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  Chapter 8: Garick begins his training   (ID #591016)
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When we entered the training grounds we saw Shikamaru, Ino, and Chouji training for their next mission in one section of the training grounds. "Let go over there," Iruka said as he was pointing at a section of the training grounds the was a little further left of the area where Shikamaru and the others were. So we don't disturb them." As I heard that it kind of disappointed me because I truthfully wanted to meet them because one Shikamaru was one of the best strategists that i had ever seen when i had watched the show and his shadow possession and shadow strangle jutsus were amazing and two there was Ino who could use her mind transfer jutsu to overtake anyone she pleased and her mind destruction jutsu (or what ever it was called) would allow her to take control of the opponents body while she was still in her own with out putting her in danger (if the body she was in got hurt she would too) unlike the mind transfer jutsu. Last but certainly not least to me anyway was Chouji who in terms of physical strength was the strongest in his squad, and also he had amazing jutsus that could change his size and strength so immensely he'd be able to take down the larger enemies easier. And if worse came to worse he had his famly's pills which would increase his chakra and his strength by up to 100 times but had an extremely nasty side effect which were for the first 2 pills massive amounts of debilitating pain and if he took the last pill, which was the red one, he would surely die if hes not treated soon enough. After I was done admiring them which only took a few seconds I went to where Iruka had told me to go. Once I got over there he said, "Alright the first thing you're going to do is draw out you chakra, do you know how to do this?" "Yes but I've never done it before just seen it done." I said as I put my hands together and made the hand sign as I had seen it done numerous times before on the show. As I did this I felt the rush of chakra rush through my entire body I then let out a sudden "Woh!" from the surprise of it not expecting it to happen and I then noticed that the grass and even some of the dirt around was being pushed away from me as if there was a strong wind coming from me. "That is an immense amount of chakra almost as as much as Naruto's." , Iruka said "Anyway lets get onto the next step what I'm going to have you learn is a basic, but useful jutsu the substitution jutsu. You will be able to use this to switch your position with another object within the area when your under attack." He then bent over and picked up a rock and tossed it to me. "I want you to throw that rock at me as hard as you can." as he said that he did the handsigns for the substitution jutsu. "Throw it." he said. I did just that and threw it as hard as I could and just as it hit Iruka it hit him with such a strong force that the log that was now where he would've been actually shattered and hit the tree behind it and left a huge dent in it and made a large "CRACK!" as the tree fell down making a huge crash. Then Iruka came out from behind a tree and looked at what had just happened.in astonishment "H-How did you do that? Are you normally that strong?", I then said with my jaw dropped in amazement in a quiet voice, "No I have never been this strong before I think it's because I'm from another dimension. I seem to be alot stronger and have better reflexes here then in my dimension. Before i was able to dodge one of the ninjas that captured me's attacks." Then I heard someone say "What happened?" Than I turned around and saw Shikamaru, Ino, and Chouji. "H-How did that happen?" Ino said pointing at the fallen down tree. "I think I threw that rock too hard," I said laughing a little from embarrassment. "I'm sorry if I disturbed your training by the way I'm Garick Yamino." "He's my younger brother he's really strong as you may have guessed. Anyway Garick this is Shikamaru, Ino, and Chouji." Then Shikamaru said, "I didnt know you had a younger brother. He doesn't look anything like you." "Of course he wouldn't my mother had married twice we could never find his father. Anyway he just moved here. And I was teaching him some jutus and some other things." "It's nice to meet you three." , I said shaking each of their hands. "Likewise" ,Chouji said "You could come train with us if you'd like." "Ani would that be alright?" I asked. Then Iruka said rubbing his chin, "I was going to teach him the transformation jutsu and chakra control and I was going to help him with target practice." "We could teach him we just mastered chakra control and target practice.", Ino said, "And we learned tranformation a while ago with you." "Well I don't know..." Then a carrier bird landed in front of Iruka with a message attached to it. "Oh darn I've got to go to see the hokage about the team Garicks going to be in so ok you can do it till I get back." Then Iruka left to go to the hokage in her office.
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