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  Chapter 4: Melisa's revenge, EAT UP!!!   (ID #426485)  [4,650 Views]
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Melisa couldn't believe her eyes when she first set eyes on Jen. She had a good start, she had gained fifty pounds, and was still gaining! Jen had the beginnings of a waddle as she walked, and had becoming full, wide, round, and soft. Her cheer leaders outfit stretched to the max! Something else she couldn't stop stuffing her pretty face. Her once hallow cheeks now packed with pastries as she continued her nonstop pig-out.

The more she eat the more she desired,totally oblivious to her ever expanding ever fattening body. Her hips grew wide and roundly curvaceous, with the beginning of love handles, a belly rounder and fuller by the moment. Breast overflowing her bursting bra. Full round calves, cushioned knees with the start of fat rolls in back, leading to thighs three times as wide as they were only yesterday, and a fanny so full so round so fat! I followed Jen who was on her way to cheer leading practice. Although Jen hadn't noticed her weight gain and fattening, the rest of the cheer leading squad did, and they were merciless.

"Hey Jen, FAT PIGGIES can't be cheer leaders."
"WADDLE OFF FATTY!"
"Jen can't stop grazing, she's getting FATTER and FATTER by the minute!"
YOUR FAT JIGGLES WITH EVERY STEP. YOU'VE REALLY BECOME A FAT SOW!"

The whole cheer leading squad had turned on her. Jen turned and ran, well waddled away as fast as she could, stuffing her face faster and faster. This was my opening, Jen has lost everything she once held as dear, without a friend in the world. Melisa plans on getting close to her, and keeping her on the fat and gaining track.
"Jen what's the matter, why are you so upset?" she said with false compassion.

Jen looked at Melisa with tears in her eyes, and at first gave her a cool reception, figuring she'd just ridicule her like all the others.

"What do you want, to kick me when I'm down, pick on the pudgy piggy, make fun of how fat I've gotten?" Jen cried, tears rolling down her swollen face
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