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Anime Dimensional hallway
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  Chapter 13: The wish for speed   (ID #623651)
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Then all of a sudden wind blew all around me lifting me 3 feet off the ground. After a few seconds it stopped and dropped me face first towards the ground but for some reason, as I was about to hit the ground I was some how able to catch my self. It seemed that my reflexes had gotten a lot faster somehow but I took this all as a huge coincidence. I just thought it was luck that I caught myself but before I could take this all in every thing started rushing at me at once: some shurikans, the shadow possession jutsu, and a giant palm as I saw this coming toward me I ran as fast as I could but I didn't think I’d be fast enough. Then as I started running everything around me blurred as if the entire world around me was rushing by. After I slowed down to see where I was at I looked back and I saw a huge cloud of dust, which was in the location I was at the beginning of the fight. I was at about a mile away from the others. As the dust cloud was about to clear I was ready to get back so I ran into the fray but at a slightly slower speed if I could so I could see where I was going. I got there just before the dust completely cleared and stood there where I was before except I was in a crater this time and said in a somewhat arrogant way "Hey you guys that was a good try but now it's my turn!!" On those words I moved. I ran towards Shikimaru and after getting my sword cut a huge circle around him and put some fake explosive tags on the ground around him just to let him know they were there and keep him from being able to do anything I than put the sword in the ground right in front of him to make sure he knew that he was beat. I think he realized he was beat because he had a grim look of shock on his face. Now that he was beat I decided to go after Chouji but before I could do that all of a sudden my vision started getting blurry and I was starting to get dizzy but I couldn’t let that stop me. I continued towards Chouji and encircled him with all of the shurikan I had and then went straight for Ino making sure I wouldn’t hurt her (I just can’t hurt girls) I used the string from inside the pouch I was given before to tie up her legs and arms so she couldn’t do anything. After the fight was over I shouted to Shikamaru “Hey Shikamaru those tags…. are fake,“ I said struggling to breath, “you can get out. I’m going to untie Ino…” but before I could do that all of a sudden I collapsed. “Garick!!!” I heard Chouji yell, barely conscious enough to tell what was going on I saw Shikamaru, Asuma, and Chouji run towards me after they got to me Asuma had told Chouji to do something which I could only guess (because right now all sound seemed muffled to me) was untie Ino because after he was told that he went straight to her to untie her. As I laid there I started to get my hearing back a little bit more I heard Asuma say, “Garick, Garick are you alright?” “Yeah I'm ok.” “You did very well Garick.” “Yeah,” said Chouji, “that was an amazing fight.” Thank you um… would you guys mind helping me up?” I said as I slowly sat up, “Oh yeah sure Chouji said as he put out his hand after helping me up we started heading back as we were walking Shikamaru said that speed was amazing how did you move that fast that was so fast that could even rival Rock Lee in speed?” Truthfully I don’t know it just happened.” I said making sure to keep out the fact that something had given me that speed. Ten minutes later we get back to the village Asuma than says Garick you did very well today you should get some rest. “Alright.” I said glad to comply went straight to bed completely exhausted anxiously wondering what the next day would bring.
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