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Reality Manipulation
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This choice: Tina's juices cause the shark to digest her rapidly. | Go Back

  Chapter 21: Love Juice + Stomach Acids = Insta-Digestion   (ID #428247)
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As Tina's juices dripped from her pussy to mix with the shark's stomach acid, something unexpected happened. Tina's moan of pleasure quickly changed pitch and became a scream of pain as the pain she felt intensified. Her eyes snapped open and she looked down at herself, seeing her crotch and hand melting rapidly. With horror-filled eyes, she watched her skin drip away, revealing bone, which was also quickly dissolved. What the hell was going on? Somehow her secretions had blended with the shark's digestive juices and had created an even more powerful acid. None of that made any sense to Tina, but the pain was so blind, she didn't much care.

She watched her crotch completely dissolve and then her legs fell apart in opposite directions as the acid ate through her hips. Meanwhile, the acid was moving up her arms, already past her wrists and working its way up her forearms. In the few moments her eyes watched her arms disappearing before her, her severed legs had been reduced to slightly bubbling pools of goo and her stomach was mostly gone. Weakness flooded what remained of Tina's body and her head fell back, her breath coming in fast pants. No longer able to watch herself dissolving, all she could do was feel it creep up her arms and torso. She felt the burning reach her shoulders, unable to feel anything below them, about the same time it became impossible for her to breathe.

Tina's mouth gaped, trying to suck in air with no success now that her lungs had been dissolved, and she looked like a fish with the way her mouth moved. The powerful acid ate away Tina's breasts, reducing the perky orbs of flesh to digested ooze. Finally, the acid reached the girl's head, and somehow she was still alive. She felt the acid burning away at her from all sides, working their way inwards. Her world went black as her eyes were eaten away, throwing her into a reality made only of darkness and agony. Slowly, the agony faded, leaving only darkness, as the shark's improved stomach acid digested Tina's brain.
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