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The Review Request Page
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Request By: Oceanborne~Blogging
Request Info: A short piece written in the Pleiades form. Reviews are greatly appreciated- an auto-reward if offered.

Poetry
Please Review: Fishing     (E)
Genre(s): Activity :: Nature :: Hobby/Craft
Description: In which a fly-fisherman thinks he outsmarted a Cutthroat trout. Pleiades form.

Request By: Isaiah C. Basye
Request Info: Russ and Guss are friends. Russ is a walrus, and Guss is a penguin. They need help from the narrator to learn some social skills. In this story Guss needs to remember to respect the differences of others. They are short children's books.

Fiction
Please Review: What About Us, Gus     (E)
Genre(s): Children's :: Educational :: Family
Description: Russ and Guss are characters who need help. This children's book teaches social skills.

Request By: Joshua McLean
Request Info: My first flash fiction in a long while. I'll appreciate any comments you might have. :D

Fiction
Please Review: Double Standard     (E)
Genre(s): Philosophy
Description: A young man learns that some things ought to be universal.

Request By: Trisha Blaze
Request Info: This is the possible prolog for my book. It gives a morsel of what Brett's early life and the scars he bears. Is there too much description? This writing newbie would appreciate all opinions.

Preface
Please Review: Brett's Story     (E)
Genre(s): Experience :: Tragedy
Description: Story of an abused little boy.

Request By: Jester to the Moon
Request Info: I'm eager to know if I curbed my metaphor-happy ways in this, along with any general criticism you have. Thanks!

Short Story
Please Review: What Frank Said     (18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Family :: Psychology
Description: A young man's secret is revealed...

Request By: willy
Request Info: This is the polished up version of a writer's cramp entry; my attempt to employ some Christian imageryicongraphy to a modern setting

Poetry
Please Review: Night     (18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Cultural
Description: My attempt at free verse/prose poem.

Request By: Antonia
Request Info: I have just completely re written parts of this chapter and would appreciate opinions, this one is important to me so it gives auto reward points for reviews plus I award extra if the review is good :) so... thanks in advance

Chapter
Please Review: War of the Fires     (18+)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Romance/Love :: Occult
Description: Holly will become more than they ever imagined...

Request By: kittycat
Request Info: Please give me suggestions to improve my writing. Thank you!

Poetry
Please Review: Betty Crock     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: small poem

Request By: Gigi
Request Info: Please review. Much appreciated :)

Chapter
Please Review: Anvor's Bane     (E)
Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy
Description: Kattalin makes a discovery that will alter the fate of the world forever...

Request By: Bman2095
Request Info: Hi. I wrote this a while ago and would love some feedback. If you're a fan of Dark Souls or Fantasy in general I think (and hope) you'll like it. I worked hard on it and would love some reviews. Thanks.

Short Story
Please Review: Dark Souls: The Knights of Balder (1)     (ASR)
Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Fanfiction
Description: Based off of the story of the kingdom of Balder from Dark Souls.

Request By: groovygirl
Request Info: Please read and give honest reviews.

Other
Please Review: Dear Me     (13+)
Genre(s): Entertainment
Description: Who shall win this little game

Request By: groovygirl
Request Info: Please read and give honest reviews.

Other
Please Review: Scribbles and Scratches     (13+)
Genre(s): Writing
Description: thoughts on writing

Request By: NRB
Request Info: Just give me a review of how you like it. I welcome the good, bad and ugly. Thank you

Poetry
Please Review: Rhyme Test     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: very simply a volley of rhymed words in a poetic style piece

Request By: Kat Boerema
Request Info: Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated.

Chapter
Please Review: Resonant Darkness Ch. 1     (13+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure :: Thriller/Suspense
Description: Chapter one of my new Sci-fi novel Resonant Darkness. Still in rough stages. Pre-editing.

Request By: Harry Hausen
Request Info: Does the plot make sense? Is anything too vague, too obvious? Do the characters and situations feel realistic?

Short Story
Please Review: The Golden Parachute     (13+)
Genre(s): Political :: Drama :: War
Description: Amidst the collapse of a dictatorship, a general receives a mysterious phone call.

Request By: mikema63
Request Info: Pretty please and thank you.

Fiction
Please Review: shutting the lights     (ASR)
Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Horror/Scary
Description: 98 word flash fiction.

Request By: Marijana
Request Info: I am looking for honest reviews and constructive criticism. Thanks in advance :)

Short Story
Please Review: Piece of Mind     (13+)
Genre(s): Thriller/Suspense
Description: You have to run now.

Request By: arknok
Request Info: This is background for a gaming world or novel setting. discussion on items that you find interesting or things you think are unclear are welcome.

Preface
Please Review: The Sylvan inquest     (18+)
Genre(s): Fantasy
Description: this is like background info for setting up a setting for a novel

Request By: mikema63
Request Info: Please

Short Story
Please Review: Uppity     (13+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Mystery
Description: Contest entry.

Request By: Mona Lisa
Request Info: I'm looking for feedback on this very short humorous poem. Thank you.

Poetry
Please Review: NOW THAT I'M TWELVE     (E)
Genre(s): Children's :: Comedy
Description: Children's fun poem

Request By: Mona Lisa
Request Info: Please give me your honest feedback on this poem. Thanks.

Poetry
Please Review: ROUTE 66     (E)
Genre(s): Family :: Travel :: Tribute
Description: Poem about traveling Route 66 in the 1950's and'60's.

Request By: turtlemoon
Request Info: Take a summer stroll with me along the marina. But be careful not to disturb the two on a tryst.

Poetry
Please Review: Tennessee Breeze     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Nature
Description: A tryst for two who had waited a long time to meet.

Request By: turtlemoon
Request Info: This piece is not a sad love story when realized there are... No Boundaries. I would like to know what you think.

Poetry
Please Review: No Boundaries     (E)
Genre(s): Relationship
Description: Time revealed love was not lost.

Request By: Oceanborne~Blogging
Request Info: A flash fiction for the Writer's Cramp. I would love to know what you think- an auto-reward is offered.

Short Story
Please Review: A Hard Choice     (13+)
Genre(s): Contest :: Writing.Com
Description: Susy is faced with a hard choice at the dinner table. An entry to the Writer's Cramp.

Request By: J. A.
Request Info: Review this piece, Any feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank you.

Poetry
Please Review: Dissent     (E)
Genre(s): Writing :: Arts :: Other
Description: A small rebellious piece, from a kind heart. Enjoy, feel free to dissent from me

Request By: IsiFeliciano
Request Info: Calling all Walking Dead fans! I've posted two chapters of my Walking Dead fanfiction. It's my first attempt at Fanfiction of any kind but when an idea pops into my head, I must exercise the demons! Will review in kind. Thanks!

Fiction
Please Review: Cost of Living - Chapter One     (13+)
Genre(s): Fanfiction :: Horror/Scary :: Drama
Description: Walking Dead Fan Fiction that takes place during the search for Sophia. Work in progress.

Request By: NYC Dennis
Request Info: I heard a chilling interview on WNYC by Brian Lehrer of James Dawes about how good people turn evil. This short story explores how it could happen.

Short Story
Please Review: Sasha’s Last Day     (18+)
Genre(s): War :: Personal :: Dark
Description: Inspired by James Dawes' interview on WNYC, this explores how good people become bad

Request By: kittycat
Request Info: would like to improve on my poetry, so suggestions are welcome.. Thank you!

Poetry
Please Review: FAMILY     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: An acrostic poem..

Request By: willy
Request Info: Inspired, if that's the right word, by something Wren wrote

Poetry
Please Review: Out Of Season     (13+)
Genre(s): Relationship :: Nature :: Emotional
Description: cruel summer - seasons do not always match your emotions

Request By: ForNeverYours
Request Info: interested more in the emotional/intellectual reaction as opposed to a grammer/style review of this piece, but anything is welcome

Poetry
Please Review: WALKABOUT     (E)
Genre(s): Experience :: Personal :: Spiritual
Description: about taking inventory of life and self

Request By: Vacant Vagrant
Request Info: A work in progress. Very raw, so I expect plenty of nitpicking. Want to make sure that the story is flowing. Thanks for any look-sees!

Short Story
Please Review: Less Than Human, Part 1     (13+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Action/Adventure :: Thriller/Suspense
Description: Four aliens are on the run from humans...with only a mentally challenged man as an ally

Request By: Howler of the Moon
Request Info: I would like to know if I need to fix some of my rhymes, or at least what you think.

Other
Please Review: Death and Rebirth     (E)
Genre(s): Environment :: Entertainment :: Transportation
Description: A poem based off a nut's travel to land.

Request By: junnie
Request Info: this is my first writing review....everything is welcome. This is a poem that came to me recently when I needed a catharsis. thank you, junnie

Poetry
Please Review: conversion... baptism by drowning     (ASR)
Genre(s): Personal :: Emotional :: Spiritual
Description: POEM re: an oceanic struggle

Request By: double A- elated
Request Info: This is one of the items where I have very many views but only one review so please review and enjoy reading it.

Short Story
Please Review: Being Strong     (ASR)
Genre(s): Family :: Parenting :: Contest Entry
Description: Daddy always made her strong.

Request By: Holden Caulfield
Request Info: Please review my work I will reciprocate.

Other
Please Review: Hidden in the walls     (E)
Genre(s): Psychology :: Tragedy :: Emotional
Description: Tribute to the 3 women held captive in Cleveland (Ohio)

Request By: lucretius
Request Info: Just looking for some helpful feedback regarding plot and character.

Short Story
Please Review: Hemlock     (13+)
Genre(s): Drama :: Family :: Melodrama
Description: Unlike the plants she grew to heal, a mother's daughters grow into something dark.

Request By: Mage
Request Info: Looking for reviews of the satiric sci fi short story.

Short Story
Please Review: To Be or Not To Be a Bot     (13+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Satire
Description: The story of a young man and the bot that changed his life - revised

Request By: Vacant Vagrant
Request Info: Need fresh eyes on this piece. Criticism welcomed!

Short Story
Please Review: The Things They Abandoned     (E)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Thriller/Suspense :: Other
Description: A crew on a ravaged alien planet discover what was left when the indigenous race fled.

Request By: FireFly_2
Request Info: Inspired by a prompt. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks.

Short Story
Please Review: The Door     (E)
Genre(s): Mystery :: Supernatural
Description: Lurking shadows might be more than Stephen can handle.

Request By: FireFly_2
Request Info: Thanks for any feedback.

Poetry
Please Review: What Is A Mother?     (E)
Genre(s): Tribute :: Parenting :: Emotional
Description: A tribute to all mothers.

Request By: Elric
Request Info: Any reviews are welcome, GPs offered.

Short Story
Please Review: Hanging in There     (18+)
Genre(s): Sci-fi :: War :: Action/Adventure
Description: 2258.10.12.

Request By: Janie Nars
Request Info: this is short

Fiction
Please Review: Dressed for Success     (E)
Genre(s): Fashion :: Opinion
Description: what the dolls are wearing on your phone

Request By: CarolAnn
Request Info: This is book one of trilogy that I am working currently working on. It is primarily for young adults but hope that adults will enjoy it too. I would really like some feedback on these chapters. Comments on writing style and structure are very welcome.

Chapter
Please Review: The Sybilline Prophecy: Lavender's Quest     (13+)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Mythology :: Mystery
Description: Kezia and Lavender are Druideans and they must run to escape from the evil Mordra.

Request By: kdugan
Request Info: Comments are wanted. I just wanted to share. Thank you.

Poetry
Please Review: On in to God's face I go     (E)
Genre(s): Philosophy :: Emotional :: Religious
Description: Learning from life as I go.

Request By: gutguzzler
Request Info: Hi guys, here's my vampire love story with a dark twist. Love some feedback.

Short Story
Please Review: I Am Vampire     (18+)
Genre(s): Supernatural :: Romance/Love :: Dark
Description: Vampire Seeks love

Request By: - - - Uncle Harris - - -
Request Info: Hey - less than 500 words, and reviews earn GP... so what are you waiting for? Thanks in advance!

Sample
Please Review: The Peace Brigade (Preface)     (18+)
Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Psychology :: Philosophy
Description: An insight into the mind of 'The Head' of a brutal underground criminal network.

Request By: Vulture
Request Info: I need to have this reviewd for some contest here. Thanks for your time if you choose to review this..

Poetry
Please Review: Has a clever mind.     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: An impression on a hot, sticky friday afternoon..

Request By: NRB
Request Info: Please read this mournful poem about losing the one you love to someone else.

Poetry
Please Review: I still love you     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional
Description: a poem about losing one's love

Request By: silence
Request Info: thoughts?

Poetry
Please Review: Word-Monger     (E)
Genre(s): Environment :: Nonsense :: Experience
Description: A tuesday morning

Request By: Minna - Rising Star
Request Info: I'd like to know what you think.

Other
Please Review: The Melody in Sorrow     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Spiritual :: Nature
Description: There is a melody in sadness...

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