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Akhehet
Based on the world created in the 'Dancer' series of books by Ann Maxwell.
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This is an interactive story containing 2 chapters. Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you will have the option to write it! Don't be shy... make an addition!
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Background

This telling is of Rheba and Kirtn. Their planet Deva, was destroyed when their sun went supernova and they are one of the last survivors of their two races.

They are an ankhehet pairing. Each makes the other stronger. Rheba is a Senyas Fire Dancer - the last one alive. Kirtn is her Bre'n mentor. They are completely different races, yet symbiotic. Their bond is emotional and psionic. The Senyas were a scientifically advanced race. Their Bre'n mentors provided them with emotional and physical strength. In addition, the Bre'n/Senyas pairing enhances a Senyas' abilities. Some of the different Senyas abilities mentioned in the Dancer series were Gene dancing and Storm dancing. Each dancer is born with certain, innate physical abilities which give them a certain degree of understanding and control over it.

The word ankhehet means many things. It is synonymous with friend, power, mentor, talent and family. An ankhehet pair is also a bond that is automatically supposed to become a romantic one. However, Rheba was too young to know this when Deva was destroyed. Now she struggles against the romantic emotions her mentor Kirtn evokes in her.

Bre'n who are denied their complete bond with their Senyas, slip into rez. A manic, insane state during which he/she loses emotional and physical control. Given the enormous physical strength of Bre'ns, this usually leads to both their own, and their Senyas' death.

Thus, Kirtn is trapped on the brink of rez. Rheba is too young to have to deal with the direction their relationship should eventually take. She would have been schooled in this by her Senyas and Bre'n parents back on Deva - but there was no one alive to teach her anymore. For Kirtn to tell her, may push him to rez, especially if she wasn't prepared or receptive. Yet if they never progressed to that state, he would be driven to rez anyway.

This is a brief overview of the two main characters. They are now on board their ship - the Devalon. It is a ship made by the best Senyas and Bre'n shipbuilders and attuned to Rheba and Kirtn. It will not respond to anyone else.

Since fleeing their world, they have landed on Onan - where they were captured by a slave trader and brought to the planet Loo. They destroyed the capricious Loo-Chim and found themselves with a shipload of former slaves to return to their homeworld.

You can create any character, any world, as fantastic or as normal as you wish. It can be medieval or modern. Or anything in between. You have to write the story from you NEW character's perspective. Take Rheba and Kirtn to new worlds, and explore their incredible talents.
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