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  Chapter 13: Escape!   (ID #429299)
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Your arm starts tingling like it was actually shaking. You look down at the dark mark and it is moving on its own. "Uh i will have to see you later." "What? you have to go see your dad?" "I geuss so." You touched the Dark mark and you were teleported to where it came from. Oddly enough it was your dads house. You look around for him and find him in the middle of the room. "Dad? Whats the matter?" "Auras are attacking us. I called for you because i knew you would be spoiling for a fight." "Good call. By the way. I was sorted into gryfindor." "REally? I thought it would be slytherin." I ran outside and jumped on the roof and roared. Everyone looked up at me and all the Death eaters shouted in praise while the Auras just went back to fighting. I'll show them fighting. I flew down to a lone Aura and picked him up and flew ashigh as i could before letting him go. He fell a good kilometre before going SPLAT!!!!!!!!! I found another Aura fighting a defencless death eater and landed behind him. I got my claws out and sliced his throught as heaps of blood came gushing out. Another aura cat a spell at me but i knocked aside with my bear hands. He cast more but i knocked them aside. When i got to him he was to nervous to move. I grabed him by the throught and through him up in the air. I flew up and sliced his arms up before letting him fall to the ground. "Retreit!" "Their to strong!" With that all the Auras apperated leaing only the Death eaters. I walked inside with all the other death eaters except without a mask on. My father was there to greet me and the other and celerbrate the victory. "My freinds. I don't think i have introduced to you my son yet. This is Revan Riddle. My half dragon son." everyone one siad greetings to me like nice to meet you pleased to make your aquiantance and so on. "Now that you have met my son let me just say i am very proud of him. At his age what he did in a small war like this was great. And i would lik to thank him by making him the first General Death Eater!" everyone clapped at this anouncment and i was actually proud that my father well was my father. "Would everyone assume their dutys please and leave." When everyone had vanished we came and sat down near the fireplace again And i was wondering what would happen. "I am very proud of you today. And as the new G.D.E it will be custome to have a badge or something." "What about a imprint on my chest that says G.D.E?" "That is a swell idea! Just stay where you are for a second. he got up infront of me and yelled out "QUARARAS!" The spell hit me and i looked down at my chest. it had the initials G.D.E on it. "I think i will go back to hogwarts now." "All right i'll aparate you there. Grab my arm." I grabed my dads arm and felt a sudden lurch and i was in hogwarts in the gryfindor commen room. Thank fuly none was there. "Hey dad." "Yes?" "Thanks." He smiled "Your welcome." With that he apperated again and dissapeared into thin air. "Welcome back." I turned around and saw Ron standing there At the staircase. "What took you so long? And why do you have G.D.E on your chest?" "Well as for the second question it means General Death Eater. as for the first one Auras attacked us." "Did you kil any?" "Yes. 3 Actually. Very grussemly to." Ron looked terrefied as he ran upsstairs. Probobly to wake up harry. Just as i thought harry came downstairs with ron and i geuss hermione was already up studying. The three of them staired at me. like a person with arachnaphobia would look at a spider. "What!?!" "You just killed 3 Auras thats what!!!" 'SOOOO!?!?!?!?!?!?" Ginny came running down the stairs because of all the comotion. "Whats goin on?" "Revan just killed 3 auras! Thats whats wrong!" She Looked at me horrified 'I Knew you were evil!" All 4 of them were closing in on me when i came by an open window. 'I've got it!' I thought. I jumped onto the the edge of the window and said to them "Don't come any closer or i'll jump!" They looked confused but ginny still moved closer. With that i fell backwards of the edge and came falling down. i looked up at them and they were all staring at me. Waiting for my death. I opened up my wings and used the speed to fly up into the air and 5 feet away from the window. "I thought you guys were my freinds?" "Don't count on it Revan" Hermione cast a stunning spell at me but i knocked it away. You cannot defeat me hermione! Nor can any of you!" Well see....." "Can it red head! This wont be the last time you see me. I will be back. They cast stupify at me but i blocked all except one. I caught 1. I threw it at ginny and it hit her square in the chest. "As i said before! I WILL BE BACK!" With that i flew away into the night towards the one place that would have me. "Seriously harry. He is voldermorts son! How can we defeat him?" "I don't know." They brought ginny to the hospital wing and kept her there for a week. And during that week i was at my dads.....................
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