This choice: suggest in going on a diet | Go Back Chapter 21: time to diet (ID #390276) an addition by: datonman ![View tonynai's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author melanie then approached me and patted my huge belly and rubbed it, then it wiggled "you are...umm" melanie was so overwhelmed in seeing me in my now huge and fatter body.
melanie scratched her head and put her hands on her waist.
"really big" replied a voice and it was kayrie. she made her way over to me and she was a bit overwhelmed herself. she had a scanner and waved it all over me. she gasped and put her hand on her mouth. "you're 399 pounds tom!" sarah then came along as well, as a matter of fact, all the girls surrounded me.
Sarah then said "tom you've seen to have gone past your usual weight limit, maybe you have a point in wanting to lose weight we can help you get back to your normal weight, do you want to?" Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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