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  Chapter 44: Never thought about this, did you?   (ID #1237053)
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She let out frustrated cry of rage before glaring right back at her rival. Shampoo had taken all she could stand from this overweight skank who had used her fiancée like he was her personal plaything, not knowing that technically, he was now. As Akane trembled before her, Shampoo thought about how easy it would be to take her out. She thought, none of Akane’s training could prepare her for the true rage of an Amazon Warrior, but what kept her from putting an end to her was that Ranma would be stuck in the middle. Shampoo wanted Akane dead, but she wouldn’t put her husband in danger just to make that happen.

“You have no idea what you do. Shampoo bet you never even think what Shampoo think. You only want Ranma’s baby juice all to self, but you no love him like Shampoo!” she berated Akane. If she couldn’t destroy this woman, she was at least going to let her know just how miserable she had made her, even if this bimbo didn’t give two cents about her feelings.

However, her words did strike a chord with Akane, and even the boy in her belly. All this time they were helping each other out, and she hadn’t even considered the fact that she was doing this behind the backs of the girls who actually wanted to marry Ranma. Akane couldn’t say that she was their friends, but with the exception of Kodachi, Ranma’s other fiancées were at least good people, and even if she didn’t like Kuno’s sister, her feelings for Ranma were completely genuine. As it all started to sink in, Akane got to see the fierce Amazon now with tears in her eyes.

“Shampoo no want to believe it, but get to be like Ranma like she never have. Shampoo run home and cry harder than ever in life. Great Grandmother no able to stop boo hoo. Ranma supposed to be Shampoo’s airen, not Akane’s.” she sniffled at the end, and her tears rippled the bath water. Akane had never seen Shampoo this devastated, and it killed to know that she had done this to her.

Meanwhile, underneath her belly fat, Ranma had gone silent, hoping he never had to look at himself ever again because now he knew all he’d see is a stupid punk that made girls cry. He loved to bang Akane, but now that made him lower than scum as thinking about every hip thrust now made him envision the weeping faces of Shampoo, Kodachi, and Ukyo. How could he have hurt them all so much and not even realized it?

“Shampoo,” Akane reached her pudgy arm out. She couldn’t believe that such a tender moment was happening while the two of them were standing naked in the same bath, but needed to know if she was alright. Shampoo however slapped her palm away and warned “Hand off tubby girl.”

“Wha? I…Hey wait a second! Why am I getting all the blame here?! It’s not like I was alone last night!” Akane suddenly shouted, and immediately got a startled squawk from inside her gut. Akane hadn’t just thrown Ranma under the bus, she had thrown him under three of them. Fortunately for him, it seemed that someone here was tired of talking.

“You shut fat mouth! Shampoo no care you say! Shampoo only want Ranma!” Shampoo told her, now back to looking like she was ready to kick some ass. Akane could not believe how insane this was; what, did Shampoo think she raped Ranma? Or worse yet, she probably thought she had wooed Ranma into bed. The frightening image of her wearing a rather suggestive brazier and the skimpiest thong she could find while wearing a pair of bunny ears as she fluttered her eyelashes at him, only to shove him on his back onto the bed and then plop her fat ass right onto the gleeful boy as she leaned onto him, squishing her fat boobs onto him as she whispered in his ear all the things she was going to do to him and then kissing him hard after feeling his cock bulge into her fat, made Akane so sick, she was very surprised that she didn’t upchuck Ranma right then and there. Shaking her mind free of that disgusting image, Akane faced her enemy, only wanting to finish her bath in peace.

“Well you can’t have him! I’m not letting him out of my belly for anything.” Akane told Shampoo. She failed to point out that the idea of Ranma sleeping with anyone other than her, and now Nibiki, made her get so enraged. Even if she had said that though, the devious smirk Shampoo was giving her would still be there.

“Pervert Girl now Big Fat Pig Girl. You no want food leave belly so you stay fat. Shampoo bet you still hungry, Pig Girl.” She said, and Akane blushed before growling at her and shouting “Shut up!” The worst part was that Shampoo was right on the money. Akane had downed all of Ranma, but if she had to, she could probably eat something else, though nothing Ranma sized.

The water splashed in a speed arc as Shampoo came at Akane with speed that should be impossible for someone with such big assets. Akane got her guard up, but Shampoo surprised her by going for her mouth of all places. Yes, she grabbed Akane’s lower jaw and yanked it down while also tilting her head back, while Shampoo dove head first to the easily expandable maw. The name of her love echoed through the skanky pig girl’s gullet “RANMA!”
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