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  Chapter 11: Naruto experiences the fruits of her training.   (ID #568196)
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Azula bent down and took off her boots again. Naruto wimpered, causing Azula to feel a smirk grow on her face.

"Don't worry, this woun't hurt a bit." Azula said

Naruto shuttered, the way she said that...he suddenly wish the Akatsuki would show up. Fat chance of that, they wanted to rip the demon fox out of his still-living body, if he would have welcomed seeing those psychos, this girl could put Ibiki to shame, and he was the one who was going to learn that the hard way. He had to convince her not to do this.

"I have to admit, your attacks were amazing."

Azula looked up at him, she was delibritly going as slow as possable to improve the quality of the boy's psychological torment.

"Thank you. You seemed to enjoy the show I put on for you." she said

"I did. What are you, a pyro-goddess or something?"

Azula felt herself begin to blush, true she had been complimented on her skill as a firebender befor, but someone she didn't even know calling her a pyro-goddess? That was new. Azula kicked off her boots and still had her smirk on.

"So, I'm a pyro-goddess to you am I? Well, how about I give you a sample of the fruits of my training, little one."

With that, Naruto felt her feet plant themselves so close to his face that it seemed to him that they were tring to mirge with him. The smell was even more awful that before. All those kicks did a better job than he was afraid of. He couldn't think, couldn't breath, or even move. The stale smell of overworked feet continues to degrade his state, the stink of which makes his determination wither. Naruto continues to shudder from having Azula's foot odor corrupt his bodily system. Naruto's mouth is filled with the vinegar taste. And his eyes were teary from the overwhelming odor thanks to forcibly enduring the hellacious torture.

"Thirsty?" Azula asked, a mock-sweetness in her tone. She forced open his mouth and poured all the built-up sweat inside her boots down his throat, forcing him to drink every last drop. Naruto let out a muffled scream that made Azula laugh.

"Aw...how cute, you can't stand not having my feet on your face."

Azula put her feet back were they were. Naruto was sure as this was hell that the demon fox was loving this. That became wickedly clear as the fimmiler feel of red chakra gathered at on place: His nose, making his sinse of smell god-only-knew how sharper. Naruto passed out, he couldn't stand it.
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