendship Type: Non-fiction Request Details: This is a creative non-fiction loosely based on my experiences working and dealing with everyday life. It's also based on a stock photo that inspired this story (it will be uploaded soon). Please review; I might be looking to expand on it.
Not reviewed posted: Dec 21, 2023 Genre(s): Writing • Medical • Environment Type: Poetry Request Details: Enjoy and let me know if and what you like about this poem on the COVID pandemic and its struggles worldwide.
Not reviewed posted: Dec 21, 2023 Genre(s): Comedy • Women's • Other Type: Short Story Request Details: This humorous story is from a group, and I want to know if you buy into the place and protagonist or if it sounds like an anecdote.
Not reviewed posted: Dec 20, 2023 Genre(s): Comedy • Holiday • Religious Type: Script/Play Request Details: How is the dialogue? Is it written well?
Not reviewed posted: Dec 17, 2023 Genre(s): Religious • Nature • History Type: Poetry Request Details: One of my all-time favourites'
Not reviewed posted: Dec 11, 2023 Genre(s): Sci-fi • None • None Type: Novel Request Details: I posted Chapter 1 previously, here is chapter 2 - looking for general impressions and if you want to read chapter 3.
Not reviewed posted: Dec 10, 2023 Genre(s): LGBTQ+ • Relationship • Sports Type: Novella Request Details: While this is a chapter, it's a shorter one and should be an easy read. I'm especially interested in a review from someone who understands women's soccer and can let me know of any continuity errors I might have. Also, do you like it? Thank you!
Not reviewed posted: Dec 2, 2023 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Fanfiction • Fantasy Type: Request Details: Thoughts, impressions, whatever comes to mind. For example, do you agree with any of the material? Does this puzzle fit the genres? What might have you done differently? Are the clues helpful? Presentation (eg Colors, Dropnotes, Spacing, Font)?
Not reviewed posted: Nov 12, 2023 Genre(s): Comedy • Children's • Biographical Type: Short Story Request Details: A short, simple short story for your delight. The first story I've written for some long time.
Not reviewed posted: Nov 10, 2023 Genre(s): Dark • Drama • Other Type: Short Story Request Details: A short story in the style of a letter I've written, set in the same world as another story I'm currently working on. This is the first ever real piece of writing that I've released for people to actually read and would love some honest review.
Not reviewed posted: Nov 9, 2023 Genre(s): Death • Other • Other Type: Lyrics Request Details: Looking for honest reviews.
Not reviewed posted: Nov 8, 2023 Genre(s): Community • Cultural • History Type: Poetry Request Details: Please review. Worth your time. Thank you.
Not reviewed posted: Oct 25, 2023 Genre(s): Military • History • War Type: Poetry Request Details: This was written for "HONORING OUR VETERANS". I will not edit it further until after the contest. I'd like honest, helpful feedback, please don't worry about hurting my feelings! Poetry: 12 lines, Alternating Stanzas of 9 & 6 Syllables, AB Rhyme Scheme.
Not reviewed posted: Oct 25, 2023 Genre(s): Emotional • None • None Type: Poetry Request Details: enjoy and critique
Not reviewed posted: Oct 25, 2023 Genre(s): Emotional • Drama • Other Type: Poetry Request Details: Enjoy and critique
Not reviewed posted: Oct 25, 2023 Genre(s): Western • Action/Adventure • Drama Type: Fiction Request Details: Second part two a western piece I'm tinkering with. Makes more sense if you've read that first part but still holds up by itself (I think). Still, I'd like any constructive criticism you may have.
Not reviewed posted: Oct 24, 2023 Genre(s): Fantasy • Contest Entry • Writing.Com Type: Fiction Request Details: A little flash fiction. I'm working on writing style. Please let me know if this style of writing is worth using to write a longer piece. Thanks!
Not reviewed posted: Oct 23, 2023 Genre(s): Drama • Dark • History Type: Short Story Request Details: Originally written for a contest, I have found that this side story for two characters from a NaNo project has great potential in serving as a sort of historical record. How well do you think it details the emotional turmoil of a specific time and place?
Not reviewed posted: Oct 20, 2023 Genre(s): History • Military • Romance/Love Type: Sample Request Details: Alternative history about Jean D'arc from France. Long explanation about the Hundred years' war between England and France and conversation in French.(Translated in English at pilot episode).
Not reviewed posted: Oct 9, 2023 Genre(s): Romance/Love • Biographical • Other Type: Prose Request Details: Heyy, This is my first story and I wholud like some feedback. Any type of constructive criticism is appreciate!
Not reviewed posted: Oct 8, 2023 Genre(s): Fanfiction • Sci-fi • Romance/Love Type: Short Story Request Details: Suddenly 22c orphan boy Philip K. Karrins fell into the movie "Knives out" This is just a pilot. Attention to conversation between Marta and Blac. And then what Philip saying
Not reviewed posted: Oct 8, 2023 Genre(s): Sci-fi • Action/Adventure • Drama Type: Short Story Request Details: Charis sees Petronis and his wives returning to town. But something is terribly wrong. She will have to overcome the culture of the desert world, as well as another outsider, or no one’s getting out alive. [Email for passkey.]
Not reviewed posted: Oct 6, 2023 Genre(s): Biographical • History • Experience Type: Chapter Request Details: I'm looking for in-depth, honest reviews. Besides any edits, I'd love to know how you feel about this piece. Is it engaging/entertaining? Would you want to read further?
Not reviewed posted: Oct 6, 2023 Genre(s): Death • Religious • Nature Type: Short Story Request Details: My first writing for a few years - a Writer's Cramp contest entry with the prompt "The Long Journey Home". Thank you for reading!
Not reviewed posted: Oct 1, 2023 Genre(s): Action/Adventure • Mystery • Tragedy Type: Fiction Request Details: Quick concept chapter...reworking an old idea for a story that's been in my head for ages. Quick read. Is intriguing enough for you?
Not reviewed posted: Sep 22, 2023 Genre(s): Drama • History • Romance/Love Type: Novel Request Details: A historical drama with a bit of mystery, a little of the paranormal, and a generous helping of romance. I would love any kind of feedback on this novel, especially anything past chapter ten. Thanks!
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