This choice: they go out of the tower (continue the original story) | Go Back Chapter 13: they go out of the tower (continue the original... (ID #1062520) an addition by: lovelydiva ![View lovelydiva's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author Though he was surprised by how quickly the girl ate the candies, Flynn had to admit there was something hot about watching this girl consume some chocolate. He shook that away though to concentrate on what he needed to do. The only way he was going to get his satchel back was to take this girl to the laterns. While it was kinda annoying for him, he could think of worse things he would have to do to get his satchel back. "Alright blondie, let's get this over with" he said as he got up after Rapunzel released her hair around for him. "Great! I'm Rapunzel by the way" she said cutely with a smile as she introduced herself. "Nice to meet you Rapunzel, I'm Flyn Ryder" Flynn said trying to sound all cool and dangerous.
Flyn then made his way down to the ground and called up to Rapunzel after she didn't come down immediately. "Are you coming blondie?" he called up to her. After checking to make sure the satchel was still safely hidden, she then used her hair to slide down to the ground with the cooking pot in her free hand and Pascal on her shoulder. As soon as she got down onto the ground, she started to run, so happy and excited to finally be free from the tower. She had to slow down a bit after running a few ways as she was still so full from the candy. She then rolled around in the grass and threw up leaves in the air. Flynn just watched this in shock, it was like she was a little girl but in fact she was 18 or at least he hoped she was. She looked like she was 18. "Okay blondie, I just have to make sure that you really are going to be 18. Rapuzel blushed a bit at that. "Sorry about that, I just have never been out of the tour before so I am really excited. I am really going to be 18 though" she said sincerely. "Okay" Flynn said.
All of a sudden they bothe heard a rustling in the grass and Rapunzel shrieked as a cute little harmless bunny rabbit popped out and looked at them both curiously. Rapunzel blushed, feeling a bit embarassed about how she had overreacted but at the same tiome, she had to admit, she enjoyed having herself close to him. Flynn felt warm and strong. Two thoughts popped into Flynn's mind. One that he enjoyed feeling Rapunzel's soft body against his and two that he may have found out a way to get out of this deal sooner. Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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