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Choose Your Gain!
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  Chapter 20: losing the weight   (ID #385870)
    an addition by: datonman  More by this author

it's been two hours, me and kayrie did not say anything, we were each thinking of a plan. i was laying on a bed which had broken thanks to my fat body. the potions were taken before by the girls, now i was too overweight to escape.

kayrie then got up and made her way toward me, she took a chair and brought it to my bed. she sat down and looked at me with sad eyes. she must feel really bad about everything she did to me, i thought.

"i can't tell you how much i regret you gaining weight, however, since they have given us two days to decide what they are going to do, i believe we should take this chance for you to lose weight the hard way which is working out constantly right in this hut." she continued and said "we need you to lose at least 15 pounds, it will give you some movement back."

i liked the sound of that idea. i tried to get out of the bed with the help of kayrie. To kayrie, i could fall on her and kill her, i thought. we excercised, actually kayrie did with some impresive stretches, while i couldn't even walk.

"come on!" she said while i was trying to do a push-up but i couldn't get up and down.

it had been three hours and i was doing jumping jacks and everytime i did the whole hut shook. after jumping jacks i did some sprints, running back and forth. we did the same routine for everyone of those excercises.

after we were done because we were both exhausted, she took out the scanner pointed it at me and said "you lost 3 pounds" i was a little glad. but then she said "that's not good enough, you have 12 more pounds to lose, at this rate you will collapse when we go out two days from now."


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