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  Chapter 30: A Botched Trap   (ID #1019990)
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It's a cold, dark night in Gotham City, and like any night in Gotham, many crimes are being committed. Mostly by super criminals and mob bosses such as the Joker, the Scarecrow, the Riddler, Mr. Freeze, Poison Ivy, Rupert Thorne and many other villains from the Bat Family and Birds of Prey’s rouge’s gallery. You admire them and you hope that one day, you can join their ranks and command that much power, fear and respect in Gotham’s large underworld as they do. However, it will take far too long to reach their status without any super powers, tricks or a legion of goons to help you out. It doesn’t help that you’re more or less a small time criminal who committed some minor robberies and a few muggings in our area. What’s even more pathetic is that you haven’t even ran into or seen a member of the Bat Family or the Birds of Prey. However, those facts are about to change, for you had come up with a plan to really make it into the big time by taking out a member of the Bat Family or the Birds of Prey, whatever came first.

At first You thought about targeting Batman, Huntress or Black Canary, but then decided against it, figuring out that they were way out of Your league and You had heard young gangsters like you try to take one of them out only to fail miserably and receive a pummeling. With this in mind, you decide to take out one of the minor members of the Bat Family or the Birds of Prey. After all this was more then what almost every criminal then super criminal can say. (Sure, the Joker did kill the second Robin, but there should be an asterisk next to that record since the brat came back from the dead somehow). With this in mind, you decide to target the newest heroine that had recently debuted in Gotham and made a name for herself, Misfit. Not only was she the newest Birds of Prey member but she was also a meta human, so taking her out would really send Your criminal reputation sky rocketing.

“This is going to be easy,” You think; as you wait in an alleyway, gun in hand, ready to ambush the next person who walks towards you. Your friend had tipped you off the Misfit usually patrols this part of the city and your plan was to commit a mugging and then kill her as soon she arrived on the scene. You then hear footsteps coming towards you. “This is it; this is the day where I become one of the most powerful men in all of Gotham!” You predict, almost over jubilated at putting your foolproof plan into motion. Once the person, who turned out to be a young woman carrying groceries, was in distance, you then reached out, grabbed her with one, and throw her into the ally way, frightening her. You smirk at her fear as you then take out a gun, terrifying the poor woman even more. “Ple-please don’t hurt me,” the young woman stutters. You smirk at her, you love the sight of someone fearing for his or her lives, and it made you feel so…powerful. “Don’t worry Miss, I have no intentions of hurting you, as long as you pay my ‘toll’ to pass, you can go back home safe and sound,” You say in an eerily polite manner. “Bu-but I spent all of my money on groceries,” she says, now fearing more for her life than ever. “Tsk, well then I guess I’m going to have to kill you to make an example out of you. You should have known better then to not carry some extra money in this city,” You reply with a smirk. Just as you were going to squeeze the trigger and ruthlessly end the woman’s life, you and the woman suddenly hear a voice from the near-by dumpster.

“Gee, you have to pay a toll to cross an ally? It seems they find new ways to rip you off these days,” a young, feminine voice said. You smirk “Right on time,” You think, as you then turn to face your target, a cute teenaged redhead. When you finally see her, you had to use all of your will power not to burst out laughing. In your mind, she looked like she was wearing some badly designed Batgirl costume. You did have to admit, she did look sexy as you then began to scan her and undress her with your eyes. “Hmmmm….maybe I can injure her and then have my way with her before killing her,” you muse internally as you continue to violate the young heroine with your eyes. You then look at her legs and to your surprise; it seems that she’s barefoot. “Where are your shoes? That’s rather unprofessional for a super heroine to go barefoot,” you tell her with a smirk. Misfit glares at you in response and replies, “Alright before I totally kick your ass, I’m going to tell you three things. First, didn’t your mom ever teach a pig like you that looking at a girl like they were a piece of meat was rude or were you too busy checking her out while she was talking?” You scowl at her. “This bitch has quite a mouth on her, it will be fun to make her squeal,” you think as Misfit continues to talk. “Second, there are a lot of awesome barefoot super heroines that can kick your ass in a second and I don’t usually go barefoot, I wanted to know how it feels,” Misfit then blushed and mumbled, which you could sworn sounded like, “besides I forgot to put my shoes on before I went on patrol.” Misfit then stopped blushing and then smirked “And third…..Dark Vengeance!”

You widen your eyes in surprise, “Dark what?” You ask, and before you could even react, Misfit then disappeared from the dumpster and then suddenly she appears before you and can’t even react as she then punches you in the stomach, causing you to double over. She then uses her right leg to perform an upward kick, smashing your face with the top of her bare fight foot, causing your head to snap back up. Misfit then disappears and reappears above you, legs spread out. She then lands on your shoulders and wraps her legs around your neck. Before you could even enjoy yourself, Misfit flings herself backwards, uses the momentum take your body along for the ride, and painfully smash your head into the ground. You’re still somehow conscious as you look up at a smiling Misfit, her powerful legs still wrapped around your neck and her ankles hooked. “I gotta admit, I’m still surprised that you’re still awake, but I’m going to put you to sleep soon enough,” Misfit says with a smile. As soon as she finishes that sentence, she tightens her sexy legs, squeezing you like your head was a lemon and she was making lemonade. “AAARRRGGHHHH!” You squeal, in tremendous pain. Not only are you in intense pain, but your also humiliated tremendously by the fact that you’re getting your butt kicked by a teenage rookie heroine! Misfit smiles at your pain stricken face, as she then playfully ruffles your hair. “Gee, you seem rather unhappy; I would have thought that a pervert like you would sell his family to be between my legs, given the way you were staring at me a few minutes ago,” she said. You were furious at this point. The fact that this girl had the audacity to taunt you while you were struggling would have sent you into a fit of rage, if she didn’t have her legs wrapped around you like a python! “Alright, play time’s over, time for bed time” Misfit says as she once again tightens her grip on you. You squeal in pain before mercifully passing out. Misfit smirks and releases her grip on you as she then goes up to the young woman who you were about to mug. “Th-thank you” the woman mutters to Misfit, still in awe at what she saw Misfit do. “Anytime,” Misfit said with a smile, as the woman then turned and went home.

Misfit was about to head out as well but then turned at you and started to have second thoughts. “Hmmmm, this might be a good time to practice that interrogation technique that Dinah and Helena taught me. Besides, it’s seems to be a slow night and if there is any trouble, Babs can contact me and tell me where the trouble is and I can teleport myself there.” Misfit thought, as her lips formed a mischievous smile on her face. She then sat on your stomach and then put her bare feet on your face. She then wiggled her toes in anticipation as she waited for you to wake up and holds your hands down.

A few minutes you begin to stir and regain consciousness. The first thing you see are Misfit’s bare feet. “Ugh! What the? Get off of me!” You cry as you try to buck Misfit off. “Finally, I thought you were never going to wake up,” Misfit said, smirking down at you. “I’m warning you bitch! If you don’t get off me this second, I’m going to make sure you regret it bitch!” You yell, still futilely trying to get her off you. “Wow, anger issues much? And that mouth, I better do something about that” Misfit said, still smirking as she then…

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