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Request By: apoorva.krishnan Request Info: I REALLY need help on the plot line. Any suggestions would be helpful! Novel Please Review: Behind My Mask     (13+) Genre(s): Drama :: Emotional :: Teen Description: A novel I am writing from the point of view of a mentally unstable person. It is not done. Request By: apoorva.krishnan Request Info: Just a Campfire Creative I started. I think it's going pretty well. Campfire Creative Please Review: Stranger     (13+) Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Drama :: Romance/Love Description: How would your character act with other characters from different stories? Request By: Panda Baby Request Info: Newest poem, a short one based on a prompt for a contest. Let me know what you think! Poetry Please Review: Timid Tears and Fearless Frowns     (E) Genre(s): Emotional :: Experience :: Personal Description: A short poem about how emotions don't always obey our commands. Request By: Etienne Gallois Request Info: I so badly want to be able to write a proper free verse poem. I don't know if I can even tell if I'm looking at one. I would appreciate any comments on this poem. Is it free verse? Is it even a poem? If it is a poem but not free verse, what is it? Poetry Please Review: Colors     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: I wanted to write a non rhyme and see what people said about it. Request By: christo Request Info: nantucket... Poetry Please Review: inbetween us     (E) Genre(s): Biographical :: Relationship :: Romance/Love Description: after a lovers' tryst on Nantucket... Request By: christo Request Info: still trying to work this out... Poetry Please Review: bobby (right as rain, again)     (E) Genre(s): Biographical :: Family :: Relationship Description: something entirely new... Request By: strlcuckoo Request Info: A debt still unpaid. Poetry Please Review: Indebted     (E) Genre(s): Family :: Emotional Description: A debt too deep Request By: strlcuckoo Request Info: We wish wishes came true. Poetry Please Review: The Wind     (E) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Emotional Description: "Wish I may, wish I might have the wish...." Request By: Ghostranch Request Info: A short, simple poem written in the Lanturne form. Feedback welcome! Poetry Please Review: Grief     (E) Genre(s): Emotional :: Personal :: Experience Description: Written in the Lanturne form. 5 lines, syllables: 1/2/3/4/1 Request By: Little Phoenix Request Info: please review, any critic - positive or negative would mean a lot, so that I could improve my work. Thanks in advance :) Poetry Please Review: Even if you don't..I'll always remember     (E) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship :: Emotional Description: it seems that your loved one forgot you,but you still remember every moment with him... Request By: alone Request Info: please i would like honest and genuine reviews to suggest improvements and comments on my work simply to encourage me to write more =D Non-fiction Please Review: My happy Place     (E) Genre(s): Emotional :: Personal :: Experience Description: a beautiful experience that affects you in several different ways Request By: silence Request Info: is the story difficult to follow? Short Story Please Review: The dinner is in progress!     (18+) Genre(s): Contest Entry Description: The chance to be a hero is presented to an unlikely candidate. Request By: dee Request Info: Please give me your honest opinion and suggestions. They will be greatly appreciated. Poetry Please Review: No One Cares     (E) Genre(s): Experience :: Emotional :: Personal Description: This is my dark place experienced as a child. Request By: J.W. Knight Request Info: Looking for reviews of a book I'm writing. The link is the first part of 9 parts. Let me know what you enjoy, or dislike about it. I'm trying to finish it, but want to make sure it's smooth as is. Chapter Please Review: Elizabeth's Portrait ((Part 1))     (E) Genre(s): Fanfiction :: Romance/Love :: Action/Adventure Description: A woman born in the 1500's recounts her past. Request By: DRHF Request Info: Please review this and tell me what you think. Poetry Please Review: To Carve from Man     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: A poem about modern life. Request By: Vale-moms surgery recovery Request Info: Enjoy! Poetry Please Review: Lonely Girl and the Soldier     (E) Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Emotional :: Drama Description: A little girl with a broken heart writing to a soldier away from his family. Request By: SophieMoon Request Info: please review, every comment is priceless to me :) Poetry Please Review: Drop by drop     (E) Genre(s): Dark Description: about how everyone can feel once in a while... Request By: Spawn of Sylvia Plath Request Info: GP for your thoughts. Poetry Please Review: The Fickleness of Bicycles     (E) Genre(s): Experience :: Sports :: Crime/Gangster Description: Bicycles: there's nothing more reliable, but loyalty is lost on them. Request By: Tmac Request Info: The latest chapter in the mystery. Our retired, helpful detective, is hopeful that he may be about to discover the truth, but is there a surprise waiting. Chapter Please Review: MYSTERY AT DEADFALL LAKE-Chapter 4     (E) Genre(s): Mystery :: Detective :: Drama Description: Our part time detective continues to investigate the cold case of the missing young couple Request By: Panda Baby Request Info: New poem and my first try at a new poetry form! Please read and review! Poetry Please Review: Chairman Mao     (ASR) Genre(s): History :: Death :: Military Description: A poem about the dictator Mao, written in the Double Tetractys poetry form. Request By: Bookworm13 Request Info: I'd like to know what anyone thinks. Final Draft (hopefully) I will review your works in return. Chapter Please Review: The Player     (13+) Genre(s): Dark :: Music :: Teen Description: A young prodigy of the piano struggles to survive in New Harbor City. UNFINISHED Request By: Victoria Mills Request Info: One of my pre arts award pieces, any feedback is much appreicated. Poetry Please Review: Fairy Tales     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: An example of pre-arts award writing. A free verse poem written about fairy tales. Request By: Victoria Mills Request Info: This is my pre-arts award piece and i need reviews to put in my portfolio. Anything will be appreciated. Thanks in advance for anything. Other Please Review: Wish     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: An example of pre-arts award work. Request By: Nisha Request Info: You can review, you can comment. But this poetry is only worth if you could feel for a second, the freedom of Wind. Poetry Please Review: All I want is to stay     (E) Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Spiritual :: Fantasy Description: An open mind going far- no restrictions no fear Request By: C. Ann Skrypec Request Info: I am planning on entering this story into a contest and would love some feed back before I do. Any suggestion for changes or problems with story would be appreciated. I will return the favor, thanks. Short Story Please Review: Under the Pale Moon     (18+) Genre(s): Other Description: This an entry for the bad moon rising contest, prompt was pancakes. Request By: ShiningStar Request Info: I need an honest opinion good and bad i really want to know what you think. I learn and get better through my mistakes so feel free to criticize all you want! Poetry Please Review: Trophy attitude     (E) Genre(s): Other :: Writing.Com :: Writing Description: get first place, forget about the the little people the small trophies that got you there Request By: ShiningStar Request Info: Just want a honest opinion because i hope to one day write my own book of poetry. Poetry Please Review: Breaking and Entering     (E) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship :: Writing.Com Description: A poem about heart break Request By: Chick4Jesus Request Info: Auto-Rewarded. Please don't JUST tell me if you like it. Tell me what you dont like too. Thank you! Novel Please Review: Too Late to Turn Back     (13+) Genre(s): Religious Description: Chapters 1&2 of a novel. The beginnings. Request By: marcas Request Info: first draft, reviews and comments would be much appreciated. Prose Please Review: The Warrior Child     (E) Genre(s): Personal :: Emotional :: Self Help Description: The fight against injustice,with truth and belief for the world, and those within it. Request By: LovingTim Request Info: Any reviews would be greatly appreciated. Please be honest, that's all I ask. I am trying to learn to be the best writer I can be. This is a fun writing exercise for me but I'm writing to practice. I need your help! Thank you. Short Story Please Review: Untitled Zombie Short: (Part 1)     (13+) Genre(s): Horror/Scary Description: Zombie post-apocalyptic, based off a dream. Four teen boys dealing with life with zombies. Request By: Joto-Kai Request Info: Have I made Helen both harsh enough to terrorize her husband and yet somehow deserve him? Have I made Harvey fool enough to stay with her yet, still strong enough to root for? Is everything they do somehow almost forgivable? Short Story Please Review: Keep Your Chin Up     (18+) Genre(s): Drama :: Relationship Description: How do I protect her when she won't let me get help? Request By: Raygunner Request Info: Two soldiers, on opposite sides of a religious war, deiced to end that war. Short Story Please Review: The End of War     (13+) Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Military :: Philosophy Description: Two soldiers declare peace. Request By: Angus Request Info: Any and all reviews and ratings would be greatly appreciated. Thankyou! Other Please Review: Mien Swing     (18+) Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Contest Entry :: Dark Description: Be Careful Who You Date... Request By: Tanya * working on novel :D Request Info: I have two specific questions concerning this - what do you think of my male character, how does he appear to you? And do you think the rating is appropriate - is this 18+ or 13+? Any other feedback is also welcome and appreciated. Auto-rewards GPs. Novel Please Review: Bread Crumbs on Satin Sheets - Ten     (13+) Genre(s): Friendship :: Romance/Love :: Emotional Description: Aurora gets into trouble Request By: Lindsay Request Info: Anyone want to try to decipher my scrambled thoughts? Essay Please Review: One Day to Live     (E) Genre(s): Philosophy :: Death :: Experience Description: How long is a lifetime? Is there a simple answer to that question? Request By: penonpaper Request Info: Hello, your feedback on this piece I wrote this morning would be helpful. Thank you :-) Poetry Please Review: We've Not Known Love     (E) Genre(s): Experience :: Emotional :: Romance/Love Description: its energy, its hold on us... Request By: Michael K Request Info: Wouldn't anyone like to review this? I would gladly review something of yours in return. Never had so few reads on a story I posted here on WDC. Is the title uninteresting? Is the story bad, boring, uninspiring; should I trash it? Other Please Review: 1973 - Return of the Prehistoric Beast     (E) Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Experience :: Fantasy Description: The day's end, the beginning of an adventure; a boy and father's relationship is strained. Request By: Joel Request Info: Tell me what you think, if it portrays strong emotion well. It's meant to be a bit vague and abstract. Other Please Review: They would have.     (18+) Genre(s): Dark :: Drama :: Emotional Description: This is a rant of past choices. Request By: PenMightierSword Request Info: I am terrible with puncuation and format. Any help with that would be appreciated. Other Please Review: Little Foot     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: A freestlye about my nephew Request By: fobers95 Request Info: Any reviews will be appreciated. What I mainly need to know if the plot is good, if its original ,and grammer and spelling. Novel Please Review: Unknown Title chapters 8-13     (13+) Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Action/Adventure :: Sci-fi Description: Can Jonny and his friends find a cure in time to stop the outbreak? Request By: marcas Request Info: This is a personal piece, that brings back good and sad memories. I would appreciate any comments and reviews, and hope you enjoy this piece as much as I do. Poetry Please Review: The Biker's Life.     (E) Genre(s): Tribute :: Personal :: Emotional Description: A tribute to a couple of friends I lost in my biking days. Request By: PoisonIvy Request Info: Please send reviews. I want to make a career of writing but I'm not confident in my work. Poetry Please Review: Scream     (E) Genre(s): Family Description: My family always makes me feel like this. Request By: Tmac Request Info: Chapter 3 in the MYSTERY AT DEADFALL LAKE. A local, retired detective, living in a small mountain town offers to help police with a missing persons cold case. Please review and offer any ideas about how this short story could end. Tmac Chapter Please Review: MYSTERY AT DEADFALL LAKE-Chapter 3     (E) Genre(s): Detective :: Mystery :: Community Description: A volunter, retired investigator offers his assistance to the local police on a cold case. Request By: C. Ann Skrypec Request Info: Any feed back would be great. I will return the favor and review an item of your liking. Thanks! Other Please Review: The Secrets We Keep     (13+) Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Psychology :: Dark Description: A contest entry, the prompt was to write a story about the full moon Request By: TheSorcerersHallows Request Info: Very first song ever, all reviews appreciated! Lyrics Please Review: 24-hour Original     (E) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Young Adult :: Emotional Description: First song I've ever written for the ukulele about my cliche teenage love Request By: Joel Request Info: This is a poem/rant of growing up and the dangers and heros we face. It's a new version, if you've read it before, compare it to now please. Poetry Please Review: Chilhood     (13+) Genre(s): Dark :: Emotional :: Teen Description: This is about the loss of innocence Request By: Lindsay Request Info: Honest reviews needed! Reading it out loud to children tomorrow! Short Story Please Review: Little Lark     (E) Genre(s): Cultural :: Children's :: Folklore Description: Based on Native American storytelling. Request By: Jollz Request Info: Already A Lyricist just started in poetry, Feedback encouraged :) Poetry Please Review: Suspending Time Before Creation     (E) Genre(s): Philosophy :: Personal :: Emotional Description: A Poem I Was Working On Request By: bob county Request Info: Looking for an honest review. I need constructive criticism. Short Story Please Review: I am a Spiritual man<+><     (13+) Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Religious :: Opinion Description: The model for a life a faith Request By: FireBornOmega Request Info: Hello, FireBornOmega here. I would appreicate any review on these two romance song lyrics, preferrably "You're the Wonder." I wrote these for a girl that I really liked unable to be with her again. This is to remind me of my love for her. Other Please Review: Romance Lyrics     (E) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship :: Teen Description: Some of the lyrics of the love songs that I wrote Total Displayed: 50

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