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Naruto Feet Stories
Where the Naruto world and feet mix! Everyone's invited!
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  Chapter 28: Naruto Cracks Beneath the Feet of Sakura   (ID #1172343)
    an addition by: jedsho1234  More by this author

Sakura slammed her foot down hard on Naruto's dick causing the boy to gasp out in pain. The gasp only served to hurt him more and he started coughing up even more blood.

"Stop coughing up blood on my floor slave." Sakura called out coldly as she raised her foot for a second strike.

Naruto couldn't believe his ears. He was coughing up blood, BLOOD. Even he knew that was a sign of internal bleeding and if left untreated he was going to die... And all Sakura cared about was that he was coughing blood out onto her floor? Prisoners in an ANBU prison get better treatment than this.

He felt that unimaginable pain again as Sakura slammed her foot down on his balls for the second time.

How could she do this to me... Naruto wondered sadly as he tried to ignore the pain that had consumed his entire body.

Sakura's foot was still against his balls and she pressed down tighter causing Naruto to scream out in agony.

Naruto couldn't take it anymore. He just couldn't. This was too much for even him to take. He had survived a childhood of being hated for the Kyubi that he kept sealed away from the world. He had survived the betrayal of his best friend. He had survived the death of his master and godfather. He had survived one of the bloodiest wars in the entire world's history. But he couldn't take this anymore.

He wanted to die. Naruto Uzumaki actually wanted nothing more than to die.

Sakura twisted her foot against his balls sending more shockwaves of pain through his body. As Sakura continued torturing his balls, Naruto wondered if this intense pain was what it was like to have your demon ripped out of you. He had talked to Gaara about having the shukaku removed from his body by the Akatsuki a little bit. Gaara told him that the pain was beyond anything he could have ever imagined and he had actually been relieved to die.

At the time Naruto couldn't comprehend pain that was so much that someone would actually want to die. The idea seamed ridiculous. But now Naruto understood.

After what seemed like a millenia, Sakura finally lifted her foot from his throbbing balls. She looked at him with an unreadable expression and Naruto vaguely wondered how she was going to torture him next. He was surprised when she actually reached out glowing green hand to his chest.

"Don't..." Naruto gasped. "Just don't."

Sakura's eyes widened. Having taken her anger out on Naruto (which she still didn't fully understand), she was feeling a lot better. Now Naruto didn't want her to heal him? The idiot realized he was going to die without her healing didn't he?

"Shut up Naruto." Sakura replied, but Naruto's trembling hand stopped her own.

"No. Don't you dare heal me." Naruto rasped out.

"You have internal bleeding slave" Sakura growled making sure to emphasize his new station in life. "You don't tell me what to do. If I want to heal you, I'm going to heal you."

To Sakura's surprise, Naruto started chuckling. Although he winced in pain from the stress laughing was putting on his body...

"Please stop doing that." Naruto said in between chuckles.

"Stop doing what? Trying to save your life?" Sakura was starting to get angry again.

"Trying to save my life? Really Sakura?" Naruto's chuckles transformed into painful full-blown laughter. He didn't care about the pain, he couldn't stop laughing right now if he had to. Naruto Uzumaki had finally cracked beneath the feet of Sakura Haruno. He knew that laughing like this at his new master probably wasn't the best idea in the world, but he just didn't care anymore. She could kill him. He wanted her to kill him.

"Naruto..." Sakura growled menacingly as she tried to remove her hand from Naruto's grip, but surprisingly she couldn't.

"What are you going to do Sakura? Kill me? You've come this far, why don't you just finish the damn job already. I'm sure even though the villagers pretend to like me, they'd still celebrate you as a hero for killing the demon boy."

Sakura's eyes were as wide as saucers as she listed to Naruto's words.

"Na...Naruto..." Sakura managed to gasp out.

"Do it Sakura, finish me off."

Sakura stared down at Naruto in complete shock. She could feel an anger deep down inside of her waiting to be unleashed again. How dare he lay there and tell her to let him die. How dare he think that she wanted to kill him...
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