This choice: Still in Nicole's Belly | Go Back Chapter 16: Digestion in the Womb (ID #597500) an addition by: loony28 ![View loony28's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author You wake up and find yourself in in Nicole's womb still. You would have thought that you wouldn't wake up again until you were reborn. You can hear a muffled voice which you assume is Laetitia. You can barely make out what she's saying. "I wanted to eat him" she complains.
"Stop complaining" Nicole said sounding clearer to you. "I won Troy fair and square."
"But you were suppose to eat him." Laetitia was clearly whining.
"His body will still be destroyed. I still get the nutrients from him. The only difference is that his soul will have a different body instead of being absorbed into me."
You feel a moment of panic as you realize the situation you're in. Your body is going to be destroyed just like it would have been if Nicole had eaten you. The only saving grace in this would be that you'll get a new body. You start to wonder what your body will become. You doubt that it will become shit. Suddenly Nicole's womb fills with some sort off fluid which further muffles Laetitia's voice. The fluid also numbs your entire body so you wonder if it's being destroyed now or not. You guess that this fluid is breaking your body down. You can still hear Nicole's voice but there is a new sound. It takes a few seconds for you to realize that it's Nicole's heart beat.
"Ok, I'm done arguing" you hear Laetitia say though you have to concentrate to hear her. "What are you going to name him?"
You hadn't thought about your name. Since Nicole will be your mother now she could give you a completely different name. Nicole takes a few moments before answering. "I think that I'll keep his name as Troy if he comes out a boy again. If he comes out as a girl I think I'll name him Tanya. Hmm... I think that his body is about to be pulverized. I can feel my muscles starting to tense up."
"Can I feel it? I've never unbirthed someone."
"Go ahead."
Both girls go quiet and the only sounds you hear are Nicole's heart beat, her breathing, and a tiny gurgling which you think is coming from her stomach. You can also hear a tiny fart escape. You don't know what they're waiting for.
Quite suddenly you feel the walls of Nicole's womb contract. You're so startled that you let out a scream though no sound comes out. You realize that your lungs must be filled with fluid though you had no idea that they were. There's another contraction and you feel some pain though it was far off. There's several more contractions and with each one you feel more far off pain. You also sense that your body is now misshapen. You can no longer hear anything. You think this is because one of the first three contractions destroyed your ear drums.
The contractions keep coming though now you're losing feeling in different body parts. If you had to guess as to the cause you'd guess that those parts were breaking off. You wonder how long this will go on, it already feels like days.
Finally with one last contraction you find that you can't feel any part of your body. You don't think that the contractions have stopped but you can't feel them. It seems like you're separated from your body now.
Now all you have to do is wait to be born. What will you be born as though? Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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