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  Chapter 18: going home   (ID #388592)
    an addition by: datonman  More by this author

i have had it with waking up in this room. this time i was on the ground and wriggling to get up as i saw that the door was opened. only this time i couldn't get up at all, i was lucky to be even wriggling. i was grunting and shaking.

a figure came to the door, it was sarah. great another one to ridicule me, i thought.

"well, well" she started. "you have indeed let yourself go, long story short, you're 385 pounds and you deserve this extra weight for trying to defy us."

i was 385 pounds! no wonder i couldn't get up. i thought.

"right now, it is extremely difficult for you to get up because of the added fat" sarah started again and soon the tanned built girls came in again. "since you think you can fight us get up and we won't just think of you as the fat one." she said.

i wanted to prove to her once and for all that just because i was fat did not mean they can just ridicule me. i shook and wriggled, i turned and put my hand down on the floor, my knee cap on the floor as well and began to pull myself up. the girls saw this and giggled, i was sweating and i was red with exhaustion.

with determination i got up. i knew i was bigger and fatter but it didn't stop me.

"well i must say that i admire your determination perhaps we were wrong about you." she said to me.

kayrie then came up to me and told me "im sorry" and kissed me on my fat cheek.

sarah then said "your journey here is over, you will go back home but maybe one day our paths will cross again" she placed a hand on my temple and suddenly i passed out.
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