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  Chapter 5: the sorting   (ID #430949)
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My father couldn't escort me to the train. So instead my mum did. "Have fun at school sweetie. And don't bite to many studen'ts. Remember what you and i know about our family is just a secret. Please let no one know that you are half vampire. except dumbledore if you have to. and try not to tell everyone about your father o.k?" "Ok mum i know." "Goodbye sweetie!" "Goodbye!" I got on the train just as it started to go. I went past a couple of cabins that where full until i got to one in the fith year section. I could not beleive how many people came to hogwarts this year. "Is this seat taken?" "No of course not." I sat down next to a red head and looked up. I saw a black haired boy and a brunette. "Hii i'm Malak who are you?" "I'm Ron." "I'm Hermione." "I'm Harry." "Nice to meet you. Are you guys in slytherin?" Harry replied "No. Actually where in gryfindor. Why?" "My father said i would be in slytherin." "Who's your father?" Ron added. "My mum said i can't tell. And if i tell you then...... Lets just say soething horrible will happen." "Like what?" "I don't know." We sat there for 1/2 an hour before the trolley lady came by. We bought heaps of lollies but i didn't eat any. "Come on. Try a chocolate frog." "Uh no thanks." "THeres nothing wrong wiith it just try some." "Ron he probably is allergic to them." "Uhh kind of." It was another hour before we got to hogwarts. I was seperated from ron harry and hermione. We went across a huge black lake in boats and got to hogwarts. It was amazing. Like nothing i have ever seen. Inside we were bieng sorted into houses. "Riddle Malak." Everyone started whispering at this momment as i walked up to the sorting hat and a witch put it on me. Suddenly the whole room went silent as the hat started to talk. "Ahhhhhhh. A very talented one this one. But bloodthirsty to. Darkness is clouding everything in you but also a strand of light.......THis is a difficult one. Lots of strength in you i can feel that. And of course bravery is there to. Well with bravery there is more so its going to be! GRYFINDOR!!!!!!!!" Instead of everyone shouting and clapping there hands. There was nothing. I sat down at the gryfindor table at an empty space near Harry Ron and Hermione. Then everything went back to normal. When we were shown to our houses i went inside and sat on the lounge near the fire and 2 twins with red hair sat down next to me. "It's about time you-know-who sent his kid to hogwarts." "Your right fred. But i thought he would go in slytherin not gryfindor. What was your name again?" "Malak." "Well see you later. If you ever feel like plaing a practical joke on someone dont forget to go to weaslys wizarding wheezes." "Ok." They left me with Harry Ron and Hermione. just before i could get up to leave they came and sat down with me and started talking. "Are you really a Riddle?" "Yes. But whats so wrong with that?" They stared at each other blankley before Ron asked "Do you know who your dad is?" "Yes i do." Harry interupted saying "So you are related to Voldermort?" "Yes. He's my dad." Then ron said "Then what are you doing here? Shouldn't you be going to do some deat eater task?" "RON!" Hermione said in a nagging voice. "No. One i am not a death eater. But i am branded with the dark mark." I pulled back my sleeve and showed them My dark mark and they seemed a bit aggitated. "So you come to hogwarts expecting to kill harry and then become a death eater eh? You would be an idiot if you tried to-" "What the hell makes you think i want to kill Harry!?!? I barley even know this guy!" "Don't you know it was harry who killed your father?" I was shocked. One of my newest freinds had tried to kill my father. I shrugged my shoulders because i didn't really care. "So? My dad still came back. And for your information he was actually pretty kind to me." "Yeah he would to you." I suddenly felt a blood rush go through me. A sign that i was running low on blood. "I need to go see proffeser dumbledore." "Why do you think that you need protection from us? Your dads voldermort remember?" "It's secret." I got up wearily and went out of the commen room. I hadn't bothered to change clothes when i got to the castle so i still had my very black clothes on. All i had to do was get to the headmasters ofice and i would be able to get some blood. I found a large statue and one one word popped into my head. "Cockroach." The large statue turned into a spiral staircase and i went up. When dumbledore saw me he asked "And what are you doing exploring the castle at this time of night Malak?" "I..... need.....to....tell....you....something." I said lieing on the edge of a wall. "And what might that be? If it's that Lord Voldermorts son i already know." "It's......not......that.....I....am.....a...vampire....." I said weakly. "And what might a vampire need from an old maan like me?" "I......need....your....services....." "And what might that be?" "I.....need......blood.......I.....am....growing.....weak..........."Bar ley hanging onto conscounsness i heard him say "I have no blood to spare. But if you go Down to hagrids hut now. Ahhh just a second." Just then professer snape walked in and stared at me. "What is he doing here? He should be in bed with the others." "He is an exeption severus." "Why so?" "He is a vampire."
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