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The Micro Patrol
A group of preteens fight crime with a shrink-ray gun!!!
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This is an interactive story containing 23 chapters. Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you will have the option to write it! Don't be shy... make an addition!
About This Interactive
The owner of this Interactive Story begins with this information and guidance:
Four preteens:

12-year-old Lisa Sarzotti:
She is the mature one of the group. She has long dark hair and brown eyes, and is very cute. She is Dave's girlfriend.

10-year-old Lucy Sarzotti: Lisa's younger sister. She is the mischievous one of the group, always getting into trouble. Like her older sister, Lucy has dark hair and brown eyes, but her hair is shorter. She is Steve's girlfriend.

12-year-old Dave Stellar: He is the genius of the group, with dark hair and blue eyes. Although he is only 12, his hobbies are pre-calculus algebra and reading advanced college physics textbooks. He is Lisa's boyfriend.

10-year-old Steve Steiner: He is the cool one of the group, modeling his behavior after James Dean. With short blonde hair combed in the latest style, he's the cuter of the two boys, and girls love him. Steve has blue eyes. Steve is Lucy's boyfriend.

Steve steals a shrink-ray gun from Lisa's dad, the owner of a corporation.

The quartet agree to use the device to fight crime, and embark on a mission as:
"The Micro-Patrol!"
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