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  Chapter 20: Naruto: 1, Azula:0   (ID #560767)
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"Heh, I summon a level 3 fire dragon and level 2 fire dragon." Azula smirked, she felt pretty sure of herself.

"Darn, and all I can summon are these..." Naruto said with a grin as he summoned a level 4 water dragon and a level 5 water dragon.

Projections of the dragons arose from the cards. Naruto had his two water dragons attack Azula's fire dragons, Azula couldn't beleve it. She just sat there, her eyes wide and her mouth being the envy of a wide-mouthed bass. She lost...to her own pet! It was unbelevable! Azula never lost before and Whiskers, who had never even heard of "Dragon Cards" beat her so...easily! Just how good WAS this guy?!?!?!

"Good game, a bit too short, but still...would it be wrong to say that your amzing at this!" Azula laughed.

"I just got a lucky hand." her pet said bashfully.

Azula stood up and walked over to Whiskers and planted a kiss on his forehead. Naruto blushed bright as a bonfire, it was the first time a girl had kissed him. Azula giggled at the shocked look on his face, he was just too cute when he was embarrised.

"You got me, I'm not going to deny that you won fair and squar. What's this request of your's, Whiskers?"

"Do you remember how I was training when you found me?"

"Yeah, I'm glad I found you, so?"

Naruto whent into an explination about how his life in the Leaf village was as one of Kakashi’s students and how he had to grow up with no one in his life, leaving out the nine-tailed fox compleatly of course, Azula started to cry at the thought of her pet being so lonely, But more than anything, she was mad as heck at this Kakashi guy. She felt justified in beleaving Kakashi’s treatment of Naruto was wrong starting from the bell test. How on earth do you expect a boy who has been ostracized by his own village to just grasp the concept of teamwork like that? Naruto’s never had anyone really looking out for him, especially not his classmates. While the exercise would be understandable for Sasuke (if he weren’t such a stuck up prick) as he has been pampered by his village, it makes no sense for Kakashi to reasonably expect Naruto to rely on two people who have never been there for him, i,e. Sasuke and Sakura, to help him. Naruto, despite his outgoing personality, had to learn to be a loner to survive. What kind of idiot is Kakashi not to be able to see that anyway? Next is the training. Or lack thereof. Azula made a mental list what Kakashi taught Naruto: Climbing Trees...and that’s it. Kakashi regarded Sasuke more highly than Naruto, that much is pitifully obvious; as he watched Neji fight Hinata, he privately thought that not even Sasuke could stand up to him, as if that bastard set the bar for Genin standards; also when he told Naruto that he couldn’t train him, he blatantly said he had more important things to take care of. How Kakashi abandoned Naruto during the one month break of the Chunin exam was more than a little messed up. Granted that things worked out for the best (with Naruto finding a stronger teacher more willing to train him) Kakashi didn’t know that would happen. What exactly was better chakra control going to do to help Naruto defeat a Hyuuga prodigy!? He probably planned on Naruto losing and training him in the next exam, the bastard. First and foremost, if you can’t train more than one student at once, don’t take a three man squad. Secondly, Kakashi knows the Kage Bunshin. Why couldn’t he have at least made one to instruct Naruto. Thirdly, and this is the kicker, he had the gall to reprimand Jiraiya for teaching Naruto the Rasengan after he had taught Sasuke the Chidori! This clearly indicates that, while he knew the technique all along, Kakashi had no plans of teaching it to Naruto because he didn’t think he could handle it appropriately. What did he think Sunshine boy was going to do with the Chidori; use it as a magnetic force to attract an ice cream truck for the Konohamaru corps to have a snack!? He actually believed that Sasuke would use it to protect his fellow shinobi of the Leaf. Didn’t he spend a lot of alone time with Sasuke? You’d think he was a little more observant of the fact that everything Sasuke did was toward killing Itachi...especially since the prick had said that! Also, she made sure not to forget the rather ironic fact that Naruto mastered the Rasengan in roughly one month, the same amount of time taken to train for the third round...a rather obvious smear on Kakashi’s poor teaching. The idiot doesn’t even realize how Jiraiya taught Naruto the Rasengan because Kakashi was too busy being a dad to a pompuse ass that was just like her brother.

"So...your a fighter?"

"Yep...and being in that kennel made me feel I needed a good workout, no offince."

"None taken Whiskers. So, you want to put your training to good use?" Azula couldn't beleve her luck! She could use her pet's skills and abbilities pretty well for use aginst the Fire Nation's enemies.

"I'll do what I can for you, after all, you are my owner!" Whiskers pipped up happly.

"Good boy." Azula said, she was going to use Naruto's skills, make no mistake of that, but he wouldn't be made into a living weapon or anything like that, after all, Azula loved her new pet too much for treatment like that.

"In the meantime...rematch?"

Azula laughed affectionately and ruffled Whisker's hair

"Your on."
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