This choice: Asuka appears! | Go Back Chapter 17: Asuka appears! (ID #515257) an addition by: Kuroneko ![View kuroneko's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-2.gif) More by this author Sharp, quick breaths echoed out of Ritsuko's open mouth as she collapsed down onto her hands and knees on the floor. Sweat beaded on her skin like rain as she shook. "Aaaah, god! Here it comes!" She shouted as loud as she could.
It was like a pop. One second there was a woman on her hands and knees on the floor. The next second, there was a mountain of flesh that caused even Rei's formidable body to step backwards. Deep, throaty grunts rang out from somewhere underneath the mountains of muscle that Ritsuko had become, and as convulsions ripped through her body, there was plainly still more to come.
Panting, Ritsuko pushed herself back onto her knees, her blonde hair soaked with sweat leaving a sparkling trail as it flapped back. Even though she knew in her mind that this was only the beginning, her eyes couldn't help but rove over her body. Legs like trees, the sharp chords of her muscles writhing in her skin like pythons preparing to strike. Titanic pectoral muscles rested in front of her, stretching out like a shelf. And her arms, well. There weren't any words that could describe them. There was probably more muscle on one of her arms alone than both of Rei's legs put together. Even her trained, scientific mind couldn't begin to estimate how much power she was capable of exerting now.
For a few moments, the only sound echoing through the room was Ritsuko's deep breathing. Both her and Rei could only stand entranced, looking at Ritsuko's new body.
Finally, the silence broke. A chuckle was the culprit, coming from Ritsuko. "Well, there's more where that came from." She stated with a confidence that made Rei take another few steps backwards.
And as per usual, the Doctor was quite right. Only seconds later, an earthshaking howl escaped Ritsuko's lips as she doubled over again. Like a flowing tide, flesh shot outwards at a rate that could only be called ridiculous. Rather than a simple pop, this time the growth was much more gradual. Muscle oozed outwards, growing thicker and thicker. But as it did, something that neither Rei nor Ritsuko expected happened. Gradually, and at a much slower rate than her muscles, the rest of her body began to expand. It was a slow process, but her feet crept across the floor, slowly growing farther and farther away from her head. At the same time, her rippling back climbed higher and higher, growing closer to the ceiling. Her arms pumped larger and larger, longer and longer. With an errant spasm, one of them shot out, the limb that was easily longer than a car and probably just as thick striking the glass and shattering it like it wasn't even there.
After just a few more moments, the expansion was over. Titanic, Humongous, Gigantic. These words and more floated through Ritsuko's mind, but none of them did her justice. If she had stayed the same height as before, her muscles would have been so thick, so huge that even her form from just a few minutes ago would have looked like a stick figure. But she hadn't stayed the same height as before. She was now easily 30 feet tall, and filled up a good half of the room even while on her hands and knees. Under her, Rei looked up at her face, which was settled in a valley of muscle, in awe. A smile swept onto Ritsuko's face. She knew that she was losing it. She knew that she was turning out just like Asuka had. But she didn't care.
"And I'm not done yet!" Ritsuko laughed, her voice booming.
"Oh, but neither am I!" Another, familiar voice replied. But this voice seemed to shake the very air itself. Surprised, Ritsuko's pushed herself back onto her knees and looked out the window, moving her body to keep it from obstructing her view. What she saw shocked her.
Asuka.
That's all that Ritsuko could see. The entire window was full of Asuka. Dominating the center was a gigantic, red haired head, easily as tall as Ritsuko's whole body was, if not more. And other than that, literal mountains of muscle, extending as far as Ritsuko could see in all directions. If Ritsuko was indescribable, Asuka was unspeakable. Even if the two had been the same size, she still would have made Ritsuko look small in comparison.
"But this is only the beginning, my dear Doctor. Now I'll have you come along with me. After all, I've still got plenty of uses for you." Asuka laughed as her gigantic head, plastered with a "Cat that ate the canary" smile pulled back, and in it's place a titanic arm that would make a Sequoia tree feel small thrust a giant hand through the metal and glass that made up the wall as if it wasn't even there. Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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