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Request By: swantonist View swantonist's Portfolio.  [Online Now]Email User: swantonist [Online Now]
Request Info: please review this sample from a novel i am writing

Sample
Please Review: her throat vulnerable     (18+)
Genre(s): Teen :: Psychology :: Philosophy
Description: two 17-year olds leave their houses at night

Request By: Scarlet Black View scarletblack's Portfolio.  [Online Now]Email User: scarletblack [Online Now]
Request Info: I experimented with second person in this story. Please review!

Other
Please Review: Moments     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship :: Women's
Description: Moments slip by, no matter how you try to preserve them. Written in second person.

Request By: Mr. Winston O'Brien View xb00042's Portfolio.  [Online Now]Email User: xb00042 [Online Now]
Request Info: Please review. I'll review your work in return.

Poetry
Please Review: Memorial to a Credulous Youth     (E)
Genre(s): Philosophy :: Personal :: Arts
Description: Please review.

Request By: Leif View savegunpowder's Portfolio.  [Online Now]Email User: savegunpowder [Online Now]
Request Info: Read and review!

Script/Play
Please Review: Cody & Gulch, Pt 2: Sic Semper Tyrannis     (18+)
Genre(s): Friendship :: War :: Death
Description: Pursued by Death, our heroes become unwittingly involved in a great historical tragedy.

Request By: TerJa View ralrac's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: ralrac [Offline / Private]
Request Info: I have reworked this sonnet, but it still doesn't feel right. Am I losing my touch?

Poetry
Please Review: Sonnet #5     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Personal :: Emotional
Description: A sonnet on the night we met.

Request By: Azalel View freshazimiz's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: freshazimiz [Offline / Private]
Request Info: chapter 2 is complete. just need some reviews so i can improve. please and thank you

Chapter
Please Review: Naija Sun: Chapter 2     (13+)
Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Sci-fi :: Fantasy
Description: An African teen with great abilities stages a coup d'etat against his tyrannical uncle

Request By: D. R. Prescott View donprescott's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: donprescott [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Something for you to think about.

Essay
Please Review: Too Many People     (E)
Genre(s): Nature :: Environment :: Technology
Description: Too many people, too little space, increasing demand for energy.

Request By: LoveVMC View rtomasthompson's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: rtomasthompson [Offline / Private]
Request Info: This is a poem of prose that I've been tweaking for a long while... it is what I call a sensual-fantasy a person has with that one special friendship, which if we are lucky it becomes reality… tell me what you think.

Poetry
Please Review: A vow     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Friendship :: Relationship
Description: A secrete promise never spoken... words of a real and loving friend.

Request By: LoveVMC View rtomasthompson's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: rtomasthompson [Offline / Private]
Request Info: It is said that this is a deep classical story... but well written; so, if you don't want to wrack your head to critique/comments don't read this short story. Looking for honest critique… tell me what you think.

Fiction
Please Review: Loss of Touch     (E)
Genre(s): Contest Entry :: Fantasy :: Death
Description: If you like Edgar Poe, this is in tribute and to hope his spirit lives on and on and...

Request By: Proofreading book 3! View tattsnteeth2's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: tattsnteeth2 [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Another quick piece about dreams versus reality. Please let me know what you think about this piece.

Poetry
Please Review: A New Orleans Morning     (13+)
Genre(s): Cultural :: Death :: Drama
Description: I would love to wake up to peace.

Request By: Proofreading book 3! View tattsnteeth2's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: tattsnteeth2 [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Just a quick piece about salvation and accepting God. Give it a read and let me know what you think please.

Poetry
Please Review: A Minute in Time     (E)
Genre(s): Philosophy :: Religious :: Spiritual
Description: How long is a moment?

Request By: zeacane View zeacane's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: zeacane [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Would appreciate your reviews of my short piece and welcome any critique. Thank you.

Essay
Please Review: ACCEPTING REALITY     (13+)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Psychology :: Contest Entry
Description: Reality is a formidable foe none can escape. No matter where you hide, it will find you.

Request By: Linzzy Jane View lindseyjane's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: lindseyjane [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Reviews appreciated, acrostic poem (History)I wrote for a contest here but now I can't find the contest. Curious how this piece sits.

Poetry
Please Review: His Story     (ASR)
Genre(s): Contest Entry :: History
Description: Contest entry - Acrostic poem (History)

Request By: Leif View savegunpowder's Portfolio.  [Online Now]Email User: savegunpowder [Online Now]
Request Info: First act of a short screenplay. Much obliged for a review or two ;)

Script/Play
Please Review: Cody & Gulch, Pt 1: The Land of the Dead     (18+)
Genre(s): Friendship :: War :: Death
Description: A Civil War soldier must travel into the afterlife to rescue his fallen friend. Part 1/3

Request By: checkoff View kawfeedave's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: kawfeedave [Offline / Private]
Request Info: More plot, more characters, more reasons to run away. Did I mention the baseball and sport gambling aspects to come?

Novella
Please Review: The Pirates Festival -Part Two     (18+)
Genre(s): Crime/Gangster :: Detective :: Folklore
Description: We meet our detectives Benny and Buster and find the origin of The Pirates Festival

Request By: checkoff View kawfeedave's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: kawfeedave [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Better now? You may be the judge and, of course, the jury too.

Novella
Please Review: The Pirates Festival     (18+)
Genre(s): Adult :: Crime/Gangster :: Spiritual
Description: Start of a novella with, as usual, several intertwined plots.

Request By: Magoo View nerraw's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: nerraw [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Any and all reviews and suggestions are greatly appreciated.

Poetry
Please Review: Raising Kids Alone     (E)
Genre(s): Comedy :: Contest :: Animal
Description: He spewed his loving words but left me in shame.

Request By: marti stevens couch View marticouch's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: marticouch [Offline / Private]
Request Info: please read and rate. thank you

Short Story
Please Review: A MOMENT IN TIME     (E)
Genre(s): Experience :: Emotional :: Fanfiction
Description: A BRIEF MOMENT IN TIME

Request By: a.bell View abell7680's Portfolio.  [Online Now]Email User: abell7680 [Online Now]
Request Info: Something I wrote in a 24-hour period, would like some feedback on the quality. Will happily review your work in return.

Short Story
Please Review: Welcome to America, Ana Zdychava!     (E)
Genre(s): Travel :: Transportation
Description: Ana is starting a new life, but first she must survive the horrors of air travel.

Request By: Georgiana View georgiana16's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: georgiana16 [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Literary fiction short.

Short Story
Please Review: Vickie     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Contest
Description: Vickie Mae and her last gift to the world

Request By: spiderx23 View jtop90's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: jtop90 [Offline / Private]
Request Info: please review

Chapter
Please Review: Reaped     (13+)
Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Comedy :: Supernatural
Description: Jared,Steven and Barry rule death literraly

Request By: Manixander View manixander's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: manixander [Offline / Private]
Request Info: First flash fiction, have a read, tell me what you think. Thanks

Short Story
Please Review: Riding the Sunset     (E)
Genre(s): Death
Description: A flash fiction. 100 words about the ride you only take once.

Request By: Josh View horus's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: horus [Offline / Private]
Request Info: New chapter added. I'd like honest critque of it please. The plot moves on...

Other
Please Review: Empires Dawn     (13+)
Genre(s): History :: War :: Fantasy
Description: Imperial Rome is riven with strife and only one family has the ability to stop it...

Request By: Crafty Ninja View ninjacraft's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: ninjacraft [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Please Rate and Review. I'm looking to see if this episode - works as a season finale - is funny - if the story flows

Script/Play
Please Review: Life On Camera: Web-Comic: Episode 6     (13+)
Genre(s): Comedy :: Fantasy :: Nonsense
Description: Please Review! What happens when a witch gets her own TV Show? Pretty much anything...

Request By: Hello1 View narniafan's Portfolio.  [Online Now]Email User: narniafan [Online Now]
Request Info: I will read and review in return. Won't make sense w/out other three chapters.

Chapter
Please Review: That Fateful Day chapter 4     (13+)
Genre(s): Drama :: Friendship :: Other
Description: Fay has bad dreams. This will not make sense without the other three chapters.

Request By: Pat Ryan View patandmike's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: patandmike [Offline / Private]
Request Info: My first attempt at fiction.

Short Story
Please Review: Memories of Abuse     (13+)
Genre(s): Melodrama
Description: A man is haunted by a childhood trauma he doesn't remember.

Request By: John R Patterson View masterofclass's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: masterofclass [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Another dark love poem sry!

Poetry
Please Review: A dosage of destruction     (E)
Genre(s): Dark :: Romance/Love :: Gothic
Description: A poem about feeling the effects of missing someone

Request By: ShannonB View futurejrnalst's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: futurejrnalst [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Read and review Saturday Night. An emotional poem of experience.

Poetry
Please Review: Saturday Night     (13+)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Personal :: Experience
Description: A brief description of an experience of losing self control.

Request By: jncobbs View jncobbs's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: jncobbs [Offline / Private]
Request Info: R&R please. Highly appreciate it. Plan on entering this into a contest soon.

Short Story
Please Review: Dreaming in Color     (ASR)
Genre(s): Death :: Tragedy
Description: A school fire changes the lives of five students.

Request By: willy View willycan's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: willycan [Offline / Private]
Request Info: An oldie I happened across but I'm struggling to find a rhyme for last line

Poetry
Please Review: The League of Nations     (13+)
Genre(s): Comedy
Description: A new olympic endurance event

Request By: dewfrosted woodland child View orangefiire's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: orangefiire [Offline / Private]
Request Info: New, want feedback!

Poetry
Please Review: Rose for Madame     (13+)
Genre(s): Women's :: Romance/Love :: Drama
Description: All she wants is her relationship set in stone. She learns that it already sort of was.

Request By: TracyLewis View trace63's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: trace63 [Offline / Private]
Request Info: review this I will return the review 100 gps 4 qualified reviews This is a Christian work

Poetry
Please Review: Testimony     (E)
Genre(s): Personal :: Religious :: Inspirational
Description: A poem describing my current relationship with Jesus Christ

Request By: Adam Thomas View adamccthomas's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: adamccthomas [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Short, easy-read, children's poem. Let me know what you liked best and what you thought could use some work, and any other critiques you could offer.

Poetry
Please Review: Waiting     (E)
Genre(s): Other :: Children's
Description: Life is what happens while we're making plans.

Request By: John R Patterson View masterofclass's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: masterofclass [Offline / Private]
Request Info: A christmas poem plz review ty

Poetry
Please Review: My Christmas to you     (E)
Genre(s): Emotional :: Family :: Romance/Love
Description: A love poem for christmas

Request By: Karin_Rydle View karin_rydle's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: karin_rydle [Offline / Private]
Request Info: He's falling to his death... or is he?

Novel
Please Review: Remembrance     (E)
Genre(s): Drama :: Romance/Love :: Supernatural
Description: He's falling to his death... or is he?

Request By: DJ. Venson View helenjoyce's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: helenjoyce [Offline / Private]
Request Info: This is the first part of, 'The Find'. Just thinking about what's going to happen in the following chapters. Gives me the creeps!

Novella
Please Review: The Find     (18+)
Genre(s): Horror/Scary :: Thriller/Suspense
Description: The greatest, 'Find' of his career was soon to arrive. It shouldn't have been unearth!

Request By: Andrea Jones View findyourfear's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: findyourfear [Offline / Private]
Request Info: You get around 1000 GP's per review, need some midly honest reviews. Thank you.

Short Story
Please Review: Picture Perfect (13/11/09)     (18+)
Genre(s): Dark :: Death :: Detective
Description: Called to a crime scene, Officer doesn't realize what is about to unfold...

Request By: Tyson View wookid's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: wookid [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Looks aren't always what they seem.

Short Story
Please Review: Countess of Delawyn (draft)     (13+)
Genre(s): Fantasy :: Horror/Scary
Description: Two thieves plot to steal an amulet which allegedly provides eternal youth.

Request By: sid View mass131987's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: mass131987 [Offline / Private]
Request Info: please review...

Poetry
Please Review: Waiting here for you     (E)
Genre(s): Romance/Love :: Relationship
Description: She promises to hangout with him but is late today as she always is...

Request By: sid View mass131987's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: mass131987 [Offline / Private]
Request Info: your thoughts please...

Poetry
Please Review: A Present from Paradise     (E)
Genre(s): Relationship :: Romance/Love :: Young Adult
Description: He is deeply in love with her, but is scared to let her know.

Request By: Tim Chiu View mirtx's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: mirtx [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Please review and rate.

Poetry
Please Review: The Herky-Jerky Wild Turkey     (E)
Genre(s): Animal :: Food/Cooking :: Cultural
Description: A comedic poem about a turkey who gets eaten for Thanksgiving.

Request By: A.J. Barretts View fiana_darklord's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: fiana_darklord [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Yet another denial, can someone help me with what is wrong with this piece?

Short Story
Please Review: Last Call     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: Living with a firefighter has its problems.

Request By: Pace View misteranthony's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: misteranthony [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Abstract piece: would love a review, thank you.

Poetry
Please Review: Shaman's trance     (E)
Genre(s): Psychology :: Philosophy :: Relationship
Description: What if you're not alone in your meditation?

Request By: Breezy View janae's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: janae [Offline / Private]
Request Info: very interested to know what people think about this!

Poetry
Please Review: RoadKill     (E)
Genre(s): Environment :: Animal
Description: The city is seen through the eyes of an animals who live there. This is a very green poem

Request By: calean View leon32's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: leon32 [Offline / Private]
Request Info: I think that this is good, let me know if I'm right or wrong

Poetry
Please Review: my dream about Kerouac     (18+)
Genre(s): Travel :: Action/Adventure :: Friendship
Description: A poem about a dream I had with Jack Kerouac in it

Request By: Penn Cill View staticage's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: staticage [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Please review this little stream of conscious piece I wrote down today. GPs available!

Prose
Please Review: Sour Milk in the Sunshine     (18+)
Genre(s): Adult :: Writing :: Melodrama
Description: Stream of Consciousness, Spontaneous Prose, A little diddy about growing up.

Request By: Threadbare View minemcb's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: minemcb [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Obviously I am not a pro and have taken no formal writing classes. If you feel you can help, please share your thoughts.

Poetry
Please Review: Summers gone.     (E)
Genre(s): Other
Description: A revelation that comes with time.

Request By: Threadbare View minemcb's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: minemcb [Offline / Private]
Request Info: Please, honestly let me know what you think of this. I am new to being reviewed by others and wish to know if I should pursue writing.

Poetry
Please Review: Self Set Aside     (13+)
Genre(s): Death :: Dark :: Psychology
Description: A relation to the want of hope.. a soul.. near lost. (At the risk of seeming dark)

Request By: Ian Hughes View ianhughes's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: ianhughes [Offline / Private]
Request Info: A short story I wrote at work. Please note I am neither anti-God or anti-humanity. I am however anti-velociraptor.

Short Story
Please Review: The Seven Days     (ASR)
Genre(s): Religious :: Comedy :: Spiritual
Description: A man achieves God's divine power and uses it for the betterment of mankind.

Request By: Azalel View freshazimiz's Portfolio.  [Offline / Private]Email User: freshazimiz [Offline / Private]
Request Info: hope you enjoy this

Chapter
Please Review: Naija Sun: Chapter 1     (13+)
Genre(s): Action/Adventure :: Fantasy :: Sci-fi
Description: An African teen with great abilities stages a coup d'etat against his tyrannical uncle

Total Displayed: 50


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