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Request By: Beatrix Amber Robinson Request Info: Hi, I'd like reviews focusing on the imagery and the structure. Thank you for your time. Poetry Please Review: An Apple From Tartarus     (13+) Genre(s): Personal :: Emotional :: Experience Description: The object of my desire is so close but I cannot touch. Request By: Sandra G Request Info: titled: Chaotic Hypnotic. A poem on fighting the inner demon that comes out of one's metaphysical darkness; the battle and it's damages. Poetry Please Review: Chaotic Hypnotic     (13+) Genre(s): Dark :: Gothic Description: Very dark poem. Hints at depressive and suicidal tendencies Request By: Ernest Huxley Request Info: I realize this is a bit long (around 4,000 words), but I was hoping someone could tell me what they think. If you get bored and don't want to read anymore, I would be interested in knowing at which point you lost interest. Short Story Please Review: Outside the Village called Pratidana     (18+) Genre(s): Cultural :: Experience :: Travel Description: Traveling on a road through Rajasthan, India, an American boy discovers a morbid scene. Request By: TheSorcerersHallows Request Info: This is chapter 13 of my novel and my favorite chapter so far. I would love your opinions :) better read than described. Other Please Review: Finally     (E) Genre(s): Young Adult :: Romance/Love :: Action/Adventure Description: Claire and Gage break free from capture & finally admit their feelings towards each other Request By: Antonia Request Info: This is my favourite project at the moment, so, any thoughts will be much apreiciated :) Chapter Please Review: War of the Fires     (18+) Genre(s): Fantasy :: Romance/Love :: Occult Description: Holly is introduced into the supernatural world and it has a lot in store for her. Request By: Antonia Request Info: New addition! Please review the poem in general and not the grammer,unless it really gets in the way of your enjoyment of the poem, if so, let rip! You will be rewarded :) Other Please Review: Masks     (E) Genre(s): Emotional :: Satire :: Experience Description: We never reveal our trueselves and the ones that do, get hurt Request By: Angel Request Info: Please review! Poetry Please Review: My Love     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: A love poem. Request By: Crazy Writer Request Info: Short poem- feedback much appreciated Poetry Please Review: The Voice     (E) Genre(s): Philosophy Description: What is truth? Written in response to the philosophical question 'what is real?' Request By: Bookworm13 Request Info: This is just a little poem I'm writing for a competition this year, I'd like to hear what you guys have to say about it, and if I should submit it. PEASE READ!!!! Other Please Review: Falling     (13+) Genre(s): Dark Description: One step, and it would be over. One step, and I'd be free. Request By: 4thPseudonym Request Info: Anything you think is fine. This is supposed to be a second chapter following an exciting opening, so it starts out in a relaxed pace. Is it too boring? is the (unfinished) scene at the end going in the right direction? Thanks! Draft Please Review: Mjara of the True Faith     (13+) Genre(s): Fantasy :: Action/Adventure :: Philosophy Description: A working draft on a single character's chapter; see {bitem:1810004} . Request By: to.make.you.think. Request Info: Recently edited and would like reviews. Thanks! Short Story Please Review: Whirling Memories     (E) Genre(s): Personal :: Environment Description: My first memories involve tornadoes. Request By: The Light Request Info: Be honest in your review..Thanks in advance. Poetry Please Review: THE WISHES OF THE DEAD     (E) Genre(s): Mystery Description: The dead wishing to live againg. Must the dead live again? Request By: Danny Darko Request Info: The first two chapters of my book Dogs, some changes have been made since the original draft and i have uploaded a further three chapters for those interested. Reviews welcome for all my uploads, Enjoy! (: Fiction Please Review: Dogs Chapters 1-2     (18+) Genre(s): Dark :: Thriller/Suspense :: Fantasy Description: A continuation of my first upload, some changes to the opening chapters. Enjoy! Request By: Trevor Prescott Request Info: 2/12 Daily Slice Horror Contest Entry Other Please Review: The Scartist of Wolfstone     (13+) Genre(s): Arts :: Horror/Scary :: Contest Entry Description: The Scartist of Wolfstone carves his tour de force. Request By: Rema.....A rising star. Request Info: I would like any feedback, and an in-depth review would make me delightful Chapter Please Review: Chapter Two "Pretty Egypt"     (13+) Genre(s): History :: Romance/Love :: Emotional Description: A secret past burdens Gameela, will she be able to open up to her daughter? Request By: Rema.....A rising star. Request Info: Please I need feedback Chapter Please Review: Chapter Three "Pretty Egypt"     (13+) Genre(s): History Description: Now the story begins Request By: allenalien Request Info: Chapter 2 of a The Rebirth of Tonio Herrera, a somewhat historical novel set in early Spanish Colonial America. You'll have to read Ch 1 to know what's happening. Generous GPs for reviews. Other Please Review: The Rebirth of Tonio Herrera - Chapter 2     (13+) Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: History Description: Herrera's fortunes improve after La Florida and he meets de León again. Request By: Tmac Request Info: An attempt to rekindle an old relationship. Thanks for the review Short Story Please Review: PLEASE COME BACK     (E) Genre(s): Activity :: Friendship :: Relationship Description: Trying to ignite an old comfortable relationship of love Request By: Lilithmoon Request Info: This was written for a daily prompt contest. The prompt was write a story about a cat. I have revised this several times but I can't seem to get it right. Any comments, reviews or suggestions would be greatly appreciated. Thanks! Short Story Please Review: Adopted     (13+) Genre(s): Dark :: Psychology :: Thriller/Suspense Description: A young captive looks out the window to a Siamese cat for help Request By: - Angelie. Request Info: New song :) Lyrics Please Review: - Friends until the end.     (E) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Friendship Description: Friends until the end. You said it... Request By: willy Request Info: This started as apology to someone that I hurt in love, funny they say you get back what you give out. Poetry Please Review: Love's Lost Game     (18+) Genre(s): Relationship Description: A sad story of lost love - my worst poem ever Request By: SmokeyM Request Info: First draft of a new story I just finished, would love some feedback Short Story Please Review: Gambler     (13+) Genre(s): Drama :: Western Description: A man enters a poker tournament for motives other than money Request By: Magoo Request Info: I would love to get some reviews of this poem. Poetry Please Review: The Groundhog Overslept     (E) Genre(s): Comedy :: Contest Description: His life has taken a sudden twist. Request By: DANIELLIAN ALLORDAE LITERATURE Request Info: Please review this.....All gifted by you, whither my gifts left to be offered, a Daniellian God Appreciation poem Poetry Please Review: THOU GIFT! THY GIFTS! WHITHER MY GIFTS!     (E) Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Activity :: Inspirational Description: All gifted by you, whither my gifts left to be offered, a Daniellian God Appreciation poem Request By: DANIELLIAN ALLORDAE LITERATURE Request Info: Please review this Daniellian Poem. Poetry Please Review: ARRANGED PRIOR! GIFTED DEAR!     (E) Genre(s): Other :: Inspirational Description: All arranged gifted before you were created to take birth; A Daniellian God Appreciation Request By: Thundersbeard Request Info: With all the contests, challenges and courses that I do here on WDC, not to mention the blogging as well, I got a bit sick of writing an introductory spiel about myself. So I got creative. Have entered this one in this months Bard Hall Contest too. Other Please Review: In Search of Corn Bread: A Memoir.     (E) Genre(s): Animal :: Biographical :: Food/Cooking Description: I got sick of writing about myself for challenges and courses. Got creative instead. Request By: Tmac Request Info: One of my most fun business trips. Please review......thanks, TMac Short Story Please Review: Fun in Dublin Ireland     (13+) Genre(s): Travel :: Experience :: Foreign Description: Thirty five years of world business travel. Here is the most memorable. Request By: Jeska Grace Request Info: “Why is there an empty display?” Sol asked. Then the machines reappeared. “What’s going on?” There was a tremor in Jade's voice. “Someone’s trying to change the past,” Laike said. “Jade, can you get the Lady Fate working again?” Serial Please Review: Travellers - Setting Things Right     (13+) Genre(s): Sci-fi :: Fantasy :: Action/Adventure Description: Someone's gone back in time, and is changing the future, but it isn't Sol, Jade, & Laike. Request By: Pegasus Request Info: A personal poem on the passing of my father. Poetry Please Review: The Parting     (E) Genre(s): Personal :: Death Description: A poem for my father. Request By: Conorzzy Request Info: Any feedback greatly appreciated Poetry Please Review: The Stag     (E) Genre(s): Nature :: Animal Description: Poem about a stag Request By: gantrell Request Info: looking for general feedback. not completely happy with the ending. Short Story Please Review: Companion     (13+) Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Pets :: Animal Description: A zombie story of survival told from a cat and dog's point of view Request By: LucentSeer Request Info: I'm really trying to improve my technique. All feedback is dearly appreciated. Thank you for your time. Poetry Please Review: The Moon Laments     (E) Genre(s): Nature :: Mythology :: Other Description: This is just a little piece about my love of the night, and why the moon must leave. Request By: millershelly Request Info: Hide-and-Seek [E] 1.0 KB this game we play... Genres: Comedy :: Children's Poetry Please Review: Hide-and-Seek     (E) Genre(s): Comedy :: Children's Description: this game we play... Request By: millershelly Request Info: Between Then and Forever [E] 0.7 KB my story... Genres: Inspirational :: Fantasy Poetry Please Review: Between Then and Forever     (E) Genre(s): Inspirational :: Fantasy Description: my story... Request By: BigAl Request Info: A satire of the Big Bang Other Please Review: The Biggest Bang     (E) Genre(s): Comedy :: Satire Description: a short story - A satire of the Big Bang Request By: Molly Request Info: All feedback is greatly appreciated. Thanks! Short Story Please Review: East of Omaha     (13+) Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Mystery :: Thriller/Suspense Description: A twisted case of mistaken identity Request By: - Angelie. Request Info: New song :) Lyrics Please Review: - It's On.     (13+) Genre(s): Erotica :: Romance/Love :: Relationship Description: It's a hussy song, people. So don't be too chocked :) Request By: strlcuckoo Request Info: It is often hard to choose. Other Please Review: Torn     (E) Genre(s): Emotional :: Family Description: we all have choices to make Request By: strlcuckoo Request Info: Dreams are just so....???? Poetry Please Review: One Night     (E) Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Emotional Description: dreams can be so, can't they? Request By: silence Request Info: please review. any criticism is welcome Letter/Memo Please Review: Letters to Kritika:1     (E) Genre(s): Other Description: A walk through clouds Request By: The Light Request Info: Be honest in your reviews in order for me to perfect my writing style. Thanks in advance. Poetry Please Review: TEMPTATION     (E) Genre(s): Adult :: Emotional :: Psychology Description: Tempting thoughts that kept reoccurring instantaneously Request By: Lisa Dawn -- One day at a time Request Info: Give me the bottom line - I can take it - brutally honest help me make this better - GP auto awarded Poetry Please Review: Masterpiece     (E) Genre(s): Personal :: Educational :: Experience Description: I wanted to but I had some problems Request By: MarkLewis ~ a mirage Request Info: Hmmm. If you have that kind of BOOK, would you tamper with it? Short Story Please Review: No one waits for you longer than I do     (13+) Genre(s): Death :: Dark :: History Description: "Now folks, that's not love. That's my JOB. For I am a ... " Request By: Lily Anderson Request Info: These are 5 light verse poems I had to write for a class. Usually I am quite good and comfortable with my poetry, but it is in my own format. These gave me the worst time, and I HATE how they sound! Please help, because I need it, a lot! D; Poetry Please Review: 5 short light verse poems     (E) Genre(s): Other :: Dark :: Emotional Description: These are 5 short light verse poems I had to write for English. Request By: Creativity5(Maggie Michael) Request Info: i need reviews please ... it would help me alot gps are rewarded if you give me a helpful review pleaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaase Poetry Please Review: GRIEF     (13+) Genre(s): Dark :: Emotional :: Death Description: it talks about pain Request By: Meredith Request Info: I took a workshop in December from a well-known author and this story is one of the assignments I submitted. It got a mix of reviews. I would appreciate your honesty and am tough enough to take criticism. Thank you! Short Story Please Review: Sanctuary (1258 words) 202 Gift Points     (13+) Genre(s): Other :: Drama :: Experience Description: A man dealing with the loss of his child, for which he blames his wife. Request By: HorrorMoviez666 Request Info: Quite short. The first rough draft out of many. Need help on how to improve it for the 2nd rough draft. Tried to tell a story with larger emotions in very few words. Did it work? Is it too short? Well written? Really do appreciate it. GP's offered, too. Short Story Please Review: "Empty Places" [1st Rough Draft]     (13+) Genre(s): Drama Description: A short story (1029 words) that took a lot of work. GP's offered. Hope you enjoy. Request By: Lisa Dawn -- One day at a time Request Info: I want some brutal honesty -- help me make this what it can be Poetry Please Review: Does Justice Live?     (E) Genre(s): Emotional :: Romance/Love :: Personal Description: Loving justice. Request By: Trevor Prescott Request Info: Freshly chopped, screwed, butchered and re-glued Short Story Please Review: Jenny's Wager     (13+) Genre(s): Other :: Relationship :: Writing Description: Jenny bets her boyfriend that he can't go 24 hours without saying a specific word. Request By: Allegro con brio Request Info: I'm not very experienced when it comes to free verse poetry, so any opinions are welcome! Poetry Please Review: Where I'm From     (13+) Genre(s): Biographical :: Young Adult :: Experience Description: Written in 2011 - inspired by the original poem, "Where I'm From", by George Ella Lyon Total Displayed: 50

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