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TV Expansion, Vore, Weight Gain, Unbirth
A selection of shows and characters that I believe need to be expanded in some way.
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Content Rating Notice: XGC -- May Contain Extreme Graphic Content
Only For: 18 and Older, Not Offended
This choice: SHE'S GONNA EAT ME!!! | Go Back

  Chapter 11: Take a Deep Breath   (ID #720794)
    an addition by: chaos  More by this author

With no air to breath, all Ariel could do was watch in horror as the sea witch opened her mouth wide and began to pull her in. Her lungs burning, Ariel couldn’t even fight the pull of Ursula’s mouth was inches away from it in seconds. Everything seemed to slow down as she looked into the cavernous maw. She saw Ursula’s gleaming white teeth, hanging from above and below her mouth. She saw the slimy inside, gleaming with saliva and some other fluids Ariel didn’t even want to think of. She saw the sea cows thick, slippery tongue, once in her own mouth and now sitting idly at the bottom of her jaw. Lastly, she looked into the dark hole at the end of the witch’s mouth, past her teeth, past the slime and past the tongue. A dark, seemingly endless hole that Ariel was heading strait towards. Time returned to normal and Ariel closed her eyes tightly as her face entered the mouth.

Ariel shuddered in terror as she felt the teeth brush past her hair and then the tongue sliding on her face. Despite knowing twas about to come, the touch of the slimy muscle against her delicate features still startled her, causing her to jump and open her eyes again. Inside the mouth, Ariel could only see down Ursula’s throat and saw the dark, slimy tunnel that lead down, down, down. Ariel closed her eyes again as she felt the tongue slide over her lips in a bizarre attempt to kiss her. The rest of her head was pulled into the Ursula’s mouth, completely trapped now. Ursula’s lips tightened around her neck, forming a skintight seal over her delicate throat. And that was what saved Ariel from dying, then at least.

Just as everything started to go black, the water were pulled down into the foreboding esophagus that Ariel was looking down. Water drained down Ursula’s throat and the now little human girl got her first breath of air. Ariel took a huge breath and then started coughing violently. The inside of Ursula’s mouth was foul. She couldn’t smell anything under the water when she was a mermaid, but now that she was as close as she could get to the sea cows breath, Ariel could smell the rotten scent of fish, Unable to get any breath anywhere else, Ariel breathed in the foul air, finding that even though it was terrible, it kept her alive. As she breathed in the only air available under the sea, Ursula started to wrap her up tightly with her tentacles, allowing Ariel to squirm, but not break free.

Smiling around the former mermaids head, Ursula’s pressed her tiny, frail body against her full, fat one. The touch of skin on skin excited Ursula and she swayed slightly. Too bad she couldn’t play with her food more. She was sure that she could get days and days of fun out of the lovely new air breather. She’d just have to enjoy the brief time she had with her now and make every second last.
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