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Jim and John were waiting just outside the spaceport. When Aisha didn't show up for 3 minutes, Jim became worried. Aisha was one of the proud Ctarl-Ctarl race, which was one of the strongest species in the universe. Very few species could overpower a Ctarl-Ctarl and Jim knew that well. Aisha would be tough to beat, but she wasn't immune to pain...or even death.
"I'm going back" said Jim. "you go and get Gene. Do you know the way to our place?"
"WHAT?!" asked John. "are you crazy? I say we should get out of here!"
"I can't leave Aisha behind" said Jim.
"She'll only eat you" said John. "she's a Ctarl-Ctarl"
"She'll never eat me" said Jim. "I'm one of her friends"
This made John shook his head. Jim must be crazy! Ctarl-Ctarl were an evil species that would eat you as soon as look at you.
"You do what you want" said Jim. "I'm going back to get Aisha"
Before John could say anything to stop him, Jim ran back into the spaceport.
"You're...an....android?" asked Aisha, out of breath and lying on the ground. Jerome had ripped off the rest of his artifical skin and his real face was shown. Jerome had a metallic face with those yellowish eyes.
"I'm...different from any android out there" said Jerome. "I'm the most advanced bio-android out there"
Aisha knew this was a lie, because Melfina was the most advanced bio-android.
"Melfina?" asked Jerome. "Melfina is a pocket calcuator compared to me. Oh yes, I can read your mind...and Melfina can too..but she doesn't know how to. Think of Melfina as my baby sister...my WEAK baby sister"
Janell only stared at Jerome. Connie was wide-eyed.
"Melfina...didn't tell....us...about...a brother" said Aisha, getting up from the floor slowly, still holding her sides.
"She doesn't know that I exist" said Jerome. "you see, Gwen Khan made me first...but he couldn't control me very well. I ran away from him, and he made another bio-android that could pilot the XGP to the Galactic Leyline"
"Hold it!" yelled Jim. He had returned, holding his blaster right at Jerome.
"Little whelp!" said Jerome, and he rushed at Jim with inhuman speed and knocked him over with a punch in the stomach. Jim had the wind knocked out of him...but he was still awake. Jim fired the blaster at Jerome, hitting him in the eye. Jim had fired the blaster before Jerome punched him. Now, Jerome's right eye showed little damage.
"I'd love to stay around" said Jerome. "but I have somewhere to go to now" Jerome then walked away, with Janell and Connie following him.
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