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Zoo Anal Vore
Having been locked inside a zoo, the animals show their true features: namely big butts
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  Chapter 11: Conversation and More of Nakii's World   (ID #1048674)
    an addition by: Komputer  More by this author

Within the brain of the blue whale, the virtual restaurant that Nakii had created has certainly made you feel more at ease. Around you, the other 'customers' are all sea creatures like dolphins, fishes, and so on. The restaurant itself has a oceanic theme complete with "water-ripple" blue light effects, murals depicting beaches and the deep ocean, white sands for the flooring, and most strangely, a second Whale-Vision display right by your table, showing the deep sea gorges Nakii is currently swimming through. When you try to touch the 'walls' of the restaurant, the walls remain fleshy like it originally was before Nakii changed the setting. You guess that Nakii has done it to make her holographic environment more out of the ordinary for you. When you look onto the table, there are no plates or cutlery; there is only a plain-looking menu that simply contains only the words 'fish' and 'shrimp.' You conclude that is because since Nakii is a blue whale, her diet must contain only those things. Across the table, there sat the holographic human Nakii, seeming ever so attractive as she look at you with her ocean-blue eyes.

You started to talk: "Nakii, I never thought I would say this, but I really am starting to like you. Just a few hours ago, I was just merely a ordinary night-watch at the zoo and now, I'm sitting here within your brain and enjoying what may be my first date with a blue whale. Why are you doing this all for me?"

Nakii paused for while and said: "Because I felt so lonely without someone who is really close to me. Back there at the zoo aquarium, I was the only blue whale there and all I could see were the countless other humans who stare at me in awe through glass windows. They were merely there to see me perform some kind of tricks and not really to know more about me. But that changed tonight: I was again swimming all by myself in that confined aquarium, then I saw you at the poolside, trying to feed me. The moment I saw you, I know you were different; special in some ways. So, I ate you and let you explore my interior. It is then that I realized that I was right: you really DO want to know more about me. I'm just more than happy to get to know you."

"You must have been through a lot this whole time.", you said, "Since I've also been through similar experiences, I know how it feels like. But now, the more I explore you (both your interesting interiors and your character), the more I love you."

The human Nakii looked out of her Whale-Vision and turned back toward you beaming with a big smile: "Thank you. I don't how I should thank you. So..... do you want to explore more parts and things within me?"

"Of course", you said. Together with the human Nakii, you got out of your chairs and head back to the puckered hole leading to the central control. After you entered the brain chamber, you heard the whale Nakii speak to you again: "So you really interact well with my holographic self. I guess that we are really meant to be together. Right now, I'm going to temporarily turn off the "Personal Interactions", because I don't want to spoil your fun-filled exploration of me."

As the whale said so, the holographic human Nakii tell you to have fun before slowly fading out with a little smile.

You return to the balcony in Nakii's huge brain and began to operate the interface of the "Nakii PC" you played with previously. You come across the 10 choices again. As you scan the choices on the display, you decided that you need to get a rough idea of the scale of 'Nakii's World' so you choose the "Map" button for more information. Almost immediately, the large 'screen' before you refreshed and displayed the information you want. "WHOA!!!", you exclaimed in amazement. The map depicts a cutaway map of Nakii that shows the endless variety of organs and body parts you can go to. You appear on the map as a tiny blinking dot in the brain area; you explored only about 5% of Nakii's interior.

Considering that it is impossible to explore Nakii all at once, you decide to stay in the brain to try out more of the choices presented on the "Nakii PC". The four that interests you the most are (7. Ocean-Net), (4. Mind Control Options), (10. Direct Interface), and (8. Dreams).

Which one do you choose?
Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...


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