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Anime Vore, GTS, GT, Shrinking, Unbirth
Anime characters have never been so wild before
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  Chapter 64: A Bite!   (ID #489782)
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At this point, Millie's mind was in conflict. Jim was just a meal, she should have no problem eating him, but he had offered to help her....no one had offered Millie any help for a long time, and this was a Terran!!
"To be honest" Jim started, "If you want to learn more about computers, thats simple, just take one apart and try to put it back together again. Thats how I first started learn more about electronics." Millie tried to look as if she was listening, but failed, "Hey, Millie, anybody home?" Millie awoke from her thoughts at the sound of Jim raising his voice, she had been far too busy contemplating whether or not she should eat Jim. "Yeah, yeah. Build it and take it apart, I get ya." Millie sharply responded with a hint of annoyance in her voice, which Jim had no problem detecting. Jim decided to stay quite for a while, he thought it best not to bother Millie while she was thinking.

After a long two minutes of silence, Jim broke the tension by announcing that he'd hooked a fish, "This feels like a big one!", "I hope it isnt that little bratt again" Millie practically spat out, she really didnt get on well with her supposed more intelligent little sister. "You really dont like Paige, do you?", Jim was starting to struggle with the fish hooked on the line now, "So? Whats it to you? Why do you even care?" Millie was starting to get hungry now, despite her one too many 'Love handles' she actually hadn't eaten for a while now and being hungry makes Ctarl-Ctarls very irritable to say the least! Once again, Jim felt like he'd best just not say anything, so as not to risk angering this hungry Ctarl-Ctarl anymore. Jim could tell she was hungry, just by the look in her eyes, it wasnt like the look that most Ctarl-Ctarl would give Terrans, this look was somewhat more desperate and, despite Jim's courage and bravery (one of the traits Aisha admired in him), he was beginning to get scared.

'He looks so tasty, I'm sure Aisha wouldnt mind. Its just a lump of meat, she'd get over it eventually' Millie thought to herself while drool began to hang off her bottom lip. 'Damn it! I dont care about Aisha, I'm hungry, I'm gonna eat this piece of meat! I am a predator, I refuse to let the people of the Ctarl-Ctarl down by sparing this puny Terran.' Jim couldn't keep the fear out of his voice, "Umm, Millie...y-your d-drooling."
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