This choice: Yes | Go Back Chapter 85: When to visit (ID #428344) an addition by: The Doctor ![View a0040pc's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author "I don't see why not," said Gwen. "But I have to ask the guys who run this place."
"Ok Princess," replied Ted.
"I'll call you back later. I love you Daddy."
"And I love you too."
She then put the phone and she headed back to the office of the General. She expected him to think that she was protesting again. But when she went in he smiled at her.
"Err sir I'd like to ask something," said Gwen.
"What is it?" replied the General.
"Well I was wondering if my Dad can come and visit here. Can he please?"
"Unfortunately not today Gwen. But every Saturday is visitor’s day. He can come on Saturday with the other parents. Is that clear?"
"Yes sir."
"Good now go I have important work to do."
"Yes sir."
She then left the office and she went back to the payphones to call Ted. She wanted to tell him the good news.
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