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Comic Book Women's Feet
Comic Book Girls fulfill your foot fetish fantasies
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  Chapter 21: Left   (ID #1026107)
    an addition by: Past Member 'wraith24'  More by this author

She wiggles you a bit in front of the mirror, smirking happily as a few last fetid drops flick off your body. As she gives your lower lip, now the toe section a squeeze, you can feel the rancid, greasy mix gush out of your body, running a little bit over your mouth before re-absorbing into you.

"Oh, I feel really sorry for you when I change you back. That sweat is so engrained into your new body, it'll probably take you weeks of showers before it goes away." You start salivating at the thought of a week long shower, then realize it's just her giving you another squeeze"

She looks back at the table you had been lying on top of, then at your new body, and frowns in thought. "In fact... At this point, some people might consider that pretty cruel. I mean, I said this was for a day. Making you live through the stench after I change you back wouldn't look good for my reputation." You try telling her that that was fine, that you wouldn't tell anyone, but she hasn't let you talk yet. You hang limply in her finger tips as she lazily swings you around and thinks out loud.

The beginning of a smirk forms in the corner of her mouth, "Actually, now that I think about it, it might even be dangerous to change you back. Your body is probably..." She swings you around a little stronger, and you can almost hear sloshing with how much sweat has absorbed into your new body, "5% sweat." She frowns off into space, "Even if you only get a fraction of that when changed back, it'd probably still be fatal. I probably should have thought this through"

Each word she says is like a bolt of fear through you. Was she serious? You would just change back, into your body, right? You wouldn't be split off from it like that, she had to be kidding... but she looks serious, although there's traces of other emotions there as well. Talking almost to herself, "And it's not like anyone knows where you went. I could keep you like this until I know for sure..." she gives you another squeeze, marvelling at the resiliency of your form, grinning a little, "Or longer..."

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