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My Life as a Teenage Voraphile
Enter a world where males are at the bottom of the food chain
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  Chapter 17: The reviews are in, the critics aren't kind   (ID #569649)
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Charlette felt a little weird after the ordeal and decided to go behind the couch. The girls seemed preoccupied with the actors for the moment, who stood their, paralysed and white, each one a with a visible cold sweat overcoming them.

The girls giggled, whispering to each other, pointing at random lads and occasionally letting out a delicate burp. Rita began shuffling about on the chair and Tira eventually made their announcement about the actors performance. “Well you were all awful. Truly, truly awful, we decided to do the theatre a service and eat you all.” Even before she had finished her sentence the actors began to scatter, frantically clawing at the doors, looking for some place to hide. The girls just sat back and laughed, waiting till they got tired. Within a couple of minutes, they did what the stage hands did, and all huddled up in a corner in foetal positions, rocking back and forth. The girls began to advance upon the lads, who were trying to keep from breaking down completely, when Jenny, whispered something into Rita’s and Tira’s ears. The 2 girls blushed and agreed it was a very good idea. They each went to the corner and each grabbed one lad. Jenny grabbed Henry, Tira grabbed a rather buff looking lad with brown hair, clearly meant to be Biff Loman, and Rita grabbed a bookish lad with a spindly frame and a lighter shade of brown hair, like caramel, who was intended to be Bernard.

The lads scrunched the faces an tried to pull themselves back into the corner, grunting desperately in high pitched tones, but as the girls held their arms they were effortlessly dragged into the centre of the room. Jenny, decided to explain her idea to the boys in a seductive tone, trailing her fingers over Henry’s chest, “We got good news for you boys. Of all the lads here, you were the least terrible, so, we are going to let you put off being eaten. We, are going to try and make you cum, and the longer you last *giggle* the longer you live…” Henry gasped and Bernard whimpered,

“No…” as he tried to pull away from Rita. Biff pleaded to the smiling Tira as she pulled down his pants,

“Please… don’t do this, I don’t want to go. Not like this!” Rita laughed as she ripped Bernard’s pants off,

“Maybe you should have acted better then, besides, there are worse ways of going down.” Jenny licked her lips as Rita spook, pushing the horrified Henry to the ground and pulling off his pants, already, the girls hands had slipped into their underwear, gripping each of their erect members tightly. Jenny looked affectionately at Henry,

“It’s a little small don’t you think hon?” Henry looked away with shame when he saw Charlette. With a pathetic tone he cried out,

“Why! Why did you do this to us!” Charlette could only look away as every lad in the room seared her with their accusing glares. Henry gave a groan as Jenny began to slide her hand up and down his shaft

“It doesn’t matter now sweetey. Just enjoy yourself, you are about to cum anyway, don’t hold back, shoot your load all over me.”

The girls were performing similarly, whispering sweet nothings to Bernard and Biff, trying to convince them in soft seductive tones to explode, let loose, to coat them in cum. It was amazing that the lads were able to last past the hand jobs.


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