This choice: Hinata quickly grabs the fortress from its foundations | Go Back Chapter 20: The shy force of nature (ID #324140) an addition by: somedude ![View somedude248's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author Hinata ran towards her objective. Not subtly, the way a ninja would attempt to sneak up on its target, but with the force of a tank ready to roll right through anything in its path.
The soldiers and hired guards saw the enormous ninja, her every footfall landing with the force of an earthquake and ran in fear. Many dropped their weapons on the spot as they attempted to flee. Others simply dropped to their knees and begged for mercy, never seeing such a phenomenon in Wu.
"Now, Lord...what the?!"
The pleasant conversation Lord Jian was having with Lan Dao-Sheng was interrupted by the rumbling of the entire building. Neither man was able to do anything except escape through the nearest window. When they got to their feet, Jian realized his worst fears had come to pass.
"It was that powerful? And we lost it?"
"My Lord..."
"I doubt even she realizes the power she now posseses," Jian remarked as Hinata ran off with his estate being held high above her head. "The power to shape the world, as it fits in the palm of her hand."
"I am a Sun of the Dark Sky, my Lord. I can stop her." Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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