This choice: Continue 1 | Go Back Chapter 30: Staring (ID #938057) an addition by: Bruce Lee Gifford Jr. ![View bruce607's Portfolio. [Offline / Private]](http://images.Writing.Com/imgs/writing.com/writers/costumicons/ps-icon-regular-10.gif) More by this author Soon the woman calmed down in David's arms and the hug stopped. David let go and the woman backed away and sat down. David followed suit and sat across from her. The woman rubbed her eyes to try and wipe away the tears. As the woman did this, David examined her again. The woman was remarkably beautiful. David's eyes continued to scan over the woman's body. Her body was perfect, and though this woman really did act like a person, there was no way this was real. It was clearly a dream. David's eyes met the large objects on the woman's chest and gulped. He couldn't take his eyes off them as if they had paralyzed him.
The woman finally wiped all her tears away and saw David staring. She had never seen anyone ogling her because of her beauty, so she didn't know what to think. She grew worried and thought that she had suddenly turned into her demon form and it was scaring David. "David?" the woman asked in a quivering voice.
David snapped out of his trance and looked up at the woman's face. She had noticed that he had been staring at her breasts. Embarrassed by his impulses, David turned his head away as his face reddened. David also closed his eyes, ashamed that he stared at her nude body and quite possibly offended her.
The woman felt her head and expected the feel horns or to feel her tail and wing muscles. But she felt none of them. She was confused by the human's actions and she questioned, "David, what's wrong?"
"Did she not see me staring at her?" David wondered. Suddenly, David noticed a long jacket on the cave floor that would be able to cover her body. It was a dream world after all. "Are you cold?" David asked.
"No, not at all," the woman answered. Even though succubi are usually naked, they didn't have to worry about freezing to death. They could alter the temperature of their eternal body heat in order to avoid freezing to death. It's why this demoness has found it more comfortable being naked. Or it could be because she had never worn clothing and none would ever fit her gigantic body? "Why aren't you looking at me? Am I ugly?" the woman questioned.
"No, it's just that you're naked. You're very beautiful, the prettiest thing I've ever seen. I just don't want to offend you," David explained.
"Offend me how?" the woman asked confusedly.
"Well, people wear clothing. Staring at a person's naked body is a rude thing to do," David continued to explain.
"Why would that be rude?" the woman questioned.
"Well... um... you're not offended by a person staring at you?" David asked.
"Why would I be? I didn’t understand," the woman told David, "I've been naked all my life. Why would I find it rude for people to look at me?"
David couldn't find word to explain to her the reason and David just replied, "I still find it strange to be around a naked girl. I don't want to offend you in any way, and I'd be more comfortable if you wore this jacket."
"Is something wrong with my body?" the woman began to tear up. She had been thought of as a monster her whole life and thought that this dream human was thinking the same thing and wanted to hide her body.
"No, you're the most beautiful woman I've ever seen," David admitted, "I just don't want to be distracted by sure beauty that will surely hypnotize me."
The woman blushed a bit. She had never been told she was beautiful, and to be called beautiful enough to put this man into a trance was actually the greatest compliment anyone has ever said to her. "Well, I don't mind you staring at me. If you're staring at me because you think I'm beautiful, then I am completely fine with it. No one has ever thought I was beautiful before. It would be good to have someone stare at me with beauty instead of fear," the woman replied.
David cautiously turned his head to face the woman, fearing it might be a trap. But when he turned to the woman, he saw her watery eyes. "Am I beautiful?" the woman asked.
"Very much so," David answered.
The woman sniffed and crawled closer to David and sat beside him. She hugged him from the side and thanked him.
"So, what's your name?" David asked. Where will this story go next? Your choices are below...
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