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Animal Transformation
You wake up changing into an animal and you love it!
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  Chapter 15: Eliza's Transformation   (ID #406677)
    an addition by: Past Member 'helbanlasalle'  More by this author


Noticing that they are confused at what you and Eliza are talking about, (mostly astonished by the fact that Eliza is speaking all their languages and they understand a human.) you tell them your story, about you being human, then Zebra

"How amazing," the leader stallion says


"do you both care to join us?" the leader says

"Sure, do you Eliza?" you ask

"Sure, why not" she replies

The leader takes a palm leaf and grasps it with his teeth. He lightly brushes Eliza with the palm leaf and then you.

"May you be filled with the spirit and grace of our ancestors, god bless you two children." he says

Not too soon afterwards, you see Eliza looking a tad diffrent.

"Uh, Eliza? You look...diffrent." you say

"What do you mean?" She replies quizzically

You point out with your hove that her hands look a tad black and you see faded stripes on her arms and legs

"h,Hey. My eyes," she says as she notices her vison improving far better than her glasses can compel

"Oh, y...your becoming," you studder as she transforms

"I'm becoming a..." she smiles in excitement

" Your becoming a Zebra!" you say as you see her shed her clothing and backpack

"Yes, you are now one of us. You can chose to return to your human self, child, when you see fit."

"Thank you sir, Its an honor,"

"The plesure is all ours, come." The leder starts heading for the watering hole and the herd follows.

You and Eliza follow

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