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Anime Dimensional hallway
a fanfiction where you can choose a world you belong in. anime suggestions welcome,
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  Chapter 9: stay with garick   (ID #591513)
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After Iruka left I heard Chouji say, "Lets get started on your accuracy." after he said that we headed towards the targets when we got there Chouji said pointing at the targets, "Take out some shurikans and some kunais and try to hit those targets." I then pulled some out of the bag Iruka had given me and put the kunais aside for a second so I could try throwing with the shurikans first. "Alright here I go." I said throwing the first one which had barely hit the target but the next couple of throws weren't nearly as close. One had some how curved to the right so much it hit a tree that was about 10 feet away and the other one had ended up coming back at me some how. I then heard Shikamaru say, "Watch where your throwing those things!" "Man my accuracy sucks i can never hit the thing i want to!!!" I shouted as I took all the shurikans i had left in my hand (which was 5 of them) and threw them at the target with all my might and they hit the target dead center and side by side going straight through the target and getting stuck in a rock after going through about 10 trees leaving 5 vertical line shaped holes in the trees. Then I noticed all of them were looking in awe at what i had done some how i had not only hit the targeti wanted with five shurikans but went straight through it and 10 trees. "I have no idea how you did that" ,Chouji said, " but you did an amazing job but try to work on controling your strength next time or else someone could really get hurt and by someone i mean us. Now lets see how you do with kunai." I picked up the kunai from the ground and tried to focus this time on the accuracy and strength control and not directly on the target in its self just hitting the general area of it. As I threw them i hit the target not in the center but the general area the only problem is that i didnt get them all to stick in it but i still got more then half to stick in it with out going through again. "Good job Garick now lets work on the tranformation jutsu. Ino will show you how to do it." Then Ino came over and said, "Watch my hand signs." She did them slowly so i could see how it was done but little did she know i had seen it done hundreds of times on the show. So when she told me to do it after she had changed back from turning into Iruka i was ready and said " I'm going to turn into Shikamaru." After saying that i did the handsigns and tranformed into Shikamaru, Then Ino said you did that perfectly." After i changed back I said " So whats next?" "What we are going to do now is chakra control focus the chakra at the bottom of your feet and try to climb to the top of that tree." ,Ino said pointing at a pretty tall tree. I than gave it a try and on the first try landed flat on my back barely making more then a foot up. I then ke[t trying making it further and further up the tree. When i finally got up there I for one asked for help to get down and two how well i did. Then Shikamaru said " You did it on the 214th try." Then after that was said i notice that i heard two other people clapping one was Iruka and the other was..........
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