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Request By: havagomate Request Info: I just want honest opinions on this and whether it is worth it to continue, what I need to change, why is it good, why is it bad, etc. So just anything please. I'm new at writing so critism is good for me. Other Please Review: A whore or a saint?     (18+) Genre(s): Erotica :: Crime/Gangster :: Women's Description: A female CFO turns to detective work and runs into a most unusual vampire. Request By: kittycat Request Info: I am not used to writing senryu's. I don't know if every line has to stand on its own? Can you tell me in detail what is wrong with this senryu and how to make it better. Also what you like about the meaning. Thanks! Poetry Please Review: Unrequited Love     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: A 5-7-5 about love. Request By: warmonger62 Request Info: Hi, I'm looking for honest opinions on this piece. It is my first try at serious work. Any & all critiques, and help are most gratefully accepted. Andrew Other Please Review: A Stranger Mind     (18+) Genre(s): Death :: Horror/Scary :: Psychology Description: She was certainly not old enough to be here, particularly at this time of night. Request By: Anitha muralidharan Request Info: Please read my presentation and give your feedbacks Short Story Please Review: My hidden braveness     (E) Genre(s): Experience :: Drama :: News Description: A real story made me to realize that i have hidden my braveness so many days inside me. Request By: Anitha muralidharan Request Info: kindly read and comment it Poetry Please Review: A Mother's Rebirth     (E) Genre(s): Inspirational :: Emotional :: Other Description: This poem is dedicated to My Lovable mother and those who really love their Mother Request By: I was made with wings Request Info: would love some helpful reviews :) Poetry Please Review: You and Me     (E) Genre(s): Personal Description: You aimed for the clouds while I set out for the stars. Request By: K-wil Request Info: A good old existential crisis poem with a social-apocalyptic aspect :) please enjoy! Poetry Please Review: The Harbinger     (13+) Genre(s): Personal :: Religious :: Philosophy Description: Nihilistic apocalyptic, eschatalogical nonsense and desperation! Request By: Cyril Sweet Request Info: I welcome all comments and criticisms. I'm not sure this story "works" and would love to have your opinion of it. Thanks. Short Story Please Review: The other side of the coin.     (E) Genre(s): Technology :: Dark Description: A collector of curious objects finds the truth is too much to bear. Request By: Tmac Request Info: A true story. Please review and advise what it might need for improvement. Thank you, Tmac Short Story Please Review: SOMETHING SPOOKY STALKING     (13+) Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Experience :: Mystery Description: A very frightening experience with my German Sheppard in a mountain wilderness area. Request By: Cym Lauing Request Info: This was designed as an end-rhyme, even if it's not in the typical format. I've been working on this for a couple years and would REALLY appreciate any insight. Poetry Please Review: Days Slip Away     (E) Genre(s): Personal :: Experience :: Emotional Description: I've sporadically worked on this poem for the past few years, a reflection on habits. Request By: MarkLewis ~ a mirage Request Info: I thought I might try a hand to romance this Valentines and this is how close I can get! Please read if you have some time to waste. Short Story Please Review: The Chair and the Wardrobe     (E) Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Nonsense Description: If gravity does not make people fall in love, then science geniuses never know much. Request By: Alex -Fabulous Killjoy- Request Info: I recently finished writing my play 'Kicking and Screamig' and would love some feedback about the characters, dialogue and story/plot. PS I urge you not to read if you are easily offended Thank you Script/Play Please Review: Kicking and Screaming     (GC) Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Drama Description: "That's how I need to die. Kicking and screaming" Request By: millershelly Request Info: Till Kingdom Come...Undone [ASR] 1.1 KB Woe befalls the king Genres: Comedy :: Fantasy Poetry Please Review: Till Kingdom Come...Undone     (ASR) Genre(s): Comedy :: Fantasy Description: Woe befalls the king Request By: millershelly Request Info: Between Then and Forever [E] 0.7 KB my story... Genres: Inspirational :: Fantasy Poetry Please Review: Between Then and Forever     (E) Genre(s): Inspirational :: Fantasy Description: my story... Request By: Trevor Prescott Request Info: Entry in the 2/22 Daily Slice Horror Contest Short Story Please Review: Amanda and the Giver     (18+) Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Sci-fi :: Contest Entry Description: Mr. Bellevue doesn't get his lesson plans from text books. Request By: TheSorcerersHallows Request Info: better read than described. would you buy this if it were a book? Other Please Review: The Escape Route, Chapter One     (E) Genre(s): Young Adult :: Action/Adventure :: Fantasy Description: Set in a dystopian world, Claire and Gage search for their own escape method. Request By: Michael K Request Info: What is in the bag? What do you fear the most? - This is a true life experience from my childhood. Need opinions on style and story, grammar corrections, structure, if the story is interesting enough for readers, if I categorized it correctly, etc. Short Story Please Review: Brown Paper Bag     (18+) Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Horror/Scary :: Experience Description: A strange incident sends a young man down the path of rebellion. Request By: strlcuckoo Request Info: A different storm in a different land. Poetry Please Review: Tsunami     (E) Genre(s): Nature :: Emotional Description: A storm no one wants to witness Request By: strlcuckoo Request Info: April showers bring May flowers BUT..... Poetry Please Review: April     (E) Genre(s): Experience :: Nonsense Description: It is the month Request By: dena Request Info: new piece..reviews are needed Lyrics Please Review: Hallucinations of a broken heart     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: shes gone..but he still sees her Request By: Peter Gray Request Info: the rightful heir to the thrown is under threat by the tyrannical 'Emperor' who has taken power by force. Draft Please Review: The Lost Emperor of Tyros     (E) Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Drama :: Thriller/Suspense Description: This is an introduction to my new book, The Lost Emperor of Tyros. Request By: kittycat Request Info: I just want an honest reaction. Is this amusing? If not then what might help. I am new at limericks and would like advice. Thank you! Poetry Please Review: The Stiff (a limerick)     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: A 'moll', is a mobster's wife or girlfriend. Request By: Matt Stuart Request Info: My entry for 'What a Character" Feburary 2012. Written from the POV of Abner's sword, the main character in my trilogy: Hunters. Please rate and review. I need to edit by the 29th of Feb. Other Please Review: By the Sword     (E) Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Action/Adventure :: Fantasy Description: My 'What a Character' contest entry for February 2012. Need edits and reviews on it!! Request By: Just Me Request Info: I just want honest opinions on this and whether it is worth it to continue, what I need to change, why is it good, why is it bad, etc. So just anything please. Nothing rude would be nice though. Thanks! Fiction Please Review: Just the beginning ( change when I can)     (E) Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Young Adult :: Cultural Description: Just part of a story. I just like to write every now and then so please comment and rate. Request By: Cym Lauing Request Info: This was a pretty emotional piece to write, but it also feels a little awkward or incomplete. An objective opinion would be most appreciated! :) Poetry Please Review: Redux     (E) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Emotional :: Experience Description: Kind of an awkward love poem. I would appreciate any and all criticism on this please. Request By: The Light Request Info: Review with honesty. Thanks Poetry Please Review: THE WISHES OF THE DEAD     (E) Genre(s): Mystery Description: The dead wishing to live againg. Must the dead live again? Request By: The Light Request Info: Review with honesty inorder to aid me improve on skills Poetry Please Review: TEMPTATION     (E) Genre(s): Adult :: Emotional :: Psychology Description: Tempting thoughts that kept reoccurring instantaneously Request By: Darkness Within Request Info: Interested in getting honest, constructive feedback. 2nd poem, looking to see if it flows well, fits together nicely and anything else you'd like to comment on. Thanks in advance! Poetry Please Review: Dark Desire     (18+) Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Horror/Scary Description: A man's dark desire claims its newest victim. Request By: BloodGateKey Request Info: Dark fantasy short story. 5,000 words. Looking for honest, constructive reviews. Short Story Please Review: The Burning City     (13+) Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Dark Description: Two young boys learn the truth about war. A dark fantasy short story. 2010. Request By: BloodGateKey Request Info: Honest, helpful reviews, please. I'm not afraid of losing points for grammar and spelling. What I'm looking for is a second set of eyes to catch continuity, clear up questions and story aspects. Feel free to help however you can. Thank you. Short Story Please Review: WolfsBane: A Short Story (Revised 2012)     (13+) Genre(s): Supernatural :: Dark :: Romance/Love Description: Megen Frost, a supernatural investigator, investigates her toughest story yet: her own. Request By: happyfingers Request Info: Love to read your opinions. My first attempt at this genre-whatever it is. Short Story Please Review: Diane     (E) Genre(s): Comedy :: Horror/Scary :: Entertainment Description: A man lends his female robot to a friend as a joke which turns into tragedy. Request By: Tmac Request Info: Seeking reviews. A single moment of time in my life changed me forever. A story of dedication. Thank you, Tmac/Mtndoc Essay Please Review: Running - The Good, Bad, and Ugly     (E) Genre(s): Activity :: Experience :: Inspirational Description: An account of my 20 year running life passion. Dedicated to runners and would-be runners Request By: Angel Request Info: Please review! Poetry Please Review: Dream of Fairies     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: A poem about a child's dream. Request By: S. J. Shiro Request Info: Please have a look at my poem on Timbuktu. Poetry Please Review: What is Timbuktu?     (E) Genre(s): Cultural :: Environment :: Fantasy Description: A view of Timbuktu from someone who has never gazed upon it. Request By: S. J. Shiro Request Info: Please take a look at my poem (it's a short one). Poetry Please Review: Nights in Moonlight     (E) Genre(s): Dark :: Environment :: Experience Description: Moonlight: shroud of evil or thing of beauty? Request By: bob county Request Info: Looking for serious criticism. Short Story Please Review: A New Republic     (13+) Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Erotica :: Satire Description: A Pilot Outline for Fox Network Request By: I was made with wings Request Info: looking for some insightful reviews! Short Story Please Review: Memento Mori     (ASR) Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense :: Drama :: Action/Adventure Description: Remember your mortality. Sandra's job forces her into life and death situations. Request By: king blaq Request Info: Please, honest reviews please Poetry Please Review: Bye Cruel Love     (13+) Genre(s): Death :: Emotional :: Tragedy Description: note of a heart-broken lover Request By: Charlie Duhad Request Info: Any review is appreciated. Just tell me what you think, The story is not incredibly long. Short Story Please Review: Ambiguity and Pretention     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: Development of a relationship. Request By: Nicki Request Info: A Psychedelic journey in a cemetery. "I feel the changes and embrace them." Critique and opinions appreciated! Prose Please Review: "An Understanding"     (E) Genre(s): Environment :: Emotional :: Personal Description: Psychedelic experience in a cemetery."I feel the changes and embrace them". Request By: Silent Writer Request Info: I wrote this the other day, I am looking for some feed back, tell me what you think. Poetry Please Review: The American Dream     (E) Genre(s): Inspirational :: Emotional Description: This is a poem about how we shouldn't give up on our dreams. Request By: Liam Request Info: All reviews are welcomed appreciated. Poetry Please Review: Dreams     (E) Genre(s): Experience :: Philosophy :: Inspirational Description: A progression of life. Request By: BigAl Request Info: A short musings of part of my life - 200 words Other Please Review: Do Writers Have Friends     (E) Genre(s): Writing :: Drama Description: Just musing about my life- very short about 200 words Request By: Peter Gray Request Info: A 300 word short story. Please review and give constructive criticism Short Story Please Review: The Ghost of Shangradi     (E) Genre(s): Horror/Scary Description: Competition entry for this website. Request By: embryo Request Info: This is my try at creating a dark themed love poem. I'm not very experienced with poems. So I'm asking for many reviews. Thanks! embryo Poetry Please Review: Maddened     (18+) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Dark :: Death Description: A dark poem about love and madness Request By: kdugan Request Info: Please read and review, your comments are helpful. Poetry Please Review: Good day Mr. Lincoln     (E) Genre(s): Philosophy :: History Description: Thoughts about a special place everyone should go to at least once in their life. Request By: kdugan Request Info: Please read and all comments are helpful. Poetry Please Review: I understand tired     (E) Genre(s): Philosophy :: Emotional Description: I understand tired and maybe you do to. Request By: Max Griffin Request Info: I've recently made a couple of minor revisions to this to try to add some tension to the start. I'd be grateful for some more eyes looking it over. Thanks! Short Story Please Review: Ave Verum Corpus     (18+) Genre(s): Ghost :: Gay/Lesbian Description: Mourning and memory find release on a moonlit night. Request By: BBWolf- Working like a dog Request Info: Dealing with werewolves is tricky, especially when they want you. Chapter Please Review: Eggnog and Werewolves Part 2     (18+) Genre(s): Erotica :: Horror/Scary :: Gay/Lesbian Description: Some werewolves are crazy. Request By: Special K Request Info: This is a misc. chapter from my book project with "Novel Writing 101". I'm hoping to give you a chill and get you to read on. Chapter Please Review: Rocked Awake     (13+) Genre(s): Ghost :: Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense Description: Urban legend says our lake house is haunted, cursed, sinister…EVIL. Total Displayed: 50

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