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Anime Dimensional hallway
a fanfiction where you can choose a world you belong in. anime suggestions welcome,
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  Chapter 6: Garick's story begins   (ID #588397)
    an addition by: Master Tempus  More by this author

My name is Garick Smyth, and about one or two days ago i had a normal life in a small town of Melrose Park Illinois at the age of 18 years old. On Saturday I would stay home and watch Naruto and then go down stairs and look at my dad's collection of swords(I always wanted to fight with them) put them away and then go to bed, but this time was different I some how ended up in a forest where I didn't think it was possible to be at. I couldn't possibly be in Naruto's world. I started thinking about how this all happened exactly.........

*Flashback*

It all started on a Saturday and I was at my dads house. The day started off normal enough I got up made breakfast and played some games and did some house work until 8 or 9 o'clock when i would go and watch Naruto. Then afterwords I would go down to the basement and go look at my dad's huge collection of swords. There were so many different kinds of swords there was: a katana from the highlander series, a broadsword, six other katanas, a rapier, 2 fencing swords, a long sword, a bastard sword, etc... but there was always one sword I would always look at because it was the most unique. It was a katana that had 8 other weapons consealed inside its' hilt(handle), scabard(protective cover), and sheathe. In the hilt it had two extremly sharp knives that could combine with the sheathe to make a sort of spear, inside the sheathe it had a sort of grappling hook part near the very tip of the sheathe and the part where your could attach the to knives to it was on that end as well, and in the scabard there were three or four shurikan that were hidden right on top of the scabbard it was in my oppinion a true ninja sword. It was 11:30pm when I finished looking at them and my dad had told me I had to put them every time after i finished looking at them. I had put every one of them away in their spot(each one had a specific spot on a wall) except for the ninja sword that one was the only one that wouldn't fit on the wall so I went to put it in the closet like I always did. When I opened the doors there was a huge hallway I had never seen before. I was curious as almost anybody would be so i decided to check it out. As I started walking I had seen some doors on both side of the hallway. There were names above the doors there was: Digimon, Green Green, Hellsing, and Eiken. I started saying to my self, "Where had I heard these names before." I just pushed that thought away for the moment because i was too facinated with this place as I kept moving through the hallway and came upon some more doors: one i couldn't exactly read because it was somewhat scratched out, Magical Street Shopping Arcade Abenobashi, Girls Bravo, and then Naruto. It finally hit me the thing all those names had in common is that they are all animes. I then heard a sound that seemed to come from the way I was heading. I looked in that direction as all of a sudden the ceiling over that area started to collapse. It started coming towards where I was so i started to go back towards the door I came through and notice that that side had started to collapse as well. Both sides were closing in on me I out of fear decided to open the closest door to me(which was the Naruto door). The collapsing ceiling getting so close I turned the knob on the door with my right hand while still holding on to the sword with my left and jumped for my life not even looking to see where I was going. I had woke up a little while later thinking I had a wierd dream and I opened my eyes and saw that I was surrounded by huge trees all around me and I had no idea what was going on. And I started thinking about what happened.....(this is where I left off)

*end flashback*

I started walking through the forest(while still carrying my sword) and saw a huge mountain with 4 faces on it and was now 100% sure i was in Naruto's world. As I realized that I let out a very loud "WOH!!!" with out noticing that I did that till it was too late. I all of a sudden heard wooshing sounds all around me. Suddenly there were like 2 or 3 ninjas surrounding me (one of whom was Iruka). One of them asked me who I was and where I was from and told me to put my sword down (because what I was wearing was unusual for this place and I had been carrying my sword around (like i was gunna use it). I was wearing a grey t-shirt and some blue jeans and all I had on my feet were socks). I told them, "My name is Garick and I don't know where I'm from", which at the moment was true because I was so weirded or freaked out I had forgotten where I was from for a second. Then I started to move and all of sudden two of them disappeared and one of them try to knock me out and my body reacted all of a sudden and I somehow dodged the first attack and got hit by the second one and was knocked out. And by what I'm guessing was a few hours later I woke up in a jail cell behind bars. I then heard footsteps and who I saw was Iruka. I then said, "Hey Iruka come here", all of a sudden he looked at me in shock and said, "How do you know my name and why is your chakra so powerful.", then I said, "I know your not going to believe me but I'm from another dimension and as for the answer to the chakra question I have no clue." , he than said, " Wait here." he had then left for about maybe 5 or 10 minutes. He came back with someone. It was the Hokage Lady Tsunade. Iruka said, "This is the one I told you about Lady Hokage. He's the one who says that he's from another dimension." Then after about a minute Tsunade says speaking to me, "You expect me to believe your from another dimension." I than said, "I some how got here by walking through some hallway full of doors. suddenly that sentence struck a cord with Iruka. "A hallway full of doors? I remember the third hokage wrote about that in his report once. Tsunade looked at Iruka with curiousity "Explain...what is this hallway?" Iruka nodded "A long time ago when I was a child the third hokage talked about once a hallway full of doors that connected our world to to several different worlds unlike our own. he says our ancestors used it to find new ninjas to recruit. but they stopped using it when the other worlds sent their military to conquer our village and every other village around. He said the ancestors put a curse on the hallway to make it disappear permantly. but somehow the hallway has been reactivated for another use." I think for a moment then speak "Maybe to give the people in my dimension another option of life." Tsunade was confused, "Why haven't I heard of it?" Iruka turned to Tsunade "Probably because you haven't checked the third hokage's personal reports yet." Tsunade sighed "Ok so I haven't gotten that far yet. so how do we send him back?" Iruka frowned "Unfortunatly Tsunade..the hallway is a one way trip. Once you enter you can't return from the dimension you came from." Tsunade nodded "Well if that is the case.. then I think we got a new recruited ninja for the village." I feel
shocked "Are you saying I am stuck here for good?" Iruka nodded yep, You are a permanent residence of our village.Uh ...what is your name?" I shook Iruka's hands "my name is Garick Smythe, it is nice to meet you Iruka." Tsunade looks at Iruka "Iruka this stays top secret! no one must know where Garick came from!"
Iruka nods "Yes but how are we going to keep it a secret? Without Garick having any paperwork people will grow suspicious." Tsunade smiles "You just leave that to me. I will take care of the paperwork, but for now find a place for him to stay..I hear there is a vacancy at the building where Naruto lives." Iruka nods and escorts me out of tsunades office and out the door to the building where Naruto lives. when I get there 10 minutes later Iruka is signing the papers to the vacant room and showing me where it is. The room isn't much just a bed and a small kitchen. I turned to Iruka and said, "Hey Iruka I have a question," Iruka turned around "What is it Garick" I studdered "I don't ...know how to fight apart from a little bit with my sword or even any ninjutsu or genjutsu." Iruka smiled at me "Dont worry I'm going to show you some basic jutsu and help you with fighting tomarrow now just get some sleep." Just as I was about to shut the door Iruka says, " Oh I almost forgot heres your sword." "Thank you. I gunna get some sleep so goodnight." "Goodnight" he said as he shut the door.

The next morning I hear a knock at the door. I answer the door and it's.......
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