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The Review Request Page #819237

Looking for an honest, helpful review of your Static Item?

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Request By: Swannington

Request Info: Looking for honest constructive criticism on the first chapter of my novel

Chapter

Please Review: Crave Chapter One

(18+)
Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Thriller/Suspense :: Sci-fi
Description: The first chapter of my futuristic horror/thriller Crave

Request By: Truewing

Request Info: Many years have come and gone under the control of the holy book, Religion had grown to encircle the globe, fighting with one another in aged violence.

Fiction

Please Review: Everyone

(13+)
Genre(s): Cultural :: Dark :: Religious
Description: Thou wilt keep him in perfect peace whose mind is stayed on thee... he trusteth in thee

Request By: Melfiina

Request Info: Looking for some more critique.

Short Story

Please Review: Rage

(18+)
Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark
Description: When the rage comes, you have to keep it at bay...

Request By: Perpetual

Request Info: I will return review an item of yours for feedback. Reviews on the whole thing are appreciated, but if you're going to deal with one aspect, I'd like to know: is the ending too rushed? Thanks!

Short Story

Please Review: Waking Dreams

(13+)
Genre(s): Satire :: Sci-fi :: Biographical
Description: A deluded scientist discovers the cure for baldness...sort of.

Request By: Azalel

Request Info: r&r. thanks

Review

Please Review: Nneka: Concrete Jungle

(E)
Genre(s): Music
Description: This is a review for a cd I bought a couple of days ago

Request By: M. T. Roscoe

Request Info: Looking for honest reviews. THanks a lot.

Poetry

Please Review: Low life

(------)
Genre(s): Personal
Description: A very personal poem.

Request By: Badbada

Request Info: Any reviews are appreciated!

Script/Play

Please Review: Southland

(13+)
Genre(s): Drama :: Horror/Scary :: Action/Adventure
Description: A group of survivors attempt to battle the recent virus outbreak...and themselves.

Request By: Badbada

Request Info: Any reviews are appreciated!

Script/Play

Please Review: Curtain Call

(18+)
Genre(s): Drama :: Crime/Gangster :: Action/Adventure
Description: The tragedy of a powerful drug baron

Request By: pumpkinhead

Request Info: Wanna your works reviewed? Tell me, but please review mine first! Worth of 1,125 GP for you! Honest review, please, even though it means including curses--I'll be glad to take it.

Short Story

Please Review: Hell Tour (Part One)

(18+)
Genre(s): Comedy :: Dark :: Death
Description: When a boy was desperate of finding love....

Request By: saheli

Request Info: I request to criticise, comment and review. You are appreciated.

Poetry

Please Review: Wonderful earth wonders

(E)
Genre(s): Nature :: Inspirational
Description: acroustic on the theme 'wonder' written for a competition

Request By: Chelsea

Request Info: A poem I wrote awhile ago, but I figure it needs some polishing, so tell me what you think. Thanks.

Poetry

Please Review: Blanket of Stars

(E)
Genre(s): Experience :: Romance/Love :: Nature
Description: A work in progress about my first (sort of) date with my husband. Feedback welcome.

Request By: ForYourEntertainment

Request Info: A variety of love quotes I made up myself. A mixture of heart broken quotes to sweet romance. Please Rate and Review and tell me what you think!

Poetry

Please Review: Love Quotes

(E)
Genre(s): Teen :: Young Adult
Description: Random love quotes I made up myself.

Request By: A.J. Barretts

Request Info: I have been discouraged and must need a new perspective on this piece, please read and review. I am hoping to polish this piece enough to be published. Thanks!

Short Story

Please Review: Last Call

(13+)
Genre(s): Other
Description: Living with a firefighter has its problems.

Request By: Brit L. Engels

Request Info: New piece, I don't usually write about places, but it's my favorite city, I've spent a lot of time there...

Poetry

Please Review: My Chicago

(E)
Genre(s): Personal :: Regional :: Other
Description: -freeverse

Request By: e.l. elliott

Request Info: I'm trying to be cryptic, without being too cryptic. Asking for opinions on what you think is happening in this story.

Fiction

Please Review: Maria... Maria...

(13+)
Genre(s): Dark
Description: The American Dream - 2.2 children, domestic engineers, and secrets, lies, and deceit.

Request By: Hotshot48

Request Info: Will always reciprocate.

Short Story

Please Review: Office Romance

(18+)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship :: Experience
Description: With some people, it takes a while.

Request By: force2

Request Info: Read it if you'd like. If you're inclined let me know what you think about this revised piece. Thanks.

Short Story

Please Review: Random, Really?

(E)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Sci-fi
Description: Fantasy Sci-fi Twilight Zone Entry

Request By: mamboking

Request Info: yeah, still writing, lol. all reviews appreciated

Poetry

Please Review: You and Me

(E)
Genre(s): Relationship :: Romance/Love
Description: short one :)

Request By: Aaron

Request Info: This story has been rejected twice and I feel that maybe I've misjudged the story's genre. As a part of your review, could you please let me know what genre you would have considered it. Thank you very much!

Short Story

Please Review: Black Plastic Palmer

(18+)
Genre(s): Other
Description: Had tough time defining genre. Just an odd little story about old attitudes dying hard.

Request By: Living=Reading/Writing

Request Info: {bitem:1656244}

Poetry

Please Review: Curse cupid

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Genre(s): Other
Description: A bit of poetry dialogue, strict syllable pattern, increases with each couplet.

Request By: Patty Apostolides

Request Info: This is the first chapter of a historical romance novel I have finished writing and am looking to get published. I would be interested in learning if it generates enough interest (e.g. is the "hook" interesting?). Many thanks!

Chapter

Please Review: The Greek Maiden and the Lord

(E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: History :: Travel
Description: Gypsy girl meets English Lord in the 1800s

Request By: Matt Konkin

Request Info: A fairly dark piece about a man dealing with post war trauma. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.

Short Story

Please Review: Desolation Row

(18+)
Genre(s): Young Adult :: Sci-fi :: Dark
Description: A short story revealing a piece of Sydney Tye's past.

Request By: Enigma is a WDC Veteran!

Request Info: I would love some feedback for this story. Its the first one in a new fantasy series.

Short Story

Please Review: Genesis

(13+)
Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Young Adult
Description: Hunted for the powers she carries, Lydria must battle to protect her home state...

Request By: Pace

Request Info: Abstract peice: would love a review, thank you.

Poetry

Please Review: Shaman's trance

(E)
Genre(s): Psychology :: Philosophy :: Relationship
Description: What if you're not alone in your meditation?

Request By: Regina Evans

Request Info: The beginning isn't very catching. I'm open to suggestions to improve it. Please and thank you :D

Novel

Please Review: Break the Norm, Chapter 1, 2, and 3

(13+)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Young Adult :: Thriller/Suspense
Description: Laura Williams is anything but normal. She can do anything she puts her mind to. Literally

Request By: Suzi Morrison

Request Info: In need of honest, constructive reviews for this first chapter of my completed YA novel. Will review one piece of your work in return (please specify if there is a specific piece you would like me to review). Thank you in advance.

Chapter

Please Review: Chapter 1 - Design

(13+)
Genre(s): Teen :: Fantasy :: Romance/Love
Description: Grace encounters Sebastian and her whole world is turned upside down.

Request By: kneedeep

Request Info: Please Review! An idea for a novel I would like to write and would like to know if the story line is any good and worth pursuing it further.

Fiction

Please Review: Hindsight 20/20

(E)
Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Sci-fi :: Thriller/Suspense
Description: Introduction

Request By: SilentWriter

Request Info: I would love to have reviews for this item based on the question asked by the preface.

Assignment

Please Review: Minneapolis: Two Cities in One?

(E)
Genre(s): Experience :: Cultural :: Environment
Description: Is this style worth a continued development?

Request By: Shonen Oyamashiyo

Request Info: All Wonderful Reviewers;All honest comment/good rate,and feedback is greatly appreciated.MAY GOD BLESS YOU ALL GREAT PEOPLE!

Photograph

Please Review: Lessons In The Sky

(E)
Genre(s): Experience :: Educational :: Action/Adventure
Description: My dad's short story that bring lessons to his life.

Request By: Shonen Oyamashiyo

Request Info: Dear Reviewers,any comments/advice,good or bad you can give,would have been greatly appreciated it.Thank's so much in advance,MAY GOD BLESSES YOU ALL GREAT PEOPLE @Writing.com!

Photograph

Please Review: Rejoice

(E)
Genre(s): Religious :: Inspirational :: Relationship
Description: A merry heart doeth like a medicine.

Request By: Linzzy Jane

Request Info: Seeking reviews

Poetry

Please Review: Hollow Dreams

(18+)
Genre(s): Adult :: Emotional :: Tragedy
Description: When dreams have no substance

Request By: Linzzy Jane

Request Info: Could do with some more reviews - your thoughts, any suggestions for improvement?

Poetry

Please Review: Pillage of...a Sweet Bloom

(18+)
Genre(s): Adult :: Dark :: Emotional
Description: For fallen angels everywhere - a mother's wrath

Request By: Jen

Request Info: Looking for honest reviews of my YA fantasy novel so I can finalize it and start sending to agents. Thank you.

Novel

Please Review: In the Shadow of the Dragon King 3 - 4

(13+)
Genre(s): Young Adult :: Fantasy
Description: Chapters 3 and 4

Request By: Jen

Request Info: Looking for honest reviews so I can complete this final edit and start sending out to agents.

Novel

Please Review: In the Shadow of the Dragon King 1 - 2

(13+)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Young Adult
Description: Fifteen-year old David Heiland must risk the life of the girl he loves to find his parents

Request By: John_Quinn

Request Info: Hey everyone.Looking for reviews so I can edit this story and hopefully start entering it into contests.It's a horror story and any comments are welcome.Thanks!

Other

Please Review: The Rabbit Hunter

(18+)
Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Dark :: Death
Description: A short story I wrote a while ago.

Request By: mamboking

Request Info: any comments on this highly appreciated

Poetry

Please Review: Goodbye

(E)
Genre(s): Drama :: Relationship :: War
Description: kinda sad. the last thoughts of a dying soldier...

Request By: Truewing

Request Info: Something I made in my younger years that I am revising slowly, any advice you can give I gladly take no matter how harsh the words that are used, tell it.

Fiction

Please Review: Face the World

(GC)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Dark :: Fantasy
Description: All the chapters of a old book I made when I was 15

Request By: Reever

Request Info: revised version

Preface

Please Review: Angelic Ends to Demonic Dreams : Preface

(18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Action/Adventure :: Fantasy
Description: An angel with skeletons in his closet? Why does that sound familiar?

Request By: Chelsea

Request Info: This is my first short story. I'm interested in some honest feedback, but be gentle, I'm sure it needs a lot of work.

Short Story

Please Review: The Forgotten

(E)
Genre(s): Contest :: Nature :: Biographical
Description: First Peoples' Short Story Contest Entry--Nature Calls.

Request By: Jeanette

Request Info: My outlet just before exams!

Poetry

Please Review: How Big

(E)
Genre(s): Inspirational :: Religious :: Experience
Description: Ever wonder how big God really is?

Request By: Rage of Gaige

Request Info: Please rate and review! I would be happy to return the favor if requested! =)

Poetry

Please Review: Mother

(E)
Genre(s): Environment :: Emotional :: Philosophy
Description: This poem may have a diffrent meaning for everybody. It is meant to have multiple meanings

Request By: Lutzy....twospirits1soul

Request Info: Poem inspired by a musical group and their fan base. Looking for feedback.

Other

Please Review: If You Only Knew

(E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: A poem inspired by a group of "Shinedown" Fans.

Request By: Rainingtears

Request Info: Please review, anything would be great!

Other

Please Review: A Small Redemption

(18+)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Experience :: Philosophy
Description: Finding solitude i helping a young girl through her pain

Request By: Aidie

Request Info: Requesting reviews please. thanx

Short Story

Please Review: The Product

(13+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Dark :: Tragedy
Description: Dont you just hate when it doesn't do what it says on the packet? please review or rate.

Request By: Brit L. Engels

Request Info: First time I've written an acrostic in years, it could use some helpful reviews.

Poetry

Please Review: Wonder Wild

(E)
Genre(s): Nonsense :: Nature :: Other
Description: An acrostic about the wonder of some of God's smallest creations & my wild imagination...

Request By: lexi rose

Request Info: I would love a review on "A Victorian Problem In 2010". It's a heartfelt article or essay that has been building for awhile, but came out in a rush this morning, after a family crisis yesterday. would love others opinions on the subject.

Essay

Please Review: A Victorian Problem In 2010

(13+)
Genre(s): Other
Description: A new view on preventing teen pregnancy

Request By: safire_diaz

Request Info: Devlin Whirl investigates the mystery of the Rytilox virus in the grim future

Other

Please Review: Detective Devlin Suppositories

(18+)
Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Occult :: Detective
Description: Devlin Signor Whirl was just your average slacker, until he has the cause to supplement...

Request By: Zoe

Request Info: Looking for honest reviews and critic on some pieces I have been working on.I will be more than happy to give in return. Thank you.

Novel

Please Review: Lady of the Moon- Chapter 1-2

(18+)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Romance/Love :: Biographical
Description: One woman's story of her life before and after becoming a Lady of the Moon.

Request By: force2

Request Info: A developing poem

Poetry

Please Review: Refined Reflections

(E)
Genre(s): Philosophy :: Opinion :: Inspirational
Description: rhyming, alternating tetrameter and trimeter.. Ideas and poem in transition

Request By: Tim Chiu

Request Info: Please review and rate.

Poetry

Please Review: Rural Fences in the Hills

(E)
Genre(s): Nature :: Animal :: Community
Description: "Hemmed in by the sturdy wooden posts/And dangling, metal wire...dry, truncated landscape"

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