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Naruto Feet Stories
Where the Naruto world and feet mix! Everyone's invited!
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  Chapter 4: The Feet   (ID #468221)
    an addition by: HighTidal4  More by this author

Naruto was getting antsy. He was getting far too excited to take things too slowly. He placed his two sandaled feet to each side of Kiba's face. Naruto taunted,

"That battle was fierce, and I think my feet need a little rest. How does your face sound Kiba? I know with your sense of smell you can get the gist of what's to come. How's it smelling so far."

Naruto could see Kiba's face turning red as the dog ninja was holding his breath. It only brought more excitement to his face.

Kiba gave a quick glance side to side as Naruto placed his rancid feet near his head. Kiba let out a whimper, his heightened sense of smell made the stench unbearable already, if Naruto moved his feet more than an inch closer he would pass out.

Naruto moved his hand over to his left foot first and held it by his sandal and spoke,

"I haven't taken off these sandals in a while. I've done a lot of training before our battle, and I don't remember ever taking a bath anytime recently. It's going to stink, and you're going to smell them. Right over your face. And if you even think about passing out... you won't be seeing Akamaru anytime soon."

A shock was sent up Kiba's spine as his master now made a reference to his canine companion. Kiba gave a fierce growl as he quickly picked his head up, only to be quickly brought down again by Naruto's left foot, it was bare.

Kiba never saw it coming. He had a fierce moment of anger directed at Naruto for taking his companion into this. And the foot seemed as if it came out of nowhere. The warm, wet foot was placed firmly over Kiba's face with the toes at the forehead and the arch over the nose. Kiba was taken too much by surprise to not breathe in, but thankfully he was able to breathe through his mouth. However, that one breath put Kiba near the threshold of pain. A bit of the scent entered through his nose, and the stench was even powerful enough to even enter through his mouth. Kiba gave out a howl of pain as his body convulsed a bit in order to rid itself of the rank smell. Kiba's arms lifted up quickly to try and pull the foot away, but it was near plastered to his face. Naruto was pressing down harder and harder as Kiba struggled. Kiba began to shout in muffled desperation,

"Stoppp.... please.... I'm s-s-sorry.... s-s-stop...."

Kiba kept moving around as Naruto spoke out again in his childish tone,

"Not until you calm down."

Kiba got control of his breath quickly and released his grip on Naruto's leg and placed his arms flat. He got control of his convulsions and lay motionless, holding his breath.

Naruto smiled in appreciation and moved his foot over a little bit so Kiba could see him out of his left eye. Naruto spoke,

"Good. Now before you get Akamaru back. There are some things we need to take care of. First, ... "
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