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The Outcast
A child becomes an outcast, because the child is half human
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  Chapter 35: The Succubus From Before   (ID #953793)
    an addition by: Bruce Lee Gifford Jr.  More by this author

David thought about his options He could speak to the Church, they would know a lot about demons and most were most likely around during the giant demoness's attacks. There was also the option of finding Captain Alexander or talking with the hermit Christopher. However, Captain Alexander might not know as much about the demoness and Christopher might not want to talk about his experiences. From what David knew about Christopher, Christopher and his family was one of the first people to be captured by the demon. The giant demoness thirteen years ago must have done some terrible horrors in her cave to the family fore Christopher was the only survivor.

"The church might be my best option. They claim to know a lot about Heaven and Hell. So, they should know about demons and the giant demoness that terrorized the town thirteen years ago. They would also be more open with telling me about it as to warn of the evils of Hell," David told himself, "And I should go now. If there really is another giant demoness out there, I have top find out what I'm dealing with. I also have to be careful. If I reveal my discovery, people will become crazy with panic, and if it isn't a demoness, then it will be all for nothing. Then again, I can't think of any giant creature that shouldn't be treated with caution."

David walked back to his home to drop off his bow and arrows and through he despised doing so, he left his sword behind as well. He knew the church wouldn't like weapons within the walls unless one was part of the law or a demon slayer like Bowhan. David left his weapons at his home and walked towards the church. He was determined to figure out about what had happened thirteen years ago when the giant demoness lived in the forest, and above all, what it was capable of. If it was another giant demoness that had made those footprints, then David was worried that he was in trouble.

Eventually, David made it to the church on the outskirts of the town. Though the church wasn't in town, it was still close to the edge of town. Apparently, it had been farther away from the town, but now it was much closer. When the giant demoness reined terror on the town, it had destroyed the church. The church learned its lesson and was rebuilt closer to the town after the demoness was killed and now it was much closer to help if they needed it.

David approached the church and walked through its doors. It was large with many pews on either side of the church and an alter at the end. It was large, but simple in design. There was also a large wooden cross behind the alter hanging on the wall. The church was nearly empty due to it not being Sunday. David was gladdened by this because he wasn't fond of crowds and he also didn't want others to overhear the conversation he was going to have with one of the priests.

As David looked around, a voice welcomed him to the church. He turned to see the head priest, Father Fredrick. Father Fredrick was quite young to be a head priest, or at least the youngest head priest David had ever seen. Father Fredrick was in his late thirties or early forties. "Is there any thing I can help you with, young sir?" Father Fredrick asked.

"Actually, I've come to obtain some information," David informed him.

"What sort of information?" Father Fredrick inquired.

"I was looking for information about the giant demoness that had been around thirteen years ago," David answered.

Father Fredrick was clearly surprised by the answer. It was an odd request to ask about a giant demoness. "And why do you want to know about that wrenched monster?" Father Fredrick questioned.

"I was too young to remember what had happened, but I want to know about it. If there were to ever be another demon, I want to know about it and know how to be prepared," David explained.

Father Fredrick was silent for a moment, thinking about David's answer. Finally he replied, "Well, there is no need to worry about another giant demon, but I suppose it wouldn't hurt to tell you about the previous giant demoness to know the dangers of Hell. Here, let us sit down." David and Father Fredrick sat down in a pew and Father Fredrick started explaining to David what the giant demoness was, "What had attacked our town long ago was a giant demoness. It was a terrible wicked creature. A creature made of pure evil."

"Are all demons giants?" David asked.

"No, only ones from some realm called Felarya. I know little of this other realm, but Bowhan seemed to know much about it. It is a place where many creatures are giants compared to humans. All these giant beings are sentient, but they still eat humans with no regret. This giant demoness had all the terrible qualities of a demon, but also liked to eat smaller beings just for the fun of it. Plus, eating people seemed to give it pleasure, among other things. The giant demoness was also a succubus," Father Fredrick told David.

"A succubus?" David questioned never hearing the word before.

"A succubus is a demoness that has to mate with other beings to create demons. They are temptresses that are supposed to have the most beautiful bodies in order to lure men to them. They can even enter one's dreams to fulfill their needs," Father Fredrick explained, "This giant demoness was a succubus. It apparently tortured her victims by using them to pleasure herself sexually. It gave her pleasure being a giant compared to humans and some poor individuals were her toys, eaten, or crushed and tortured by her."

David was a little horrified by this. He was silent and thought about what Father Fredrick had said, "It was a succubus and it could enter people's dreams..." David began thinking about Morgana and how real she seemed. He also thought about her beauty and how she didn't seem to mind being naked. In his latest dream, he had told her where he lived and suddenly something came to his home the other night. "Could she be..." David started to wonder.

However, his thoughts were interrupted by Father Fredrick who asked, "Is the reason you are asking about the giant demoness is because of what Christopher has said? Because if it is, you don't have to worry about another giant demoness out there."

"Why do you think that?" David asked.

"Well, there hasn't been an attack in thirteen years, and Bowhan had killed the giant demoness. Christopher had been through a lot and lost his family to the demoness. He's tortured by his memories and continues believing the demoness is still alive," Father Fredrick answered.

"You don't think the demoness had a child?" David asked.

"Bowhan made sure there were no children and Christopher even admitted that he had never seen one while he was captured. There is no giant demoness out there, unless you believe differently or have any evidence that there could be one." Father Fredrick replied.
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