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Pact of Nai-obi
Will you be one of the chosen? Additions please.
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This is an interactive story containing 6 chapters. Each chapter tells part of the story and (usually) ends with multiple choices. Click on a choice and you'll be lead to the next chapter in your story. When you reach a chapter that hasn't been written yet, you will have the option to write it! Don't be shy... make an addition!
About This Interactive
The owner of this Interactive Story begins with this information and guidance:
The pact of Nai-obi
Charactors

Isaac
Personality: A little quiet, tries to be unobtrusive, but will easily lose his temper, will open up only after he gets to know a person, can be very nutty, can be a little brooding, Can almost be described as a nerd for his love of science
Appearence: 6'6", Well muscled, Shoulder length slightly wavy brown hair, blue-gray eyes
Age: 18
Kindred spirit: The Spirit of Pure Darkness

Chrystal
Personality: Is usually quiet, but can be very exuberant, only opens up to someone if she feels comfortable around them, but once she opens up to someone she is a very bright and funny person and very enjoyable to be around, considers herself a history buff, likes anime
Appearence: 5'9", waist length straight jet-black hair, A slight figure, blue-green-gray-hazel eyes all together in a *kalidascope*
Age: 18
Kindred spirit: The Spirit of Living Light

Jason
Personality: Overly confident, excitable and jumpy at times. Acts very immature.
Appearence: 5'10" also muscled, Crew cut light brown hair, blue-slate eyes
Age: 14
Kindred spirit: The Spirit of the Wind

Libby
Personality: Bubbly and out going, obsessed with everything anime, and Harry Potter. Is quite crazy *in a good way*, may fly off the handle during moments when she is vulnerable
Appearence: 5'7", a curvy figure, waist length lightly wavy, light-brown hair, gray-ish blue eyes
Age: 16
Kindred spirit: The Spirit of Fire

Lynn
Personality: A little grating, chatty almost to the point of babbleing. Will make random associations that for whatever reason she will not remember after speaking, she is almost as obsessed with anime, and HP as Libby is, is very scatter-brained
Appearence: 5'5", thin, with thigh length straight brown hair, hazel eyes
Age: 11
Kindred spirit: The Spirit of True Waters

Bradley
Personality: Is a little overconfident, but not as bad as Jason, but just as childish, is also a little nutty
Appearence: 5'11", Crew cut, dark brown hair, pale blue eyes, thin
Age: 14, *almost 15*
Kindred spirit: The Spirit of Thunder and Lightning

Annah
Personality: Is very random, and a little scatter-brained to the point of being almost as bad as Lynn, loves country music, but doesn't like Rock 'n' Roll, especially Nickleback
Appearence: 5'6", Shoulder length, straight light brown hair, green eyes, slightly heavy-set
Age: 11
Kindred spirit: Spirit of the Earth

There are 12 spirits in total, and here are the other five: Metal, Wood, Animal, Psychic, and Sound

Don't make any of the above characters: Emo, Gay, Gothic, or any other strange thing, because this is based (kinda not really) on real life.

Other Fetishes are alright as long as they don't become the entire theme
ex: If someones is trying to find a treasure, but they gain weight don't just make them sit around and eat

Also, I like anime lol woot. so fanfiction references are ok

The premis for this story is kinda based on the theology of Shintoism. but anything after the spear turns into Mt Fuji is just stuff i've made up.

The twelve Daemons have elements the same as the twelve spirits.
Both the Spirits and the Daemons are drawn to the chosen mortals, but where the Spirits are drawn to protect and empower, the Daemons are drawn to terrify and destroy.

When the spirits becomes one with the Chosen, thier power goes up on an almost exponential level, *without this the spirits would have no chance against the Daemons*, this increase is due to the spiritual energy of the Chosen becoming one with the Semi-divine powers of the twelve spirits

Also, every time one of the Daemons is defeated by the chosen one with the same elemental power, the chosen one becomes even more powerful, and the Daemon is weakened, but this also works in reverse.

Also, every time one of the Chosen ones absorbs some of the Daemon's power their thoughts become more demonic, and if left unchecked they will turn evil...but only for a short time the spirit energy inside them will eventually consume the demonic aura and they will return to normal.
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