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  Chapter 17: Spider Bite   (ID #428206)
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"Please... God, please, noo..." Tina moaned between sobs, her voice scratchy from the screaming she'd done. She knew that pleading would do no good against this monster, that it couldn't even understand her, and even if it could, it wouldn't have done any good. That was more of that omnipotent information feeding into her brain. Her body shuddered as she thought of the word feeding. "I don't want this!" she screamed at the spider, unable to stop herself. She struggled to pull herself free from the webbing, wanting to escape or at the very least try to fight the spider off before it could give her a fatal bite. The webbing was too sticky and she wasn't near strong enough to break free from it. Tina screamed again as she watched the spider's mandibles open, seeing its venom glistening on the tips of its fangs. The spider lunged forward and bit down into Tina's neck, injecting her with a lethal dose of its venom.

Tina's scream was quickly silenced as her neck swelled and she found it increasingly difficult to breathe. Pain throbbed through her, quickly spreading up and down her body until she was in total agony. Her already pathetic struggles faded away as she became truly paralyzed from the venom. The only movements her body continued to make were spasms caused by pain. If all of this had been happening in real life, Tina wouldn't know what exactly her body was going through from the spider's bite. Instead, she was treated to total knowledge and even vivid mental images as the venom rampaged through her system, rapidly liquifying her insides. The liquification process was agony and Tina didn't understand how she could even still be alive even after only a portion of her organs had been transformed into soup. The pain was all encompassing, from inside and outside. As more of her muscles liquified, even the spasms her body gave off ended and her body became a bulging bag of fluids.

The spider watched Tina's painful transformation into a fleshy container of liquid nutrients and when she looked as though enough of her innards had been liquified, it moved closer and extended a proboscis from its mouth which it jabbed into one of her breasts. The proboscis penetrated Tina's shirt and jabbed directly into her nipple, which would have caused her to groan in pain if her lungs hadn't been reduced to so much swirling fluid and her throat hadn't swollen shut. Tina's head swayed back and forth on her shoulders, her brain growing fuzzy from lack of oxygen and the venom, which was now starting to dissolve it. Drool fell from Tina's slack mouth, dribbling down her chin and dripping onto her chest where it oozed into her cleavage. Her liquifying brain registered the feeling of her body being rapidly drained. Tina's head fell backwards, eyes rolling back in her head as her brain finished melting and the spider continued to slurp up her pre-digested insides until her body was only an empty skinbag with clothing draped over it. The spider popped its proboscis free of Tina's drained body and scuttered away on its web to find a nice place to rest and digest its meal.
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