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Giant Naruto
The guys in Naruto grow. Please come inside and enjoy
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This choice: Kiba rubs Shikamaru's feet as he continues to grow, though it's becoming hard | Go Back

  Chapter 21: Shifting Dynamic   (ID #942693)
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The house creaked and groaned around the two boys as Shikamaru's body continued to grow larger and wider, his head already nearing the ceiling again despite the fact that he was slouched down, his broadening shoulders pressing against opposite walls. Shikamaru's smile was uncharacteristically mischievous. He was enjoying this more than he let on. Kiba, who was slowly but surely being covered by the massive foot pinning him to the wall, watched as the toes slowly rose up above his head again. Shikamaru's foot was as long as he was tall! This was getting insane! Shikamaru groaned a little and said, "What did I just say? Don't stop!"

"C-Come on Shikamaru!" Kiba pleaded. "If you don't try and get out of here, you're going to destroy my house!"

Shikamaru lifted up his impressive hand, made a fist, and slammed it down against the couch, crushing it flat with the same ease a normal human would crush a bug. "And if YOU don't rub my feet I'll crush you just as easily as that couch!"

Kiba jumped and started rubbing again, no longer complaining. Shikamaru was nicer than Naruto...as long as he was getting what he wanted. And a foot rub wasn't that bad. Kiba was now using both hands to knead a single toe, having to reach up higher and higher until the toes were out of his reach. Then, it was back to rubbing the sole. All the while, the giant foot was pressing against him more and more, the wall splintering behind his back as Shikamaru's head and shoulders rose up into the second floor, his wide, glistening chest pressed up against the ceiling, each nipple pointing almost downward as his pecs continued to pump and swell. Suddenly, Kiba felt the wall crash down behind him, his body falling backward into the next room over, Shikamaru's foot still in front of him, but no longer bearing down on him. He got up and dusted himself off, just as the ceiling finally couldn't handle anymore and crashed down over Shikamaru's gigantic body, effectively turning the house from a two story with multiple rooms to a two story with one BIG room which now contained one BIG ninja. Shikamaru chuckled as he looked himself over. He flexed his arm and watched as it bulged up, ending in an impressive peak with a single, large vein running over top of it. It was a really intimidating sight.

Kiba picked his way over to Shikamaru, looking up at him in awe. Shikamaru smirked down at him and said, "Like what you see?"

Kiba gulped and said, "Y-Yeah! Why wouldn't I?" It was best not to argue with giant muscle bound ninja.

"And what about your house? I'm wrecking it...that's a problem for you right?" Shikamaru said.

"No way!" Kiba insisted. "I mean, it's not like my parents can do anything to you if they find out you caused this."

Shikamaru nodded and snatched Kiba up, bringing him up to his face. "Yeah...And to make sure they don't do anything to you, you're officially my personal slave. I'm not letting you out of my sight."

Shikamaru held Kiba in one arm, pinning him to his huge chest. Shikamaru searched around and twitched his knee, crashing it into the nearby wall which instantly collapsed, revealing Naruto in the kitchen. Naruto slowly turned around and jumped to his feet in shock. "S-Shikamaru? No way! This is so unfair!"

Shikamaru picked his foot up and pushed it against Naruto. "Don't even start pipsqueak. Things are different around here now. I'm the biggest, I'm the one in charge. If you don't want to end up a stain under my foot you'll do exactly as I say."

Naruto couldn't answer. Shikamaru's sole was pressing firmly against his mouth. "I'll take your silence as consent." Shikamaru said, leaning back again. Kiba snickered and smiled up at Shikamaru. He was pretty cool! He was really starting to admire Shikamaru.

"Now...why don't you finish the foot rub Kiba started?" He dropped Kiba down by his other foot. "You too Kiba. One for each foot."

Kiba immediately began rubbing, working over every part he could reach. Naruto, on the other hand, refused to so much as move. Shikamaru increased the pressure until Naruto couldn't stand it any more and sulkily rubbed the other foot. Shikamaru sighed and just enjoyed it. Life was good.
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