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Anime Vore, GTS, GT, Shrinking, Unbirth
Anime characters have never been so wild before
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  Chapter 31: The gross mouth of Grandis   (ID #298290)
    an addition by: chaos  More by this author

Nadia placed her palm against the red plushy lips of Grandis. Jean took one last look at the worried face of Nadia, before slowly walking to the mouth of the methodical mad woman. The mouth was almost completely shut, so Nadia took her other hand and slipped a finger between Grandis’s lips and pried her mouth open for Jean to get in. He touched her big lips and felt his hand slide into them as easily as a hot knife does with butter. Taking one deep breath and reminding himself that he was doing this for Nadia, Jean placed both hands on her soft lower lip and gazed inside the dark cavern. He saw rows of white, perfect teeth, a large moist, pink tongue sat in the middle of the mouth like a beached whale. He could see the saliva glistening on her tongue, the roof of her mouth, and on her cheeks. When he looked farther in, he saw the opening to her throat, and the soft, fleshy uvula hanging down. He could feel her warm breath hitting his face every few seconds. To the casual looker, this mouth would seem no different then Nadia’s mouth, but to Jean, the differences were enormous. Grandis’s mouth was much bigger for one thing; Nadia had a delicate tiny mouth in comparison to the older, bigger woman. It could have been because of Nadia’s skin color or her age, but the inside of Grandis’s mouth seemed much redder then Nadia’s jaws.
“How does her mouth look?” Nadia asked feeling another stab of jealousy as Jean looked into the gapping maw. She knew the though was ridicules, but deep in her mind she feared that Jean would grow attached to the villainess after being inside her. After all, Jean and her were only able to form their attachment after he went down her throat. Who was to say that he wouldn’t fall for Grandis after being swallowed by her.
“Compared to you, it’s hideous,” Jean said with a disgusted look on his face. Nadia giggled as Jean stuck out his tongue in revulsion and made mock retching sounds. Nadia knew he was just messing around, but it put her at ease.
“I’m going in. Nadia, I need you to keep Grandis on her back. If she’s on her backside can crawl up the side of her stomach and leave through the throat. You might hear some gulping sounds from Grandis as I’m going down her throat, but don’t worry. It will be an automatic reaction to me touching the back of her throat.” Nadia nodded to all the information. Seeing that everything was understood, Jean got a foothold on her chin, and pulled himself onto her lips. He had trouble moving further up because his body would press down on the yielding red flesh of Grandis’s lower lip. After nearly falling off twice, Jean was able to pass the lip and get into the area between her lower lip and teeth. Pulling himself up one final time, Jean was leaning over the pearly teeth when an almost paralyzing fear over took him. In his currant position, all Grandis would have to do was snap her jaws shut and he would be cleaved in half. Pushing that thought away by visualizing Nadia’s face, Jean was able to push himself over the deadly teeth and go splashing into the mouth. Jean landed waist deep in the sticky transparent saliva that clung to his clothes and tasted vile in his mouth. He had accidentally swallowed some of Nadia’s saliva while being bounced around when she had been laughing earlier and her saliva hadn’t tasted half as rotten as this stuff. It was probably because Nadia never ate meat, so her body lacked the bitter taste it leaves in the mouth. Grandis on the other hand, had a steak before seeing Nadia; Jean knew this because he was seeing bits of it right now. He gagged as he noticed tiny pink pieces lodged between the narrow teeth inside the mouth.
“Gross,” was all he said before trying to start what he had come her for. When he tried to walk across the limp tongue, but he didn’t get far before slipping and trip over. Saliva went gushing around him as he fell, he wiped the putrid stuff out of his face and spit out another mouth full. Nadia had been keeping Grandis’s mouth open for a while and the saliva had built turning her mouth into a warm watery cave. This time crawling on his knees, Jean continued his venture further into the mouth. He saw the smooth surface of the inside of her cheeks and the gigantic teeth that could crush him in an instant as he moved forward. A warm, and surprisingly comforting breeze blew from the darkened pit that lay ahead. It seemed that he had found something about Grandis’s mouth that wasn’t disgusting, at least he did until he smelled the air. The smell was unbearable and Jean grew nauseas and dizzy. It stank of meat and sweets, unlike Nadia; Grandis had an extensive diet that consisted for fatty foods and candy. Ignoring the smell, like the saliva, like the food between her teeth, jean continued until he reached the edge of the tongue. A small waterfall of saliva dripped down the throat that Jean would have to go down to reach Blue Water. While looking down that pink pulsating gullet, am urge to flee from the entrance to the stomach filled Jean. Knowing that his fear was irrational because of his indigestible body, Jean bade Farwell to this putrid mouth. Wanting to get out of this sordid cave of gross sights and smells, Jean pushed forward and his body fell. Jean’s arms were hanging down into space and he felt the giant uvula brushing up against his back as he started to drop into the darkness. His body slid easily down the back of Grandis's tongue and then down her throat where he quickly slid down the slippery tube only to be slowed down hit the side of the esophagus. As he slid down to the thief’s stomach, the air grew fouler and fouler. The smell was combinations of his Grandis’s bawdy breath and her last steak meal. Finally, Jeans decent stopped as his feet hit the opening of the stomach. Immediately the hole opened into the stomach and he dropped what to him felt like a hundred feet. Into the awful depths of this horrible woman Jean went, the only thing keeping him going was the image of Nadia’s face. His fall was broken by a pile of rancid mush that lay at the bottom of the stomach. Picking pieces of mushy, foul food out of his hair, Jean looked for the Blue Water.
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