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  Chapter 18: Hotel Bizzaro   (ID #609112)
    an addition by: Aerodeth  More by this author

January 22nd

Ok, good news and bad news. Good news is we managed to find an abandoned hotel on our way to Andrews Villa. Lotus Hotel. It's a really fancy place (or at least it WAS!) Suprisingly enough, the electricity and even the air-condition & heating systems are fully functional! Plenty of free space, nice and warm, a place to cook up our homegrown veggies, everything inside works and me & Ashley have it all to ourselves! (No offense to Hope!) I'm not even so sure I wanna keep moving at this rate!

Now for the bad news... well, I think I might be going crazy, but I really REALLY believe something's a little off about Ashley. Normally whenever she acts a little weird, I just shrug and move on, but now I'm just confused now that I think about it.

First of all, I dont think I ever recall seeing her eat. Every time I offer her something to eat, she'd turn it down and say she's not hungry. Heck, even while I fed her when she was sick, she'd say she'll eat it later. We dont have very much to eat, yet she looks so much healthier than I do. Come to think of it... I dont think I ever seen her eat a single peach. She says it's her favorite fruit, but why doesnt she eat 'em?

Sometime in the even (according to the clocks that still havent stopped, it was around 8:30pm) while we were watching an old DVD of the Lion King in the luxury suite, I asked her if she was feeling alright. Long story short, she got a little hesitant with me and threw a little fit. That's when I thought that maybe the reason was she going through her menstral period I remember reading in one of my old books. But when I asked her if it was her time of the month... she slapped me.

Hard! It's kinda hard writing with one hand while rubbing my cheek with the other! I guess it was a little rude of me to pry. Maybe I should just give her some space. It's probably all in my head, anyway.

....


Sorry for this sudden entry, but just a few hours after last writing, I saw something bizarre happen to Ashley. While she was chopping up some peaches for breakfast tomorrow, I noticed she accidently cut her finger with the knife.

SHE DIDNT BLEED!

I swear. That knife was very sharp. I almost cut MYSELF just barely touching the sharp edge. I did not see any blood come out when she nicked her finger with it!

Now I really am curious about her. Is there something about her that she's not telling me?
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