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  Chapter 32: Stomach or Hell?   (ID #298510)
    an addition by: sith  More by this author

Standing next to the huge pile of mushed up food, Jean was able to embrace the sight of Grandisī entire stomach. No. That cave Jean was in couldnīt even be considered a stomach. When Jean was inside Nadiaīs belly, he accepted it for what it is: an organic, living chamber, a part of that wonderful girlīs body. And Nadiaīs stomach had a strange impact on Jean. It seemed full of life, like the girl herself. He was not disgusted by his surroundings back then, instead he was fascinated and drawn into a vortex of strange feelings he never had before, feelings of love that seem even more strange, considering the circumstances. So Nadiaīs stomach seemed beautiful and even had a certain grace. But being inside Grandis was completely different The first thing Jean realized was that Grandisī stomach didnīt even look like Nadiaīs stomach at all - although thatīs medically highly unlikely. While Nadiaīs stomach was somehow a cute pink chamber that belonged to the girl of his dreams, representing the life that is inside Nadia, Grandisī stomach seemed more like a nightmare. Looking at the glistening, large walls of her stomach, Jean noticed that they were entirely red, unlike the soft pink colour of Nadiaīs stomach. That alone would have been all right, but there were other things that scared Jean and made him sick to his stomach. As he looked around, he realized that he couldnīt even see properly in there. There was some sort of steam rising all around him, preventing him from seeing everything in the dark and creepy chamber. Jean guessed that the steam was the result of the food getting digested by the stomach acids, thus the steam and his worsened ability to see were not the only problems. Grandisī digestive process also left a mark that penetrated Jeanīs sense of smell in a horrible way: the smell in the air here was unbearable to say the least, and Jean would have never guessed that acids could cause such a foul stench that actually brought tears to his eyes. And the noises he could hear were similar to those he heard inside Nadiaīs body, and yet so different. Grandisī heart beat was audible in the distance, but Jean actually couldnīt believe that such a vile person even had a heart. He imagined that an old, loud engine instead of a heart would be more appropriate for a person like Grandis, although he knew how childish that thought was. There was also the notorious rumbling sound of her belly working on the food, but that wasnīt the only noise her stomach made. While the rumbling wasnīt there all the time, another sound tortured his ears every second of his presence inside the stomach. The sound itself is hard to describe, but itīs like an ordinary rumbling sound, only a little more decent and less penetrating - except for it being there all the time. That strange noise was accompanied by Grandisī breathing that changed the shape of the stomach ceiling slightly whenever she was breathing in and out. All these impressions Jean got, the dark reddish colour of her stomach walls, the steaming pile of food - and the steam all around him - and the terrifying noises created an impression that made Jean think of hell itself. Yes, compared to Nadiaīs stomach, this foul place was hell. It was clear that Jean wanted to get out of there as fast as possible, getting back to his beloved Nadia. First, he had to find the Blue Water, but that was easier said than done. Since seeing in Grandisī stomach was an issue, he could only notice things that were near him. Ugh...a long and dangerous search inside Grandis was being foreshadowed, but Jean certainly was lucky that day, since finding the Blue Water didnīt even require much work. Shortly before wanted to start walking around inside the hell like chamber, he realized that something was glittering inside the pile of goo - goo that was once food, and Jean didnīt even want to know what it once was, but he could imagine that it was probably some steak, mixed with candy. Bon appétit! Not only did he see that something was glittering in there, there was also some sort of ribbon trapped in the masses of food, with parts of it being visible for Jean. As the bright boy Jean is, he didnīt need to think about it any loner, it was clear that this was the Blue Water, trapped in a pile of masticated goo. He felt sorry for Nadia, since she certainly hated the idea of her precious gem being inside masses of wobbling and slowly dissolving ex-food. So Jean wanted to end Blue Waterīs misery quickly by grabbing the ribbon and trying to pull it out of the pile of goo with all his might. The amount of power he tried to use for his attempt was considerable, considering that Jean wasnīt a muscular boy, and his face quickly turned red because of the exhaustion that slowly overcame him. His hands started to hurt, but that didnīt stop Jean. Despite the physical disadvantages and despite his intimidating organic surroundings, Jean managed to get Blue Water out of the large pile, but not without causing him to fall onto the wobbling and soft ground. He lay there, with the precious being next to him, free from the shackles of ingested food. Now he would finally be able to get out again, although it would be quite difficult to get Blue Water out of there.
Alas, things never transpire according to plan, since outside, Grandis slowly opened her eyes again, not knowing that not only Blue Water, but also a tiny boy were inside her.
"Oh no! Jean, please hurry up!" Nadia uttered.
Unfortunately, Jean didnīt realize the sudden arrival of the now unpleasant situation, and he had no idea what he had to go through before meeting his beloved Nadia again.
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