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Choose Your Gain!
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  Chapter 17: fight back   (ID #388573)
    an addition by: datonman  More by this author

kayrie and the other girls were in amazement at my new bigger body. one of the girls i recognized was jessica. she lifted up the muumuu so that my fat belly was exposed. she made it jiggle. "look at it go!" as my belly shook. the other girls did the same and i was a bit humiliated.

jessica then said to me "i guess all that food went somewhere"

"tom you are a strong demonstration that being fat is not as great as being fit" kayrie said as she posed and so did the others. "however, we are grateful for you for making us realize" she added.

jessica then said "yeah, you being fat makes us lucky indeed...but we still like you" she added humorously.

i looked at all of these girls with their builds and abs, while i on the other hand was being bullied upon.
i became angry and wanted to fight back.

"i can see you're very upset tom" kayrie said. then on impulse, i pushed her away and she fell down. one of the girls was retaliating and ran towards me, i pushed her away as well.

one of them jumped up and planted a kick, that stunned me but i was still standing and breathing hard. "you're now exhausted, your fat is a disadvantage to you and is making you slow."suddenly i tripped and fell down. they then forced a tube down my mouth and i felt liquid being poured down. i started to fall asleep but the last thing i saw were the women looking down at me smiling.i fell asleep
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