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TV Expansion, Vore, Weight Gain, Unbirth
A selection of shows and characters that I believe need to be expanded in some way.
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  Chapter 10: Human's can't breath underwater!   (ID #720781)
    an addition by: SonicV  More by this author

The next thing Ariel knew, she felt the cool ocean water between her toes. Then the next thing she realized, was that she had toes! She had legs, just the people who live on land. Not even the fact that she just kissed that sea cow could bring her down now. At last she could pass as one of them, search the lands for true love and be free from all the restricitons her father had cast upon his underwater kingdom.

There was only one problem, she couldn't breath!

A surge of bubbles came from Ariel's mouth as before she closed it. At first, she didn't understand what was happening. She had been breathing in water for the past sixteen years. Then it hit her. Mermaids could breath underwater, but humans can't, and now she was a human!

"There you go, a true human girl. How does it feel?...What's wrong darling?" Usula asked, trying to play it off like she had no idea what was going on. It was hard to keep herself from smiling at this particular moment. Before her was the perfect pray. A helpless human girl with the most succulent figure she had ever seen besides her own. Before, all she had to gawk at was her pretty face and those perky breasts packed into those seas shells, but now her magic had granted her much more of an eyeful. Those long and sleek legs would give her plenty to taste as she slurped them down, not too mention what lied between her legs.
Ursula stopped fantasizing about it then as she realized Ariel was pointing her neck.

"Oh, clumsy me. Humans don't have gills. Come here darling." before Ariel knew it, that barrage of black tentacles was wrapped around her body once again and she had her face squished into Ursula's bosom. It was bad enough that she was actually....oh what was the word humans used....Drowning! It was bad enough that she was drowning she thought, but now it seemed like Ursula wanted another kiss. Kissing her before was wrong, it was revolting, it was...oddly exciting...

"Perhaps you'd like to go somewhere where there is some air?" Ursula asked. She got a nod from the little mermaid, who's face was by now turning blue. Deciding the brat had suffered enough, she decided it was time to make her suffer even more for her own pleasure.

Ariel watched, managing to move her head from between those fat hooters squished on her face to see something rather disturbing. Before she knew, Ursula's mouth widened to great lengths, and water began to be sucked inside of it, making it look like a whirlpool.
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