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Anime Vore, GTS, GT, Shrinking, Unbirth
Anime characters have never been so wild before
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  Chapter 20: An unlikely place, even for Jean   (ID #296607)
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This sudden movement is enough to make Jeanīs worst fears come true. Nadiaīs laughter moments before already put Jean into a dangerous position near her throat, but now itīs getting even worse. Grandis grasping at the Blue Water around Nadiaīs neck and thus pulling the girl forward causes her to gasp, and thatīs quite a bad situation for Jean. Seeing that Nadiaīs mouth is opening slightly, with her impressive rows of teeth parting and letting in some light, Jean realizes immediately whatīs going on. He can feel a gust wind entering Nadiaīs mouth with high speed and full force, hitting Jean and causing him to be thrown away from his "safe" position on Nadiaīs tongue. Jean knows that it must be Nadia gasping, although he doesnīt know why. But he sure knows that the air and he with it are being sucked toward Nadiaīs throat, and some sort of accompaniment to this terrible situation, he can hear some strange noise coming from far down her throat; itīs the sound of a person gasping or inhaling too fast. The force of the stream of air Jean is being trapped in throws him at Nadiaīs fleshy uvula, and not only does it hurt a lot, it also causes Jean to fall down from the uvula. Fortunately, he doesnīt fall down Nadiaīs throat, instead he finds himself at the very edge of her esophagus, not even centimeters away from the dark hole that leads into the depths of Nadiaīs supposedly gigantic stomach. Jean feels lucky at first, since he didnīt fall directly into a grim destiny, but he didnīt consider a small detail. As Jean hit Nadiaīs uvula moments ago, this initiated the swallowing reflex, and Jean can feel some muscles working on him an pushing him over the slippery and wet edge of Nadiaīs mouth and down her esophagus. Jean is trying to crawl back like a maniac, but itīs simply too slippery and her muscles are far too strong, and in a matter of seconds he finds himself in complete darkness again as heīs now falling into Nadiaīs stomach. One can guess that Jean must be sick of fear, because of his dark environment and the sure destination of his unwitting trip. He fortunately doesnīt see the walls of Nadiaīs throat, since it would drive him crazy, looking at this organic, contracting muscles of the throat. But he can tell that the muscles arenīt even working on him, since heīs so small that he fits into the esophagus perfectly, with enough space around him. Heīs just falling down into his doom.
Outside, Nadiaīs eyes widen as she realizes whatīs going on inside her. She realized immediately that Jean has been trapped in the stream of air she inhaled as she was gasping, and she couldnīt prevent the following events. Jean hitting her uvula activated her swallowing-reflex, and Nadia has no control over it whatsoever. She makes this infamous *gulp* sound, followed by Jean going down her throat. She can even feel him inside her esophagus, yet thereīs no visible lump inside her throat due to Jeanīs tiny size. The feeling of him being in there quickly fades away as Jean is descending into her stomach. Then she hears a faint *plop* in her belly, and she knows that the poor boy has arrived in there. All this happens in a matter of seconds, and only after the results of this terrible accident, Nadia fully realizes what has transpired. Her whole body begins to tremble, and tears are flowing down her cheeks. Jean...heīs such a nice and gentle boy, and Nadia realized that he really has feelings for her. But because of her inability to control the events inside her mouth, heīs now going to die inside her stomach...at least she thinks so. Of course, Grandis and her two henchmen have no idea why the girl is crying, they just look at her with a puzzled expression in their faces, forgetting about their sinister plans for the moment.
Letīs switch back to the dark and organic chamber. Jean feels that a tight ring of muscles is opening beneath him, and he knows to well that this is the entrance of Nadiaīs stomach, the pathway to her digestive tract. Heīs landing in some pool of water Nadia obviously drank earlier, hitting the surface of the liquid with a plop. Being underwater for a few seconds, he quickly swims up to the surface again, gasping for air. Speaking of air, the first thing Jean notices - and that surprises him - is the fact that the air in Nadiaīs stomach is very well breathable. Getting out of the water and onto the fleshy and wobbling ground of Nadiaīs stomach, Jean first has to regain his senses in order to think of something. But he very much doubts his ability to think, as he is actually able to see inside Nadiaīs stomach. And the sight is not as bad as he might have thought. First of all, her stomach is HUGE, really, and there are lots of interesting aspects in there. The walls of her stomach are pulsating, only slightly glistening with acids, and thatīs the only place where he can really see acids right now. As an intimidating fact, Nadiaīs entire stomach is slightly moving up and down due to her lungs breathing air in and out, and he can also hear the noise of air being sucked into Nadiaīs mouth or up her nose. With his will to survival being the first priority at the moment, Jeanīs walking toward the soft and wobbling walls of Nadiaīs stomach in order to find out something. He wants to know whether the acids are really as dangerous as he thinks or if they will simply be lethal. Standing in front of the pink fleshy, he closes his eyes, takes a deep breath and reaches for the stomach wall with his right hand. As his skin touches the acid...nothing happens at all. No burning, no pain, nothing. Itīs as if heīs being touched by some harmless liquid, thatīs it. Jean is relieved - at least a bit. Letting himself fall onto the soft ground again and sitting down there, he tries to come up with a plan. He has plenty of time, thatīs some advantage. But he is disturbed by some unusual sound, a sound that has a saddening impact on Jean: accompanied by a slight shaking of Nadiaīs stomach, he can hear the girl sobbing, obviously because she realized that he is inside her right now, swallowed down by her. He would certainly like to talk to her and cheer her up, but...is that even possible?
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