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Choose Your Gain!
How do YOU want to gain weight?
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  Chapter 18: overweight   (ID #385512)
    an addition by: datonman  More by this author

We made our way farther into the woods for a half an hour. I was sweating profusely and panting really hard. We had to climb giant boulders and tree trunks from what I saw up ahead. Kayrie had the experience of a mountain climber and climbed the boulder with ease. I knew this was going to be hard for me because of my fat. I went on the boulder and tried to climb, I pushed myself but couldn’t. after a couple of minutes, I shook my head in resignation. Kayrie then offered her hands to pull me up. She struggled to pull me up but couldn’t, she knew I was too heavy. I was now a little depressed. Kayrie saw this and got down from the boulder. I made my way to sit down on a log but once I sat, it broke underneath me. I sighed. i was too overweight.

Kayrie sat down on the broken log with me. “I’m sorry,” she said. I looked at her and she looked at me as if to say I understand. I nodded to her. She took out the weight scanner and told me to stand up. I did and kayrie waved it around me. She finally got her results but remained quiet, I could tell it was not good.

“well?” I asked.

Kayrie sighed and said “ you’re…375 pounds”

I shook my head, I could not believe this was happening to me.

“and it’s worse” she said with worry in her eyes. “you’re gaining 1 pound without eating every five minutes!” she then realized and said with wide eyes “the girls that were in the room with you gave you the permanent weight gain formula!’

that was a bombshell to me, I’m going to become immobile soon. I was panicking; I then asked kayrie if there was anything she can do. She said she couldn’t, she said that there was a secret weight loss potion back at the village where the women were now looking for them.

I told her we could sneak back to the village and get it. She reluctantly agreed but said if they catch me it will be horrible.

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